Read the following poem and answer as required. (8 points)
Rainstorm Song Huayue
The black clouds in oxtail pour thick ink, and the wind and rain blow the axle.
The surging waves instantly rolled up the beach, and a hundred thousand troops roared down the waterfall.
The shepherd boy lives in Xixi Canal and invades Niumuxi North.
Rushing across the stream in the rain, the rain suddenly cleared and the mountains were green.
(1) How effective are the words "Juan" and "Hou" in the third and fourth sentences? Please analyze this poem. (2 points)
(2) Please appreciate the sentence "The rain suddenly clears, the mountains are clear and the waters are beautiful" in combination with the whole poem. (3 points)
(3) Some people say that the fifth and sixth sentences of this poem can be placed at the beginning. What do you think? Why? (3 points)
Reference answer:
14. A: (1) "Juan" visually describes the rapid situation when a shower strikes. "Roar" describes the momentum of showers from the perspective of hearing.
(2) "Sudden Sunny" writes that the rain comes and goes quickly, and the poem disappears. "The mountain is green" describes the changes of the scenery before and after the rain, which implies the shepherd boy's relaxed mood because the rain stopped.
(3) Not good. The sudden arrival of the rainstorm at the beginning and the abrupt ending echo each other, which reflects the artistic ingenuity of the author's layout. If the fifth and sixth sentences are put at the beginning, the shepherd boy becomes the focus of description, which dilutes the artistic effect of the poem.
All right. The first is to write about the carefree situation of the shepherd boy, to set off the tense scene of sudden heavy rain, to provide readers with a reading perspective and enhance the immersive artistic effect. According to the present order, it is slightly abrupt in expression.
Analysis: (1) This topic examines the knowledge of "refining words" in "appreciating poetry".
When you answer, you must first insist on using words. Any Chinese character doesn't matter whether it is good or bad, but it shows a high level when it enters a specific context. So the so-called good use of a word means that a word plays a good role in a sentence. And sentence analysis. Because words and sentences are inseparable, when appreciating the beauty of words, we must analyze them in relation to the corresponding sentences. The answer should have the following parts: formality or rhetoric, or flexible use, or skills. The content should analyze the theme of expression; The effect can be analyzed from the image in the poem (the poet himself or others in the poem), and how the effect is expressed from the reader's point of view.
(2) This topic examines the knowledge of "refining sentences" in "appreciating poetry".
When analyzing a sentence, we should grasp the key words in the sentence, such as "sudden sunshine" and "green" in this topic, and dig deep into its connotation and function.
(3) This topic examines the language expression knowledge of "conception and thinking" in Appreciation of Poetry.
Although this kind of exercise is subjective to some extent, we must never abandon mainstream analysis and expert views. Analysis should be combined with the whole poem, overall consideration, straighten out the whole poem thinking, good or bad.
Appreciation: This is a landscape poem. Write a spectacular summer rain in the countryside in the eyes of a shepherd boy, full of life interest. The dark clouds at the oxtail are like thick ink, and the wind and rain at the oxhead are like water. In an instant, the turbulent waves rolled onto the beach, just like a thousand troops fighting, roaring like waterfalls, and thunder bursts, which made people shudder! The shepherd boy lives in Xixi Bay and rides an ox to north beach in the morning. I hurried across the stream to the village in the rain, but I didn't expect the rainstorm to suddenly stop and the mountain to be green again. The language style of this poem is very simple. Easy-to-understand metaphors make people feel simple and fresh, and plain language combinations are very interesting in life. The outstanding impression of this poem is a word "suddenly". The rainstorm came suddenly and went suddenly. The author described this spectacular scenery from the constant transformation of vision and hearing. The wonder of summer weather changes is naturally revealed in the author's pen, which makes people exclaim after reading it.
torrential rain
Song Kazuki Watanabe musician
The black clouds in oxtail pour thick ink, and the wind and rain blow the axle.
The surging waves instantly rolled up the beach, and a hundred thousand troops roared down the waterfall.
The shepherd boy lives in Xixi Canal and invades Niumuxi North.
Rushing across the stream in the rain, the rain suddenly cleared and the mountains were green.
This is a landscape poem. It is about the spectacular summer rain in the countryside: a shepherd boy who lives in Xixi rode an ox to the northwest of Xixi early in the morning to graze. When grazing, the dark clouds suddenly rolled and the wind and rain suddenly came. The shepherd boy hurried across the stream in the rain and returned to the village southwest, but the rain suddenly cleared up and the mountains turned green again.
The author skillfully mentioned the sudden storm scene to the beginning, which was abrupt and thrilling. "pour thick ink", which means the black of the cloud; The "car" that "turns the axle" is a waterwheel. The waterwheel scooped water and the axle turned over to make a sound. It is used here to describe the sound of wind and rain. One is metaphorical color, and the other is metaphorical sound. One is to write that the dawn has not arrived in Shanghai; One is to write that the storm has come. The distance between them is only between the bull's head and the oxtail, which highlights the characteristics of summer rain.
Three or four sentences further use a variety of metaphors to write the trend of the wind and rain. The word "instantly" is fierce, and the voice of "100,000 troops" is very strong. "Surging waves are rolling on the beach", which is a metaphor for the surge of rain through the surging tide. "The roar of the army" means "the sound of the army" and "the sound of the wind and rain". The last three sentences are complementary. "Xixi" should refer to the southwest and "Xibei" should refer to the northwest, which is the so-called intertextuality in rhetoric. The shepherd boy walked to the southwest against the wind and rain, so it was raining in the cow's head, and the cow was just a dark cloud. Point it out clearly and make it necessary. What is especially wonderful is that the fourth sentence suddenly turns around and writes about the wonders of rain, Yangshan and Qingshan, as well as the rapid changes in summer.
The author's description is spectacular, heroic, turning freely, using spoken English, simple and fresh, full of life breath.
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