I know that children choose to promote weaving, and a lamp fell on the fence at night. Translation and Annotation of Ancient Poems, Ancient Scenery and Ancient Thoughts in Primary Schools
The rustling autumn wind blows the leaves of the phoenix tree, bringing a chill. The autumn wind blows from the river, making me miss my hometown when I am in a foreign land.
Several children at home are still playing cricket in high spirits! The light is still on in the dead of night, and I refuse to sleep.
The word "Jian" in Night Book is an ancient and modern word, but in this paper it means to see and see. So you should read "Jian" here. The understanding of the whole poem should be: (title) Write what you miss on a lonely night. The rustling autumn wind blows the leaves, bringing chills, and poets who are traveling abroad can't help but miss their hometown. I miss my beloved children the most. At this time, I may still be fighting crickets with great interest and refuse to sleep in the dead of night.
This poem interweaves the author's sadness, warmth, joy and concern. We can appreciate it from nine aspects to express the aestheticism of the ancient poem "What I saw in the night book".
1, lyrical by scenery, and artistic conception by scenery. Write a sentence or two about the natural environment, the trees are rustling, the cold sounds are bursting, and the autumn wind is Qiu Jiang, conveying the feeling of wandering and desolation; The last two sentences are nostalgia, and the children at home may still be playing cricket late at night. When I am lonely, I fantasize about my family. The scenery of Xiaosuo reminds me of the fun of playing. As the scene blends into emotion, the scene blends, sets each other off into interest, and the artistic conception is wonderful.
2, dynamic and static combination, with dynamic lining static. Autumn leaves, autumn wind, autumn sounds, Qiu Jiang, autumn boats, solitary lamps, urchins and cricket fighting are all vivid and lifelike. The fence fell into the hut and the night was dark. This is a quiet scene, it is so sad and cold, full of melancholy. The rustling leaves also inspired the poet to miss his hometown relatives at midnight in the silent late autumn.
3. Sorrow and joy are intertwined to cover up sadness with joy. Write a sad scene in one or two sentences, the autumn wind sweeps the leaves and the sky sends a chill; Say three or four words about love, choose at night to promote weaving, and think about love in different places. One is sad, the other is happy, the sadness and joy are hidden, and the sadness and joy are covered by joy, which shows the loneliness and helplessness of wandering around the world and the strong homesickness of wanderers.
4, virtual and real, reflecting the virtual with the real. One or two of the four sentences in the poem describe the real scene: the leaves are cold, the water is moving and the air is cool; Three or four sentences evoke imagination: the lights at night, the children watch cricket fighting. What you see and hear, bright or dark, set each other off. It is full of autumn sounds, autumn nights and homesickness. Reality is free, reality is free. Few words, endless meaning!
5, fascinated, far and near interaction. The poet suffers from the loneliness in the quiet night, and he has a heart attached to distant relatives. Although I am thousands of miles away, the scene of frolicking is still in front of me. The sound of cold leaves nearby is disturbing, and the family is happy to come. That thing, that scene, makes people sigh infinitely.
6, cold and warm, "cold" and "pick" vivid. The word "cold" is a pun, which has both the feeling of chilly autumn wind and the meaning of being stranded at the end of the world. The word "pick" in the details is very interesting. Write out the cricket fighting scenes in which children concentrate on playing, choose carefully, hold their breath and be suddenly enlightened, all in one "selection". "Pick out" people, "pick out" charm, and "pick out" the warmth of remembering loved ones!
7. "Move" and "know" in one go. Poetry uses fallen leaves to "send" the cold, and the cold sounds "move" the feelings, hug and miss the loved ones, and comfort the silence. "Motion" is the "bone" and "knowledge (thinking)" is the "heart" of the poem, which makes the whole poem rise and fall appropriately and Zhang Chi moderately.
8, metaphor, clear heart. The autumn wind on the river moves the guests, which implicitly uses the allusions of Hans Zhang's resignation. According to legend, Hans Zhang, an official living in Luoyang, missed his hometown when he saw the autumn wind, so he resigned and returned to his hometown, but he got his wish. "Autumn makes people sad" can better express the poet's feeling of being far away from home and full of homesickness.
Appreciate the autumn wind blowing across the river, and the buttonwood trees rustle, which makes people feel chilly. The sound of autumn wind can touch the homesickness of outsiders. Late at night, a child lit a lamp and looked for and caught crickets by the fence.
The migration of seasons and climate and the change of scenery are most likely to cause travelers' homesickness. Being in a foreign land, the author felt autumn in the quiet night and wrote this euphemistic poem.
