Walking into the Journey to the West, I saw the Monkey King's arrogance in the Heavenly Palace. I stopped the seven fairies and ate all the peaches in Taolin. I ran to the Heavenly Palace, disturbed the flat peach pageant of the Queen Mother, drank fairy wine, ate the old gentleman's elixir, stole the fruit, and gave the fairies the wrong direction. When I think of littering, littering and shopping at home, I can't help shivering when I see my mother's angry face like the Queen Mother. I continued to browse and saw "Monkey King Thrice Defeats the Skeleton Demon" in the Monkey King. He protected Master again and again, hit monsters, and sometimes got angry with Master. I admire Wukong's persistence in fighting monsters, and I am ashamed of Wukong's stubbornness. Think about it, isn't this me? I never said no to my homework, which made me smile proudly, but it also made my mother sad and even cry because of big and small things, and I lowered my head again.
I followed the Monkey King and begged Guanyin Bodhisattva to help me exorcise demons. Let's go to the monster cave to fight demons. We went to Huaguo Mountain with the Monkey King to drink spring water, pick flowers and look for trees and fruits ... Finally, four men and women in Journey to the West experienced 81 difficulties, beat Hong Haier, borrowed a banana fan, beat spider essence and so on. , really become a Buddha. Think again, the Monkey King in this Journey to the West is my body body double. My master is like my mother. I stayed with my mother, who taught me knowledge. Sometimes my stubborn monkey king quarrels with my master and breaks his heart, but I don't know.
This journey to the West has written my heart and let me know that if I learn how to persist in fighting monsters like the Monkey King and be loyal to "Master", victory is ahead. Masterpieces are my guides, guiding me to the right path. Masterpieces let me learn to be a man, learn to do things, learn to be a masterpiece, be my mentor, and be the best cleaner when my mind is "sick"! I have loved reading since I was a child, especially China's four classical novels. I have appreciated Zhuge Liang's wit, Song Wu's bravery and the Monkey King's magical power. No matter how many times I read famous books, I will never get tired of them. This time, I entered the masterpiece again.
2. An example of a composition on the topic of desire is "life and death are fundamental, and desire comes first". Desire is an integral part of human nature, and it is innate.
It is a release form of instinct, which constitutes the most intrinsic and basic element of human behavior. Driven by desire, people constantly occupy objective objects, thus forming a certain relationship with the natural environment and society. Through the more or less satisfaction of desire, as the subject, people master the object and environment, and reach the same with them.
In this sense, desire is the fundamental driving force for people to transform the world and themselves, so it is also the driving force for human evolution, social development and historical progress. But as Freud pointed out: "Instinct is determined by history.
"As an instinctive structure, desire, whether physical or psychological, can not surpass the historical structure, and its function changes with the changes of historical conditions. Therefore, the effectiveness and necessity of desire are limited, satisfaction is not absolute, and there are always new desires emerging one after another.
"Because of the insatiable desire, the excessive release of desire will cause destructive power. Schopenhauer said that if the desire is too strong and intense, it is no longer just an affirmation of one's own existence, on the contrary, it will further deny or cancel the existence of others.
It is unreasonable to use "providence" or "justice" to cancel or suppress others' desires, but it is also foolish to praise and indulge them too much. Desire is not a pure and absolute thing, it needs rational regulation, and it can never be the only driving force for the development of civilization as some people claim.
3. How to use the "example method" in composition? Liu Xifeng, No.2 Experimental Middle School, Zhecheng County, Henan Province, zip code: 476200.
The method of demonstrating with typical cases is called case method. As the saying goes, "Facts speak louder than words." An argumentative essay with sufficient and conclusive examples can make the argument stand firm and convincing. The application of examples plays an important role in reversing the phenomena of abstract reasoning, empty preaching, empty talk and making things out of nothing in our usual compositions.
Example method is a powerful demonstration method, which is easy to learn and master.
When learning examples, we should master the language structure and common types of examples.
