The teaching goal of Shu Ting's teaching design of To Oak;
1, understand the characteristics of misty poetry.
2. Master the artistic conception and symbol of breaking before standing.
3. Establish a correct view of love.
Teaching focus:
Master artistic techniques such as artistic conception and symbol.
Teaching difficulties:
Understand the characteristics of misty poetry.
Teaching time:
2 class hours
Teaching methods:
Reading, discussion and appreciation
Teaching process:
First, introduce the new course:
Love, an eternal topic of life, has been praised by many literati at all times and in all countries, leaving many eternal songs: I wish to be a lovebird in heaven, to be in the world, and to have two branches in one tree. ? 、? If the relationship between two people lasts for a long time, is it a matter of time? . Love is a boring and sweet theme. With the changes of the times, people's views on love are constantly changing. Today, let's go into Shu Ting's heart and listen to her monologue. (Title of blackboard writing, author)
Second, solve the problem.
Give. For example, write a letter and make a phone call.
So is this a letter or a letter addressed to? Oak? That letter. 5。 Let me read this poem aloud. Students use strokes to draw concrete images written in poems, and at the same time think about the following questions:
Who is it addressed to? Oak? what's up Letter? And then what?
Why did she write this letter? Letter? And then what?
3. Doubt: How can an extraordinary woman make her own declaration of love to the oak tree?
1, the teacher introduces the author (combined with text notes ①):
Shu Ting: the representative figure of China's contemporary misty poetry (blackboard writing).
2. Deduction? Obscure poetry? concept
Obscure poetry came into being in the late 1970s and early 1980s, emphasizing the poet's self-awareness. The content is implicit and meaningful, and the form is virtual and real. It often creates a hazy artistic image or artistic conception by means of symbols and metaphors, arouses people's curiosity and imagination, and enables people to enjoy special aesthetics. Representative poets include Shu Ting, Bei Dao and Gu Cheng.
4. What is the love declaration of this obscure representative poet?
Let's listen to the heartfelt confession.
1, the teacher recited the whole poem, and set the music "Adeline by the Sea" (or listen to the recording).
2. Let the students talk about what they have learned: What is love?
3. On love (affectionately):
Some people say that love is a collision between one heart and another; Some people say that love is a diamond shining in the dark and a handful of stars scattered in the night sky; It is also said that love makes people happy, painful, powerful and confused.
Yes, because of love, Zhuo Wenjun ran to Sima Xiangru;
Because of love, Meng Jiangnv cried down the Great Wall of Wan Li;
Because of love, Lin Daiyu swallowed her words and burned her poems;
Zhu Yingtai died of grief because of love.
The simple two words lead to many ups and downs, joys and sorrows, grievances and grievances in the world; ? Love? Therefore, it has become the eternal theme of literati's works. One movie can't help but ask "Love, what's your last name?" !
Yes, dear, what's your last name?
Fifth, let's listen to the answer from the beautiful kapok tree first!
(Writing on the blackboard: Confessions of Kapok)
1, she said: Love should not be like this.
(1) Ask a female classmate to read this passage aloud.
⑵ Ask the students to discuss and summarize: What kinds of love views did the author deny? Why?
(3) division of labor analysis, clear:
The first is the climbing camphor tree.
Satisfy your vanity (show off yourself), pursue noble status, and climb up regardless of your personal dignity. What kind of love is this? This is a kind of? Stalking and beating? Love (on the blackboard) doesn't have its own trunk, it depends on the strength of others. Kapok has a clear attitude towards this kind of love, stands firm and resolutely denies it. There are three words in the text, which are absolutely different when read together! Which of these sentences can appreciate the author's great determination? Absolutely!
What kind of woman or marriage does this remind you of? (? You and your wife are honored? 、? Climb the dragon and attach the phoenix? Dependency. Today? Make big money? Do you still want to rely on it? Noble? It is both sad and ridiculous for a husband to realize his life value. Modern women never do it? Take your husband as your career? A woman, don't be a woman who shines by men. Women can't shine in that month anymore.
B Secondly, what is kapok's attitude towards spoony birds and birds that repeat monotonous songs for the shade?
