1 Reading aloud: The full text * * has a total of 18 natural paragraphs. We ask nine students to read two paragraphs each, paying attention to reading in the usual way. Let's get familiar with the text again, ask the whole class to correct their pronunciation and orthography, and talk about the advantages and disadvantages of their reading aloud. Correct pronunciation of comments: ask a few comments first, and then look up some phonetic symbols.
2 thinking: please briefly summarize the main content of the article: ask questions after thinking, (can say one or two words of praise and encouragement)
Abstract: This text is rich in content and fragmentary in materials. It doesn't concentrate on one thing like "walking", but writes from the past to the present with the thought of "I", never being born to five years old, and writes interesting, affectionate and meaningful things in detail or slightly. So as to show the true, beautiful and interesting image of his family. We can roughly summarize the contents of this article as follows (with the deepening of the lecture, write it on the blackboard at the right time):
Part I (L-4): The concept, birth and naming of "I".
The second part (5- 10): the family "moral education" background in which I grew up.
The third part (11-13): The knee joint relationship of four people in my family.
The fourth part (14- 18): maternal love "I"; I love my mother too.
3. Thinking: On the basis of understanding the content of the text, write the central idea.
Thinking, discussing, asking questions and summarizing: From the perspective of my son, this paper wrote some trivial things about a person's family life, showing the democratic, harmonious and happy atmosphere and vivid and healthy interest in this family life.
4. Discussion: What are the advantages of the author writing this article with his son as the first person?
(Students discuss after thinking, and the teacher gives explanations and hints:)
Reference: There are at least three advantages. First, observing life from a child's perspective can make life particularly simple and beautiful, and make the works full of purity and truth. Second, describe life in a child's tone, so that the language of the work is full of childlike innocence and childlike interest, which is refreshing. Thirdly, using children as narrators to organize materials gives them greater structural freedom. Because readers don't ask how rigorous and perfect a child's thinking is, as long as it is roughly the same.
It can be seen that writing with children as the first person has many advantages. Many mature writers have tried to conceive and write works with children as the first person, thus making their works have a unique perspective and style. We are all healthy and pure children. We should be loyal to our hearts, write our own lives, say what we want to say, and resolutely abandon lies and cliches. As long as we observe and feel life with a healthy and lively childlike innocence, we will certainly be able to write a lively and childlike composition.
5. Question: Feel understanding. Feel the beauty of this passage. Students should look for it first and explain the reasons. Teachers should give affirmation in due course:
Reference: Chinese learning has a very important basic skill, that is, learning a language. This article is vivid, vivid and interesting. Let's feel some wonderful sentences in the text together.
(1) "My aunt is short of breath:' My sister has gone through a lot of hardships, even if she keeps a cockroach, you have to applaud! The sentence "even if you have a cockroach" is an interesting and lovely exaggeration, which shows menstruation's "shortness of breath" and shows his extreme sympathy for his mother and his dissatisfaction and ridicule for his father. Sentences are full of life interest.
(2) "Grandma can't recognize it, and one vote is rejected." "One-vote veto" in the sentence is a political term with the characteristics of the times. Used in family life, it is very humorous and shows grandma's lofty position in the family.
(3) "Grandma came home with joy to announce the news" clearly only said a small thing, but used such a serious word as "announcing the news", which caused humor. At the same time, it also shows that grandma is a little complacent about the cleverness and achievements of her children and grandchildren (of course, grandma shows human nature, and we can't criticize her).
summary
Shu Ting is a poet. Her poems are beautiful, meaningful, passionate and romantic. And her prose is as passionate, romantic and beautiful as her poetry, which makes people feel beautiful and passionate after reading it. I hope that each of our classmates can love life as much as the poet Shu Ting, understand all kinds of interests in ordinary family life, and be grateful for even hard life. Then, we will be a happy person.