The language structure of an example method usually needs to include three parts:
The first part is the introduction part, or the introduction part, which plays the role of citing examples, summarizing paragraphs and meanings, and taking on relevance. Some introductions are the central arguments and sub-arguments of the article.
The second part is the case department, which quotes cases and demonstrates opinions, and is the main part of examples.
The third part is the evaluation department, which laments the cited examples or comments, or points out the significance or summarizes the call.
Let's give an example to illustrate.
In fact, throughout the ages, there are countless examples of arrogance before a fall. Fu Cha, the king of Wu, was proud and despised the enemy, which enabled Gou Jian, the king of Yue, to make a comeback. Chu overlord is arrogant, making the world gain and loss; After the uprising army invaded Beijing in the late Ming Dynasty, the Eight Banners Army was able to invade the Central Plains because many people were proud of their achievements and coveted comfort. We should learn from this fact and lesson.
This is a sample part of an article called Guan Yu's Thoughts. The part that draws a straight line in the article is the introduction part. "Pride goes before a fall" summarizes the general idea of the examples cited, and "too numerous to mention" leads to the following examples. "Actually" has the function of inheriting the above. The middle part is the case department, which lists the historical facts of the failure of three arrogant people. Finally, the commentary department warned people to learn from historical facts. This example is preceded by a quotation and followed by a conclusion. Introduction, examples and comments are integrated.
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There are many methods, which are demonstrated by typical cases, and the contents are summarized and concrete; In terms of quantity, there are examples; Formally speaking, it is narrative and rhetoric. Such as "talk often":
4. Write a composition of more than 400 words in the form of letters, which is a question of honesty.
Honesty is thunder, which shakes people's hypocritical souls.
That happened two days ago. I remember that day, I went to the mall to buy daily necessities and suddenly saw a food stall. I went to have a look. There are so many snacks that I am dazzled, my mouth is watering and my stomach is screaming unconsciously. There are delicious sausages, melon seeds and butter biscuits. At this moment, I remembered that I had eaten all the snacks in the refrigerator. I can't help but want to buy some bags of food. ...
I asked my grandpa who bought snacks, "Grandpa, how much is a pack of snacks?" Grandpa said kindly, "One yuan a pack, three yuan four packs." I took out three yuan from my pocket and said to my grandfather, "I'll buy four bags." Grandpa took the money and skillfully wrapped the snacks. Probably there were too many people and noisy life at that time, which made grandpa dizzy and gave me an extra bag. I saw all this, but I didn't stop it. I was flattered and thought it was cheap. After returning home, I took out my snacks and studied them carefully, but the more I looked at them, the more wrong I was. I regret not reminding grandpa that I want to send the snacks back. People misunderstand me and think I am a bad boy, which is terrible. I had a fierce struggle in my heart, and finally I made up my mind that no matter what happened, I would send the snacks back. The next day after school, I went to find a stall, but he was gone. I ran to the nearby street to look for it, but I couldn't find the booth. That grandpa ...
Although it took me a long time, it made me understand the truth that "honesty is golden". We must be honest, and only honesty can win the trust of others.