This poem is about what you saw in the autumn night and expresses your homesickness. Wu Ye's phrase "chills" cleverly describes the keen feelings of travelers who go to Qiu Lai in summer.
Plants and flowers wither, which is a remarkable sight in autumn. In poetry, "Wu Ye" with phenological characteristics is often placed in a typical environment on a stormy night to express the sadness in autumn. Wei's poem "Autumn Night in Nangong, My Brothers and Students" wrote: "This is a stormy night, and I am unhappy." This artistic technique has been adopted.
This poem puts overlapping onomatopoeia words at the beginning of the sentence, which arouses readers' auditory images from the beginning, produces autumn images, and reflects the silence of autumn night with sound. Then use the word "send" to express movement in silence, and lead to "cold sound" in the rustling of falling leaves, which seems to contain biting cold; The method of hearing causing tactile synaesthesia renders the sadness of the environment.
The second sentence is followed by the word "autumn wind on the river", which not only points out the starting point of autumn wind, but also further sets off the cold atmosphere. The autumn wind has arrived, and people are in other places, which touches the homesickness. The word "send" and "move" are used vividly. The former means "shock" in autumn, while the latter means "sadness" in autumn.
The autumn wind aroused the loneliness of travelers. Hans Zhang, a native of A Jin, was an official in Luoyang. Seeing the autumn wind, he resigned and went home because he missed the water shield soup and bass in his hometown. The author of this poem heard the voice of autumn wind during his trip, which touched his feelings and disappointed him. These two sentences use "Wu Ye", "cold sound" and "autumn wind on the river" to describe the cold in autumn, but they are actually used to set off the desolation of the guests' mood. Then the word "move" reveals "guest feelings", and the scene is similar and natural, showing the depth of sadness.
On the surface, it seems that it has nothing to do with "guest feelings", but in fact, it is to use the happiness of children-carefree, to set off the loneliness and sadness of their own lives.
These two sentences, from the stadium to the outdoor, made a long-span jump. These two sentences are upside down, so they should be moved back and forth in the order of meaning. The poet's thoughts were so complicated that he couldn't sleep, so he turned and walked out of the house to dispel the lingering thoughts and leave behind his worries, but the night scene in front of him gave him a brand-new feeling.
"Autumn night promotes weaving, and the south neighbors rush to pound clothes" (Xie Tiao's Autumn Night). Isn't the flickering light between hedges in the vast darkness "picking children to promote weaving"? This carefree, lively and naive behavior is in sharp contrast with the poet's sad feelings and depressed mood.
Appreciation II Emotional Analysis
(1) The author expressed a feeling of homesickness.
One or two sentences in the poem say that the leaves of trees are flying, the cold sound is blowing, the autumn wind is rustling and the river boat is drifting, which effectively sets off the poet's sad mood of being in a foreign land and wandering around. Three or four sentences describing the life scenes of children playing tricks on crickets with burning lamps will naturally arouse the poet's association. He will remember that his childhood was so naive, romantic, happy and interesting; He will think of the warmth and beauty of his hometown; He will think of the voices and smiles of his relatives and friends, and feel at home, like returning to childhood.
(2) Poetry expresses the author's lonely feeling of living in a foreign country.
Write a sentence or two about the scenery, and use fallen leaves, autumn wind and cold to set off the desolation of wandering and loneliness. A river of autumn water, the sky is dark, and the ears are cold. The poet couldn't sleep all night. He must be depressed and his meaning is not smooth. Write three or four sentences about children catching crickets at night, which is very interesting, cleverly contrasts sadness and shows the loneliness and helplessness of living in a foreign country.
③ Poetry expresses the author's thoughts and feelings of missing childhood.
Looking at the whole poem, generally speaking, three or four sentences are seen by the poet. Children catch crickets at night with great interest, forgetting the autumn wind and chill, regardless of the fall of trees and the cold in Qiu Jiang, catching crickets at midnight with relish. That kind of obsession, that kind of caution, that kind of ups and downs of sensitivity, are all shown in one gesture. This cheerful and interesting life scene naturally evokes the poet's pursuit and nostalgia for childhood. One or two sentences can also be understood in this way. The autumn scenery, accompanied by rustling sounds and swaying leaves, reveals a sense of wandering and inexplicable melancholy, and also reflects the poet's nostalgia and yearning for the carefree childhood living in a foreign country.
Writing method
(1) by scenery lyrical, scene blend. All four sentences in the poem are about scenery. Write one or two sentences about the natural environment and three or four sentences about life scenes. The fallen trees are rustling, the cold sounds are bursting, and the autumn wind is Qiu Jiang, conveying the feeling of drifting and desolation; Playing tricks on cricket makes the child happy, revealing the meaning of getting carried away and forgetting the fish. A sadness and a joy, set each other off and become interesting, all of which are integrated into the environmental description without trace.
