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This is a proposition composition. The title "when the flowers bloom" is an image, but it contains certain philosophical significance. The key to the examination is to clarify the meaning of "flower" and accurately grasp the conditions of "flower opening". "Flowers" can be set as concrete things, either abstract or concrete, such as "wishes", "ethos", "ideals" and "moral fashion". "Bloom" is the best result of this thing's ultimate realization, and "then" in "then bloom" should be understood as "when" meets the conditions of "bloom".
The writer can express, show or reveal the law of the development of things and reflect the specific relationship between conditions and results through narration, lyricism or discussion. Writers with good literary literacy can give priority to writing essays or poems with strong literary colors; Of course, you can also consider writing a narrative to reflect the logical connection between "law" and things through an image theme; Those who choose to write argumentative essays can also write an article with complete structure and rigorous argumentation as long as they accurately define the connotation of the core concept "flower" and clarify the relationship between "flower" and related things.
Example 1
The flowers bloom luxuriantly.
The flowers are blooming, and the fragrance is floating everywhere, which is refreshing. What a wonderful thing it is!
However, the blooming of flowers requires conditions. As the saying goes, plum blossoms come from bitter cold. Yes, people often just marvel at the fragrance of flowers, but they don't think how much sweat and tears they have soaked when flowers are still leaves. The wonderful thing before flowering is "then". What an exciting thing it is. There was a faint fragrance on his face, and Wang Anshi discovered that this flower belonged to Ling Cold at that time. Beauty is fleeting, but Kawabata Yasunari keenly discovered the "sleepless flower" at that time.
Everything in the world, such as a small wish, a beautiful vision, and even a bizarre dream. When wishes come true, when dreams come true, people only see flowers and smiling faces, and only hear cheers and applause. How many people know what hardships and bitterness are hidden behind this?
Or Mencius put it well, "Therefore, the sky will drop on people, so we must first suffer from their aspirations, work hard on their bones and muscles, starve their skins, empty their bodies, and mess with their actions, so we can endure and benefit from not being able to." Our predecessors and present people have given us a good demonstration in this respect.
At that time, Sima Qian was humiliated but swallowed up, just "hating selfishness is endless." For decades, he devoted himself to writing in a hellish inhuman world and finally became history. Sima Qian's faith bloomed heavily and brilliantly.
At that time, Hawking in a wheelchair was paralyzed and completely unable to move, but every nerve in his brain was extremely active. With extraordinary willpower and superhuman strength, he made unremitting efforts to forge himself into the greatest "Einstein" at that time. Hawking's perseverance blooms amazingly.
At that time, 7 years and 2555 days, Phelps got up at 5 o'clock every morning to go into the water for training. What kind of hardship is this, and what kind of persistence is this! We can't imagine, and we dare not imagine. What we want to see is Phelps' ecstasy of winning eight gold medals at the Beijing Olympic Games and creating myths and miracles of the century. Phelps succeeded, and his success showed people a simple truth: genius comes from hard work and unremitting struggle. Phelps' struggle is shocking and shameful.
At that time, Li Bai was not valued by the imperial court, but he did not give up. A hymn is heroic "Oh, how can I solemnly bow and scrape to people of high rank and position"! And at that time, Tao Qian didn't like the corruption in officialdom, and the people were miserable, but he didn't have the profound words of self-harm. He sang the spirit of "Don't bend over when fighting for rice"!
Flowers bloom for a while, flowers bloom for a while. If people can go back to that time, maybe we will not only admire the flowers, but also admire, respect and be moved.
I hope beautiful flowers will bloom forever, and I hope successful flowers will be happy forever!
short review
The writing idea of this article is very clear. The author uses the method of association, from this to that, from flowers to people, to link "flowers" with people's wishes and pursuits, and by extension, to reveal the logical relationship between necessary conditions and concrete results. In writing, narrative and discussion are combined, concise and accurate. Rich examples and appropriate quotations also add a lot of color to the article, which shows that the author has a deep background and a rich brushwork.
Example 2
The flowers bloom luxuriantly.
The flower of success, people only envy her present brilliance! However, at the beginning, her bud was soaked with tears of struggle and shed blood rain of sacrifice. -Bing Xin
Flowers, what a beautiful word! Bloom, what an amazing success!
However, behind the flowers is the watering of blood and tears; Behind the flowering is hard struggle. Everything is just for the flowers to bloom at that time.
A delicate grass needs hard work to enjoy the caress of the sun and the moisture of the rain and dew, and finally brew amazing flowers. At that time, the flowers bloomed, which made all its efforts and endurance meaningful.
A person who lives in adversity needs selfless struggle to understand the meaning of life and enjoy the joy of embracing success. At that time, the flowers bloomed, and all his sweat and efforts were richly rewarded by life.
Just when Stephen Hawking was in his prime, full of ambition and bright future, he was paralyzed by a sudden illness and then became speechless. But did he give up? No, he gritted his teeth and "played" the swan song of the world with only two movable fingers. His success did not happen overnight. He understood the truth that "flowers bloom at that time", so he overcame the difficulties that ordinary people could not imagine. After hard exploration, the flower of success blooms more delicately.
