The audit of tea has always been a problem that binds and puzzles the spool. Many people are questioning why they think that a well-written poem is not only not popular, but also shot or simply rejected! I think this reflects several aspects: first of all, we should look for shortcomings from ourselves, whether we have deviated from the theme of poetry and drifted away from the matrix, or whether our foundation is really thin. Secondly, perhaps, the audited editors have their own understanding and interpretation of poetry.
The development of modern poetry has not stagnated, but I feel a qualitative leap. Recently, I took time to read many poems of my predecessors and read many "new modern poems" advocated by our generation. I found that the positive attitude, natural and simple words and graceful and euphemistic techniques in previous poems are all lacking in the image, form, language expression and psychological changes of poems. Here I want to give an example to illustrate the poet's "This is Beijing at 4: 08":
This is 4: 08 Beijing time.
The sea of handspring;
This is 4: 08 Beijing time.
A magnificent whistle sounded.
The tall buildings of Beijing Railway Station,
Suddenly there was a violent shaking.
I looked out of the window in surprise,
I want to know what happened.
My heart suddenly hurts. it must be
Mother's buttoned needle and thread penetrated her heart.
At this time, my heart became a kite.
The kite string is in mother's hand.
The rope is too tight and will break.
I had to stick my head out of the window lattice of the carriage.
Before that, before that,
I realized what had happened.
-Wave goodbye,
It is necessary to take the station away;
Beijing is at my feet,
Has moved slowly.
I waved to Beijing again,
Trying to grab him by the collar,
Then shouted to her:
Always remember me, mom, Beijing!
Finally caught something,
No matter whose hand it is, he can't let go,
Because this is my Beijing,
This is my last trip to Beijing.
The birth of this poem is undoubtedly inseparable from that specific background and period. In those years when the chairman called on educated youth to go to the countryside, the poet expressed the sad scene of leaving his hometown and bidding farewell to his loved ones with his keen insight, in the form of poetry and in the language of poetry. The pain of the child leaving his mother was clearly described, and my heart became a kite in his mother's hand. Best of all, the poet did not directly describe how the train started and left, but used the movement of the station under his feet to highlight the climax of farewell. No matter who reads this letter, he will be moved by the loud cry, "Mom! Beijing! " . This is the place that attracts people's attention most.
Therefore, this poem, with its simple and emotional sentences, touched millions of readers, so that it was treasured, copied and recited by everyone!
The modern poetry of today's generation has made a great breakthrough in the consciousness of poetry creation. The eclectic concept of poetry and diversified writing methods make modern poetry follow the style and characteristics of the previous generation of poets and become a new pattern of self-created stream of consciousness. I think this is a bold leap to the future of poetry, and the future of poetry can only be better and brighter!