How to write a diary composition in a novel way is one of the important factors to get high marks in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. Therefore, the following new composition forms are selected: 1. "Question" composition. "Question-type" composition is a form of composition in which each part of the text is marked with a subtitle. For example, the perfect composition "Wandering in the Mirror" in the examination room uses the words "happiness", "anger", "sadness" and "happiness" as four subtitles. This composition is clear and orderly. Second, "net post" composition is a new composition style in recent years. It is a composition style based on the way people post and reply to conversations on blogs. For example, Farewell to Inferiority is a perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination. Because there are many famous blogs gathered here, they come from all over the world to post blog posts on the topic of "How to bid farewell to inferiority complex". At the beginning, Paganini, Helen and Hawking wrote stories about saying goodbye to inferiority. Finally, the author uses his blog to discuss the topic. The writing style of "net posts" is flexible and free. Third, the writing style of "diary" is written in the form of "diary". For example, the full-mark composition calendars are "1 June 30th, 987", "1September, 9921day", "June 27th, 2000" and "March 20th, 2003", which describe several unforgettable fragments in my growing experience, namely ". This form is suitable for writing articles that take place on different dates. Fourth, the "epistolary" composition is written in the form of letters. For example, the perfect composition "Thank you letter from the angel of love" is written in the form of letters. Give people a sense of freshness. This kind of composition can easily express their feelings. Fifth, the composition of "experimental report" is written in the form of "experimental report" in applied style. By explaining the name, purpose, supplies and steps of the experiment, we summarize the experimental reaction formula, draw a conclusion and complete the expression of the theme of the article. For example, the perfect composition "Experimental Report on Communication Conditions" revolves around "communication" in the form of "experimental report", which vividly expounds a truth: if you want to make progress and get happiness in communication, the condition must be sincerity, and only by sincere communication can you have real friends. Written in the form of "experimental report", you can receive intuitive, objective and real artistic effects. Sixth, the type of "product description". This is a composition written in the form of "product description", which includes the drug name, main components, properties, pharmacological effects, usage and dosage, precautions, approval number, expiration date and manufacturer. The magical effect of "love", a good medicine to heal human emotional trauma and promote the relationship between people, is completely deconstructed and interpreted. It is novel and unique. Seven. "Mathematical proof type". This is a composition written with mathematical "proof questions". For example, life is like a dye vat. From the beginning, tell readers what "dye vat" means and put forward the argument that "life is like a dye vat". Then in the "proof" part, we used two typical and powerful examples, such as the physical evidence "Crazy Fish" and the witness "Indian Wolf Child". Finally, we naturally come to the conclusion that "different' lives' have different effects on people, so life will be different. Declare the proven "proposition" and reveal the great significance of the argument proposition in the form of "author's suggestion". Writing in this form can make the composition appear clear and structured. Limited by space, it is impossible to show the above-mentioned types of composition here. Students can find the corresponding composition style in composition newspapers and books according to the introduction to try to imitate. When writing the senior high school entrance examination, we should choose the corresponding form according to the content needs, and strive to be "harmonious"
6. How to write a composition? How to write a composition with examples? First of all, you can clearly express your thoughts and feelings, and then you can express your best words in your composition. On this basis, if you can have some novel ideas or novel expressions, you can use them appropriately.
You can't just go hunting Write your own real feelings and opinions when writing chapters.
Advocate writing something in everyone's heart, something that everyone doesn't write. "Only what you have experienced, write to have true feelings.
Because there is such a true feeling, it is something that I have thought about and experienced after writing it. Such things are very valuable things in life, and writing them will win readers. Second, a variety of composition writing skills: a, narrative-four-paragraph description method 1, "choose to go deep": describe people, things and things in detail, not just mention them; It is better to describe a few things in detail than to mention a lot hastily.
For example, if someone is fat, don't mention such unimportant things as his long hair. 2. "Make good use of metaphor": Use "metaphor"
For example, "He is tall. His extraordinary height almost touches the ceiling, and even the longest bed is not big enough. It is simply a personal tower.
Third, "idioms and proverbs": can enrich the article. Adding idioms or proverbs at appropriate times can make the finishing point. Of course, remember not to overdo it. There is no other way to add idioms to the whole article, but to recite idioms, proverbs, celebrity quotations, meditation, poems and so on.
Fourth, "make good use of examples": there are many explanations, so it is better to give an actual example. For example, after describing how much Xiao Mingcan ate, I immediately gave an example: "Once, Xiao Ming and I went to the night market after dinner, and found that he ate three plates of stinky tofu, a bowl of pig blood soup, a cup of mung bean paste and a pack of egg cakes.