There are also three words in the text. Never learn from them!
Because this kind of bird has a one-sided infatuation, it only knows to sing for each other, but forgets to sing for itself with its own voice. She didn't realize the value of her existence. She didn't know that while she was in love? I'm my own? I only know that I am attached to the shadow of the oak tree, but I don't want to fly out of the shelter of the oak tree and fly to my own free sky.
So, this is a kind of? Only attachment? Love (on the blackboard)
What kind of woman does this remind you of? A woman who is willing to be a vassal of a man, a vase, a bird in a family cage, is numb in the shadow of a man and loses herself in the love of a man. This is a one-sided infatuation. )
C. Next, the poets are listed separately? Spring, dangerous peaks, sunshine, spring rain? . Most of these things are praised in other literary works. What about kapok's attitude towards them in this poem? The students answered in unison? Not only that; No, these are not enough! ?
Although it is not like the first two kinds of total negation, it also expresses its own regret.
Because they devote themselves to the vigorous growth of oak trees without regrets, but forget to give themselves an independent world and the opportunity to create their own value. This spirit of self-sacrifice is commendable, but it is inevitably regrettable.
So, this is a kind of? Dedicated? Love (on the blackboard)
Hint: I'll read you some lyrics from Ai Jing's Woman Like Grandma? Woman, woman, who do you live for in this life? Woman, woman, this life, for him and his children. When the seed of love is pulled by love, when he matures, he is trapped by love. When he reached middle age, he lost flowers and leaves. How does Huang's old man live for his children and grandchildren? I gave my life to him and my children, and lived for others, never for myself. It doesn't matter whether I have my own life ideal or not. Therefore, from the perspective of maintaining and maintaining personality values, this kind of dedication is not enough.
Although it is noble and beautiful in terms of moral feelings, it is unwise in terms of maintaining personality values and may not be wise in terms of maintaining the development of love relations. For example, the story of the hero and heroine in "Hand in Hand" reveals that Hehe are college classmates. In the following summer, in order to support Zhong's career and take care of his son, they gave up their ideals and became very capable? A good wife and mother? But at this time, Zhong felt that he and his wife lacked a common language, so they were not harmonious and eventually divorced. After Xiaoxue found herself again, she had the charm to attract Zhong, which gave Zhong hope to hold hands with her again. So modern women should abandon it? Men's center? Secular prejudice and? Women support men and men support the world? Can't we just sacrifice ourselves? Buy wedding dresses for other girls? .
D. summary:
The above three traditional ones? Secular love? , are based on the premise of sacrificing one party. The traditional view of love shows that the combination of two lovers is not an equal combination of human feelings and values, but often a combination of power and economic potential; The two sides of the combination are often dominant and subordinate, ruling and ruled, losing the essence of love. The author holds a negative and refuting attitude. In the author's view, love is neither a unilateral attachment nor a unilateral infatuation. Even sincere dedication is not enough. So, what is the true love (blackboard writing) that the author yearns for? What did kapok say?
2. She said: Love should be like this.
(1) All the girls in the class read it together.
(2) In what way did the poet write this part? (Students discuss and answer)
(3) division of labor analysis, clear:
A First of all, the author emphasizes the foundation of love.
? I must be a kapok beside you, standing with you as a tree. ? These two sentences point out that only under the premise of independent personality and noble dignity can we talk about it? Love? ,
In other words, the basis of love should be? Independence and equality? (blackboard writing).
b？ Roots, clenched in the ground
Leaves, touching in the clouds
Every gust of wind blows
We all greet each other,
But no one
Understand what we said. ?
These words emphasize that the two sides of love should be closely combined, love each other, be soul mates, be closely connected and depend on each other (blackboard writing).
As both sides of love, what kind of image should C appear in front of people?
Boys read the clip together:? You have your copper branches and iron stems.
Like a knife, like a sword, like a halberd. ?
In this paper, the author compares the ideal man to a knife, sword and halberd, and the branches are like copper and iron, and draws the conclusion that the ideal man image should be stalwart and strong.
D So, what kind of posture should women appear?
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