Composition title: Mom takes a bath
Keywords: Mom is in the fifth grade of elementary school 200 words
Word count: 200 words composition
This article is suitable for: The fifth grade of primary school
Source of the composition:
This composition is a 200-word composition about the fifth grade of primary school. The title is: "Mom Takes a Bath". Everyone is welcome to contribute. Huh-huh-huh-huh-huh, what's this sound? Oh, it turned out to be my mother taking a bath. The sound was like the sound of rain, but also like the sound of a waterfall. The sound was crisp and pleasant to my ears. Why did the sound of water stop? Is it because the rain stopped or the river stopped flowing? Comments from famous teachers: The young author can learn from the ordinary. He is really a thoughtful person who collects materials from his daily life. The poem describes the mother's bathing. The author mainly writes it from the perspective of hearing, and uses appropriate rhetorical techniques to compare the sound of the mother's bathing to the sound of rain and the flowing waterfall, which makes the poem appear More lively. The young author turns life into poetry and brings readers a different kind of enjoyment.
(Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang Yunlian) 2010-2-23 20:02:00