Oh, my God, when he got home, his mother asked him if he wanted to have a midnight snack. He nodded and said, "OK, OK, I'm hungry again! In this way, the article must be much more vivid and interesting! B, argumentative-explanatory syllogism 1. The characteristic of explanatory writing is to explain what the topic is. Take "my troubles" as an example to explain what my troubles are. 2. Explanatory text can be divided into three parts: solving problems, explaining and summarizing expectations.
Third, the first paragraph is to solve the problem, that is, to roughly explain the topic, give examples, and associate it all around. Taking this topic as an example, it is necessary to explain what "worry" is, what different troubles different people have, and what influence it will have.
Fourth, the second paragraph is explanation, which should be explained in depth according to your own ideas, viewpoints, experiences and solutions. It can be divided into several items according to your personal opinion. Taking this topic as an example, we might as well break it down into several paragraphs to elaborate. After explaining, don't forget to add solutions and strategies. For example, "My biggest worry is playing the piano. Every time I practice …, I think in order to overcome this "sound barrier", I must …
(The first worry and solution strategy) Secondly, the application problem of mathematics, for me. The teacher suggested that I ...
(The second worry and solution strategy) The last small worry is that I am too short, and I am in the sixth grade. After seeing the doctor several times, I decided.
(The third worry and solution strategy) 5. In the last paragraph, talk about your thoughts, feelings and expectations. C, essay-practical four-paragraph essay 1. The essay of filial piety is that China's children must be full of love and hate. What they love is that this is our unique social system in China, the beginning of social welfare system and the best demonstration of social division of labor; What I hate is that this kind of essay is the easiest to flow, the same, and there is no place.
However, many people have written about this "sour" topic, but not many people can write it well. Second, the biggest taboo of essays is "insincere". Say something you don't necessarily think is right, and cobble together an unintelligible article. It's about thinking with your brain and really thinking from your own point of view.
Third, practice the four-paragraph theory: (1) Problem solving: What does this topic mean? Need I explain more? What are the sayings in ancient and modern China and abroad? What idioms, proverbs and allusions are there? (2) Reflection: What is the status quo of the general public and myself? Are there any good examples at all times and in all countries? (3) Strategy: How to practice this topic? Can I do that? What can be done? (4) Expectation: What do I expect from this topic? How do you feel? Do you have any heartfelt words? Who can you quote to encourage yourself and become the motto of continuing to work hard? Fourthly, this four-paragraph article on law is stable and rich in structure. If some ingenious ideas are added to the connection of large sections, people will feel that Kan Kan is talking, and some history or allusions will be more interesting. But what's the last step? It is to have "sincerity, truthfulness and true feelings" behind it.
7. The form and novel style of the composition is one of the important factors to get high marks in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. So here are some new forms of composition.
First, the "headline" composition.
"Question-type" composition is a form of composition in which subtitles are marked before the contents of various parts of the text. For example, in the examination room, the perfect composition "Wandering in the Mirror" uses the words "joy", "anger", "sorrow" and "joy" as four subtitles. This composition is clear and orderly.
Second, the "net post" composition.
This is a new writing style that has emerged in recent years. It is a composition style written according to the way people post and reply to conversations on blogs. For example, the perfect composition "Farewell to Inferiority" in the senior high school entrance examination is a "net post type" composition. The website "Today, Say goodbye to inferiority complex" is very lively. Why? Because there are many famous blogs. They come from all over the world and post blog posts on how to bid farewell to inferiority complex. At the beginning, Paganini, Helen and Hawking all wrote stories about saying goodbye to inferiority. Finally, the author discussed this topic with his own blog. The writing method of "net post" composition is flexible and free.
Third, "diary-style" composition.
This is a composition style written in the form of diary. For example, the perfect composition calendar, entitled 1 June 30th, 987,1September, 9921day, June 27th, 2000 and March 20th, 2003, wrote four events in four years, and described several unforgettable fragments of my growing experience with the line of love, namely "kindergarten".
Fourth, "epistolary" composition.
