First, enter the poetry about the wind.
Remember the poem "Village Residence" written by Gao Ding in Qing Dynasty? Teacher Li Xi started the new class with a poem.
"The long grass warbler flies in February,
The willows on the embankment are drunk with spring smoke.
The children came back from school early,
Dongfeng is busy, flying kites. "
What is a kite? The children replied that it was a kite. Kites need wind to fly high, but who has seen the wind?
The first poem that Mr. Li Xi led us to appreciate was the English poet Rossetti's Wind translated by Mr. Wei Wei-
Who has ever seen the face of the wind?
Not you, not me.
When the leaves rustle,
That is, the wind passes through the forest.
Who has ever seen the face of the wind?
Not you, not me.
When the treetops bow their heads,
That's the wind passing through it.
This poem uses rhetorical devices to write the specific feelings of the wind.
The teacher brought us Wang's second poem, The Wind and Small Trees.
Giggle
The wind has big transparent wings.
Flapping the leaves of young trees
It really hurts.
The little tree gave a cry.
Want to chase?
But I can't move my legs.
I criticize the wind
You shouldn't bully young trees like this.
The wind replied.
I feel very quiet and lonely.
I played a joke on it.
The wind is joking with the little tree. It beats the leaves of the young tree, but the young tree can't fight back. This is really something that can't be helped! But nature is so wonderful that you feel it has aura everywhere.
Teacher Li Xi brought us teacher Liu Ruomin's Wind on the Sea again-
The wind on the sea is a flower god,
As soon as she arrived,
Ten thousand waves will bloom. ...
The wind on the sea is a pianist,
As soon as she arrived,
Only play 10 thousand songs ...
The wind on the sea is Hercules,
As soon as she came, she sent away ten thousand fishing boats. ...
The wind on the sea is a lion,
As soon as he shouted,
Set off a huge wave ...
This poem describes the characteristics of the sea from four aspects, which is very vivid. Teacher Li Xi instructed us to read the characteristics of different winds by changing the tone.
Xie, a poet in Taiwan Province, China, wrote in Feng that Feng quietly tried on clothes, wiped his sweat with my towel and handkerchief, and rolled my sister's round hat into a hoop. The poet wrote the curiosity and naughtiness of the wind by personification.
Teacher Gao Hongbo's Four Seasons is also very distinctive, describing the character of the four seasons. Write that the summer wind is so light that you can't even touch the dew; The autumn wind is so strong that the fields are flushed; The wind in winter is very strong, which freezes the river; The wind in spring is very soft. Touch the willow branches and catkins will fly all over the sky.
Light, heavy, hard and soft, highlighting the characteristics of the four monsoon in comparison.
Teacher Li Xi also told us that poetry comes from life, so we should use rhetoric and certain skills to give full play to our imagination and write poetry.
Second, the requirements of this exercise
1, children, go to the playground, go to the garden, go to the grass, and feel the existence of the free wind spirit! ?
2. Expand your imagination and write a poem about following the trend.
Third, the wind written by children.
1. Li Tian's poems-the winds of the four seasons
The spring wind,
Warm and gentle,
Touching the earth gently.
The summer wind,
Hot and dry,
Blowing green forests.
Autumn wind,
Cold and heavy,
Make the fruits mature one after another.
Winter wind,
The cold is biting,
Let the plum blossom bloom.
Regular structure, good grasp of the characteristics of the wind of the four seasons, clear thinking, innovative.
2. Li Zhiyuan's poem-"The Wind of Four Seasons"
Spring breeze blows across the grass,
Green waves appeared on the grass.
The summer wind blows over the pond,
The fragrance of lotus comes from the pond.
Autumn wind blows through the Woods,
It began to rain in the Woods.
The winter wind blows through the stream,
The stream has frozen white.
The language is beautiful and poetic, and at the same time, it writes the characteristics of the four seasons with a dynamic wind, giving readers a beautiful enjoyment.
3. Wang Dongxiu's poem-"The Wind of Four Seasons"
The spring wind,
Let everything on the earth revive.
The summer wind,
Bring coolness to people.
Autumn wind,
Let the earth Huang Cancan.
Winter wind,
Bring snowflakes to people.
The winds of the four seasons,
That's fickle.
It's good to grasp the characteristics of the winds in the four seasons. We should boldly imagine and strive to write more poetic masterpieces.
4. Du Fu's poem "The Impermanent Wind"
Feng is a shy girl.
Whenever everything comes back to life,
She always gently blows everything on the earth.
Feng is also an angry girl.
Whenever autumn comes,
She always blows the fruit of the farmer's uncle red.
It is this impermanent wind,
It just added a little goodwill to us.
He can personify the wind, write the character characteristics of the wind's rigidity and softness, and also write the scenery characteristics of the Spring and Autumn Period. Suggest adding descriptions of summer and winter.
5. Lin Zhifeng's poem "Autumn Wind"
Autumn is coming,
The autumn wind also comes as promised.
Autumn wind is the messenger of the farmer's uncle.
Here he comes,
The farmer's uncle is also very busy.
Autumn wind ripens the fruit,
The farmer's uncle showed a happy smile.
The autumn wind blew away the sultry summer heat,
Autumn wind, how nice!
With anthropomorphic rhetoric, the changes brought by autumn wind to the world are well written and more poetic.
6. Dong's poem Spring Breeze
Spring breeze awakens the earth with the fragrance of the earth.
Competing flowers spread out,
Let people feel the romance and loveliness of the spring breeze.
The spring breeze played the prelude of the day with her gentle melody.
The spring breeze man gently kissed the bouncing child on the cheek.
Spring breeze people appreciate the swordsmanship of such handsome old people.
The girls in the street let the spring breeze blow their hair,
Spring breeze plays hide-and-seek with young trees,
The little tree looked around for the spring breeze.
Twilight, evening breeze,
The spring breeze ended the day with a low melody.
How happy people are!
The evening breeze gently blows on my face,
I can't help feeling:
Spring breeze is not cold.
In the same language as prose poetry, I wrote the softness and loveliness of spring breeze, and also wrote the changes that spring breeze brought to the earth, and wrote the infinite beauty and poetry of spring breeze.