(2) Dynamic and static combination, with dynamic lining static. Autumn leaves, autumn wind, autumn sounds, Qiu Jiang, autumn lights, Qiu Er, autumn boats and autumn meaning are all vividly written, with light and shadow; Dark as ink, deep and unpredictable, endless darkness, this is quiet writing, quiet and cold, full of melancholy. Whistling wind and naughty children, these dynamic scenes skillfully reflect the deep silence in late autumn, and even arouse people's appreciation of the poet's sad and sleepless heart in the cold and silent night.
(3) Contrast sadness with joy, so that joy sets off sadness. One or two sentences describe the scenery, the autumn wind sweeps away the leaves, and it is freezing in the cold, which is a sad scene and conveys sadness; Writing three or four sentences about people, encouraging weaving in the middle of the night, and bright lights shining on the fence are a happy scene, spreading joy. Sadness and joy are mixed, and joy sets off sadness, which shows the loneliness, helplessness and sleeplessness of wandering wanderers.
(4) Express one's feelings and express one's feelings, and use allusions in secret. The autumn wind moving on the river secretly uses the allusions of Hans Zhang. According to legend, Hans Zhang, an official living in Luoyang, missed his hometown when he saw the autumn wind, so he resigned and returned to his hometown, but he got his wish. The poem conveys the poet's thoughts and feelings of being far away from home for a long time, unable to return home and missing his family.
(5) personification, synaesthesia and gracefulness. "The rustling leaves send cold sounds, and the autumn wind on the river moves guests' feelings", and "sending" and "moving" reflect feelings in things, giving the leaves and autumn wind a human modality. It seems that these poems of material state and emotion bring readers into an artistic conception of sending cold air and moving Qiu Jiang, which is fascinating and full of melancholy. The rustling leaves send cold sounds skillfully uses synaesthesia, urges the feeling of cold autumn with rustling sounds, and conveys tactile feelings with auditory images, which is meaningful.
⑥ Choose words carefully, and "cold" and "pick" are vivid. On both sides of the word "cold", there is a chilly and threatening feeling of autumn wind, which means the end of the world is stranded. The word "pick" in the details is very interesting. The child's concentration, sensitivity and delicacy, and the child's breathless observation, surprise and excitement are all in one "pick".
Creation background The autumn wind blows across the river, and the plane trees rustle, which makes people feel chilly. The sound of autumn wind can touch the homesickness of outsiders. Late at night, a child lit a lamp and looked for and caught crickets by the fence. The migration of seasons and climate and the change of scenery are most likely to cause travelers' homesickness. Being in a foreign land, the author felt autumn in the quiet night and wrote this euphemistic poem.
Ye Shaoweng, a poet in the mid-Southern Song Dynasty, was born in Longquan. The ancestral home is Jian 'an (now Jian 'ou, Fujian), surnamed Li, and the heir is Longquan (now Lishui, Zhejiang) Ye. The year of birth and death is unknown. He used to be a junior official in the imperial court. His knowledge came from Ye Shi, who lived in seclusion for a long time by the Qiantang West Lake. He had close contacts with Zhen and made friends with Ge. Ye Shaoweng
Ye Shaoweng, a poet in the mid-Southern Song Dynasty, was born in Longquan. The ancestral home is Jian 'an (now Jian 'ou, Fujian), surnamed Li, and the heir is Longquan (now Lishui, Zhejiang) Ye. The year of birth and death is unknown. He used to be a junior official in the imperial court. His knowledge came from Ye Shi, who lived in seclusion for a long time by the Qiantang West Lake. He had close contacts with Zhen and made friends with Ge. ? 55 poems and essays
Four yellow maiden flowers thrive on the road covered, and thousands of flowers bow and the branches are low. The butterflies in the flowers are dancing, and the soft yinger in freedom is just singing happily. -Tang Du Fu's "Looking for Flowers One Step by the River, Part VI", Part VI
Tang Dynasty: Du Fu
Four yellow maiden flowers thrive on the road covered, and thousands of flowers bow and the branches are low.
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Song Dynasty: Su Shi
Play Qingquan Temple in Qishui, next to the temple is Lanxi, and the stream flows west.
The buds just growing at the foot of the mountain are soaked in the stream, and the sand road between the pine trees is washed away by the rain. In the evening, the rain began to trickle down, and cuckoo calls came from the pine forest. (Mix Zuo Yi: Mix)
Who says life can't go back to adolescence? The water in front of the door can also flow west! Don't bemoan the passage of old age!
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Song Dynasty: Fan Chengda
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