This composition is written in the form of letters. For example, the perfect composition "Thank you letter from the angel of love", writing a topic composition in the form of letters, gives people a sense of freshness. This kind of composition is easy to express your feelings.
Five, "experimental report" composition.
This is a composition written in the form of "experimental report" in applied style. Explain the name, purpose, supplies and steps of the experiment, describe the experimental phenomenon, summarize the experimental reaction formula and draw some conclusions to complete the expression of the theme of the article. For example, the perfect composition "Experimental Report on Communication Conditions" vividly expounds a truth in the form of "experimental report" around the topic of "communication": if you want to make progress and get happiness in communication, the condition must be sincerity, and only by sincere communication can you have real friends. Writing in the form of "experimental report" can receive intuitive, objective and real artistic effects.
Six, "product description" type.
This is a composition written in the form of a "product manual". For example, the composition "Description of Love" is written from the aspects of drug name, main components, nature, pharmacological effects, usage and dosage, matters needing attention, approval number, expiration date, production enterprise, etc., and the magical efficacy of love, a drug that can heal human emotional trauma and promote interpersonal relationships, is completely deconstructed and interpreted. Novel and chic.
Seven, "mathematical verification type".
This is a composition written with mathematical "proof questions". For example, life is like a dye vat, which is a perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination. At the beginning, it tells readers what it means to dye a vat with "known" and "verified", and puts forward the proposition that "life is like a dye vat". Then, in the "proof" part, two typical and powerful examples of physical evidence "Crazy Fish" and witness "Indian Wolf Child" are used. In the end, it is natural to draw the conclusion that "different' lives' have different influences on people, and life is like that dye vat, and your life will show what color you jump into", declare the "proposition" established, and reveal the great significance of demonstrating this proposition in the way of "author's suggestion". Writing in this form can make the article appear clear and organized.
Due to space limitations, it is impossible to show the above composition here. Students can find the corresponding composition style in composition newspapers and books according to the introduction to try to imitate. When writing the senior high school entrance examination, we should choose the corresponding form according to the content needs, and strive to "combine form and content perfectly".
8. Please help me find an essay. 1. Read carefully in bold, and you will find that the topic is whether humility is necessary under the conditions of market economy, and whether humility is important or enterprising.
From the perspective of affirmation, negation and dialectics, there are three views as follows: 1. Under the market economy, of course, we must make progress, but we still need the virtue of modesty. Because this virtue has its important role and significance.
In the market economy, it is important to forge ahead, and humility is out of date. In the market economy, modesty and enterprising have their own values. When you are modest, you should be modest and enterprising. There is no conflict between them.
In addition, the concept must be clear. For example: modesty: modesty+concession, modesty refuses to occupy, accepts or takes the lead.
The way of doing things. Modesty: open-minded, not complacent, willing to accept criticism.
A spirit. Concession: Concession, compromise with the other side.
Tolerance: tolerate concessions. The above four concepts have their own emphases, so we must not confuse them when discussing them.
Enterprising: strive to move forward and make a difference. Main error in the exam: 1. On the functions of various virtues in market economy.
2. Only one aspect is mentioned in the full text, and the other aspect is not mentioned at all. 3. The discussion is completely divorced from the material, and the market economy is not mentioned at all, which is not targeted.
4. I didn't grasp the intention of the proposer, and refined the topic "Any problem, different people will have different opinions". Second, the idea of inspiration must be modest: 1. Being gentle, courteous and frugal is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation, and giving is humility.
We learn from Confucius (being gentle, respectful and frugal), Lao Tzu (not daring to be the first in the world), Kong Rong (making pears), Lin Xiangru (making contributions), Yao Shun (abdicating), Huo Qubing (making contributions, why the Huns are invincible) and Qian Zhongshu (making fame and fortune). China's charm can also be seen from many etiquette. For example, educated people in China are modest and courteous in social activities and live in harmony.
