In Rain Lane, the poet describes a girl who is "as sad as a clove". The language of the poem is like a rain lane in the south of the Yangtze River, fluttering with the melancholy of drizzle. It implicitly implies the author's confusion, sadness and expectation, giving people a hazy and profound aesthetic feeling.
My Memory focuses on the narration of inner feelings, expresses an abstract emotion with various daily things, and expresses these intangible memories with symbolic images. The poet successfully shaped the abstract and concrete poetic image of "memory" with his kind and vivid brushwork. In the poem, the author gives his memory vivid life and becomes his "loyal friend". As far as the whole poem is concerned, the poet's memories are not good. When these memories come, the poet's mood is heavy and depressed, and he "sighs with tears". Memory "locking will never stop unless I cry or fall asleep sadly". Although the time recalled by the poet is sad, the poet "never hates it", not only because "memory is faithful to the poet", but also because "the poet is faithful to memory"-no matter what the memory is, it belongs to the poet. The value of the poet's life is contained in this kind of memory, so when we read the whole poem, we can't read the poet's rejection of memory at all. When sentimental memories emerge one after another, the poet is still willing to relive this sour taste.
Rain Lane was first praised by people, and an important aspect is its beautiful syllables. Ye Shengtao praised this poem as "opening a new era for the syllables of new poetry". Although he was somewhat praised, he was insightful when he first saw the beautiful syllables of this poem. Rain Lane consists of seven poems. The first section and the last section are exactly the same except that "meet" is changed to "float". In this way, the ending is repeated, and the same theme appears repeatedly in the poem, which strengthens the musical sense of the whole poem and also increases the expressive force of the poet's hesitation and disillusionment. There are six lines in each section of the whole poem, and the number of words in each line is different and uneven, and the rhyme is generally repeated in the lines not far apart. Bet two or three times per quarter, and there is no rhyme change from beginning to end. The whole poem is very short, and some short sentences also cut off the connection between words. However, some of the same words appear many times in rhyme, such as "Rain Lane", "Girl", "Fragrance", "Melancholy" and "Longing", which intentionally make a sound appear repeatedly in people's hearing. This creates a resounding melody and a smooth rhythm. It reads like a soft and thoughtful serenade. A lonely and painful recitation melody echoed repeatedly in the whole song, haunting people. In order to strengthen the musicality of the whole poem, the poet also absorbed some skills from foreign poems and made the same words meet alternately in the same poem. The repetition and repetition of this language, like the repetition of intertwined lyric phrases, sounds pleasant and harmonious, adding more lyrical color to the poem. When romantic free poetry and "crescent school" tofu dry wind prevailed, Dai Wangshu published "Beautiful Rain Lane", which opened up a new world of musical expression of new poetry.
My Memory is the first poem by the poet Dai Wangshu that does not depend on music. The whole poem does not arrange the verses in the new metrical style well, and there is no consistent flat rhyme. Poets rely on the inner emotional flow of poetry to construct a poetic form and cause a beating melody, thus making the whole poem orderly, vivid and profound. The whole poem seems to be arranged with it, without any sense of rhythm, but in fact, this arrangement of the poet only makes the poem express itself in the image of the poem: we seem to see the ups and downs of the poet's inner feelings. At the same time, this unrestrained wandering also reflects the obscurity and complexity of "My Memory". Therefore, although this poem seems to have no sense of rhythm from the external text, its musical beauty lies in its internal thinking and narrative logic.
? Rain lane gives readers more imagination and is more gentle and beautiful.
? My Memory is more emotional. The language of the whole poem is simple and sincere.
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