When Phelps, a talented swimmer, broke seven world records in a row and won eight gold medals, people were only amazed at his unique swimming skills, but they didn't know the little-known story behind him. For seven years, I trained in the water every day. What kind of persistence is this? We can't imagine, and we dare not imagine! After hellish training, he stood on the highest podium with his head held high, and finally waited for the flowers to bloom.
Jamaica's "flying man" Bolt, Iraq's Dana Hussein, South Africa's "one-legged mermaid" Dutoit ... they constantly challenged the human beings at that time, just to wait until their "flowers" came out. However, behind their infinite scenery today, how much blood and tears have they poured and how much suffering have they suffered? Tagore said that only through hellish tempering can we forge the power to create heaven; Only bloody fingers can play the swan song of the world. There are too many times and too many flowers in life. ...
Flower, a very beautiful word, blooms, what an amazing success!
However, behind them are the watering of blood and tears and hard struggle. Everything, just for a belief-and then flowers bloom!
short review
This paper is short and pithy, punctuated from time to time, with clear writing ideas, coherent writing, reasonable paragraph arrangement, tight sentence cohesion and fluent language, which shows the author's strong language control ability. The novel and accurate selection of materials, strong persuasiveness and being good at quoting famous sayings and aphorisms are another major feature of this paper.
Example 3
The flowers bloom luxuriantly.
No matter what age, seventeen-year-old flowers are in full bloom and are blushing.
At that time, the flowers bloomed, but they were not the flowers of youth today at all. At the age of seventeen, she is so simple that modern girls dare not imagine.
At that time, we also pursued fashion, but not famous brands. The military cloth bag should not be too old, the elements of the military cloth are clean, and a pair of corduroy black square-toed shoes, preferably brown plastic soles. This is the fashionable girl at that time. All our black hair is braided into two braids, thick or thin, long or short. No one's hair will be unkempt, otherwise it will be called "bad girl" by classmates. Although the tone is too single for a girl of 17 years old, we are not depressed. We all have ten answers recommended by the questioner, praised and trampled. What's your comment on this answer? Put away comments//high quality or satisfaction or special types or recommended answers dottimewindow.iperformance & window.iperformance.mark ('c _ best',+newdate); Lawyer recommendation service: If your problem has not been solved, please describe your problem in detail and provide free professional consultation through Baidu Legal Pro. Other similar problems 2010-11-18. Who can help me write my composition? Proposition composition "Flowers bloom at that time"! Urgent … thank you, 222017-12-15. Hua Kai's composition outline was162014-02-13. Ask for three narratives! More than 600 words! The topic is that flowers bloom more than in spring 120 12-04-04. 220 13-08- 17 "when flowers bloom" composition describes the early summer breeze of 320 14- 10-22(60 minutes). At that time, the flowers were in bloom, and you walked past my window, and there were bursts of fragrance. Even the butterfly stopped to admire my heart12016-04-17. How to write the inscription of this composition? 2020-06- 13 Write a composition and a narrative on the theme of "Flowers at that time". & gt recommended for you: F.context('cmsRight', [{'URL':'/d01373f082025aaf511aa256e9edab64034f1a07? x-BCE-process = image % 2f resize % 2Cm _ lfit % 2Cw _ 450% 2Ch _ 600% 2c limit _ 1% 2f quality % 2Cq _ 85% 2f format % 2Cf _ auto '， ' contractId':'A24KA00562 '，}，{ ' URL ':/builder/bjh-activity/articlesTask？ taskId = 1598082 & aside = 0 & footer = true & from = 0 '，' src ':'/203 FB 80 e 7 bec 54 e 773 ea 0680 ab 389 b 504 fc 26 a2d？ x-BCE-process = image % 2f resize % 2Cm _ lfit % 2Cw _ 450% 2Ch _ 600% 2c limit _ 1% 2f quality % 2Cq _ 85% 2f format % 2Cf _ auto '，' contractId ':' '，}，{ ' URL ':/s？ word = % E6 % AC % A7 % E6 % B4 % B2 % E6 % 9D % AF & sa = searchpromo _ ozb _ zhidao _ tuijian '，' src ':'/3 BF 33 a 87 e 950352 AAF 5 df 4954 143 fbf2b 2 1 18 b6b？ x-BCE-process = image % 2f resize % 2Cm _ lfit % 2Cw _ 450% 2Ch _ 600% 2c limit _ 1% 2f quality % 2Cq _ 85% 2f format % 2Cf _ auto '，' contractId ':' '，}])； Is Huaqiang North's second-hand mobile phone reliable? Why is the cost of cancer treatment getting higher and higher? The price of electric cars has dropped many times. Is the quality guaranteed? What impact will the "network toilet" have? I recommend f.context ('recbrand', [{"img": "\/86D6277F9E2F07083523F69DFB 24B 899A901F20d? x-BCE-process = image % 2f resize % 2Cm _ lfit % 2Cw _ 450% 2Ch _ 600% 2c limit _ 1% 2f quality % 2Cq _ 85% 2f format % 2Cf _ auto "，" url":"/hm.js？ 6859 ce 5a af 00 FB 00387 e 6434 E4 FCC 925 "； var s = document . getelementsbytagname(" script ")[0]； s.parentNode.insertBefore(hm，s)； })(); window . TT = 1720690552；