Modesty still plays an important role in today's society. Can harmonize the relationship between people; On many occasions, such as getting on the bus and eating, humility can maintain good order; In international communication, moderate humility can reduce the alert psychology of other countries, but it is conducive to establishing a good image and developing relations.
Humility and enterprising are not in conflict. First, the scope of application is different.
Modesty belongs more to the etiquette category, and enterprising belongs to the work category. In fact, Zhang's material humility does not mean that he will be humble at work.
Second, blindly making progress will hit a wall, but appropriate modesty may be a deliberate supplement and adjustment. For example, the famous economist Nash pointed out that in a competitive group, the result of competition is the most ideal only when all competitors seek the greatest benefits for themselves and competitors.
Equilibrium theory won the Nobel Prize in Economics because of its important role in finance and politics. Facts have proved that it is inseparable from the virtue of humility to benefit oneself and others at the same time, and only those who know the art of humility can achieve this effect better. A person who only knows "enterprising" and "fighting for the individual" is hard to be accepted by a group.
Definitely enterprising: 1. Under the market economy, excessive modesty will make people feel that you have no level, thus losing many opportunities. For example, many domestic college students often look humble when interviewing in foreign-funded enterprises, and the result is abandoned.
2. Many successful people, enterprises and countries in ancient and modern society have strongly proved this truth: if you are neither humble nor humble, you will succeed if you are determined to make progress. For example: Wang Bo, Mencius, Liu Xiang, Wu Shihong, Ye Ying, Yao Ming, Zhang Yimou, Lenovo Group, Haier Group, Founder Group, Japan, Israel and the United States.
In today's fast-changing society, we must forge ahead and take action when it is time to do so. 3. On the contrary, some individuals, companies and enterprises are unwilling to make progress, and dare not make progress. What they are greeted with is disastrous failure.
There is no contradiction between enterprising spirit and traditional virtue humility. The former is based on the development of work, while the latter is based on the quality of etiquette. A person who is determined to make progress in his work can also be a polite person.
For example, if Wang Bo is as humble as Zhang Yuanyuan, it is impossible for people to know Wang Teng-ting's Preface. Wang Bo was brilliant when he was young. He's just a guest at someone else's house. The householder wanted to show his son-in-law's talent through the banquet, but he pretended to let the guests speak first. Wang Bo doesn't understand amorous feelings, nor has he learned humility from others. What he said was eloquent and shocking.
Although it ruined the lay man's interest, it also won everyone's recognition and spread the following popular writing style. People can't be extremely modest, forbearing and silent. When it's time to show yourself, be bold. Modesty and humility will only bury themselves in the end.
Today's society emphasizes efficiency and the ability to seize opportunities. Too modest people not only don't take the initiative to look for opportunities, but even give them to others. Doing so is also called "humility", which is not only our loss, but also the loss of the country and the nation.
Today, self-confidence and enterprising are far more adaptable to this environment than humility. As Dr. Yang Zhenning said, "China students should not be too modest, but should be more courageous." Yes, we should be bolder, work harder and realize our ideals.
Stylistic choice: You can write argumentative, narrative, prose or other practical articles. Argumentative writing should clearly put forward opinions, put facts and reason.
Narrative is more difficult to write, especially in the vividness and richness of the story. It is more appropriate to write an essay or an argumentative essay.
Practical writing can be written as a letter to discuss this matter with Zhang Yuanyuan, or as a speech to express one's views. No matter what style, let people clearly understand your views on this matter and think further.
Fourth, examples and comments. In the face of fierce recruitment competition, a female college student named Zhang Yuanyuan gave up her seat several times, but it is this humility that is considered unsuitable for fierce market competition.
This made me think deeply. The excellent traditional virtues of the Chinese nation have been passed down for thousands of years, guiding thousands of generations of China people to find the beacon of life and achieve great things.
Among them, the word humility occupies the weight of Mount Tai. Modesty is a virtue, which is necessary for people with good moral cultivation.
Therefore, at any time, we must not abandon humility. (Put forward opinions and be clear.