She does.
Clove-like color
Lilac fragrance
Lilac bitterness
Mourn in the rain
Sad and confused
……
In the sad song of rain
Remove her color.
Eliminate her fragrance.
Disappeared, even hers
Breathing eyes
Lavender melancholy
-"Rain Lane"
The overlapping of words and the repeated use of conjunctions in Rain Lane constitute the gyration of paragraphs. The pause and intermittent repetition of each tone group are derived from the long string law of poetry. Rain Lane is mainly composed of three lines, with the middle two lines ending in two syllables and alternating rhymes. The last line of each poem echoes in the same rhyme. Rhyme is used intermittently in the sentence, and the first two sections are repeated, especially the method of crossing the line of continuous syllables, so that the pause of syllables is intermittent, and the continuity of poetry is consistent with the cycle of syllables. At the same time, several sets of parallelism sentences are adopted, which further increases the musical sense of poetry. Although this poem does not use the inherent format of classical poetry, it is not inferior to the long and short sentences in the Tang Dynasty in terms of syllables, just as Zhu Xiang once praised Rain Lane and adopted the advantages of western poetry.