The world kissed me with pain,
Let me repay you with a song.
-Tagore's Birds
you
Look back at me.
Look back at the clouds.
I think
You looked at me from a distance.
You observe the clouds up close.
-"Far and Near" from Gu Cheng
You stand on the bridge and watch the scenery.
The landscape observer is watching you upstairs.
The bright moon decorated your window,
You decorated other people's dreams.
-Bian Zhilin's "Out of Chapter"
The night gave me black eyes,
I use it to find the light.
-"A Generation" from Gu Cheng
Flowers in the corner,
When you appreciate yourself,
The world is getting smaller.
-Bing Xin's Spring Water Stars
Forever mountain night
Everything is like a dream.
What could be better than complete silence?
More resistant to listening?
No matter how long and busy the history is.
There will always be a moment.
There's no need to argue, is there?
But what about the wind? you said
Wind? That's the transit of time
Occasionally a little
A little echo
-Listen, at night in the mountains
She put her bloody head,
On the scales of life,
Let all the survivors,
It's all lost.
-Weight.
-Han Han "Weight"
The sky is gray.
The road is gray.
This building is gray.
The rain is gray.
In the ashes
Walk past two children
brilliant/bright red
aqua
-"Feeling"
Modern poetry writing skills;
First, what is poetry?
If someone asks me now what is poetry? Perhaps I can only answer this way: "I know what kind of words can be regarded as poetry and what kind of words are not, but I don't know what poetry is." Poetry has no definition. But at least have a general idea! Yes, actually, poetry is not mysterious. Everything that is affectionate and beautiful is poetry. Simply put, psychological image (emotion)+physical image (beauty) = poetry.
Of course, this is not a fixed pattern of poetry. Poetry is free and diverse. To really know and understand poetry, we still need to understand it through long-term reading and creation.
Second, the basic characteristics of modern poetry
For the creation of modern poetry, we must first understand the characteristics of modern poetry, which is extremely important for us to learn the creation of modern poetry. Only by knowing ourselves can we win every battle.
Modern poetry is the modern emotion that modern people feel in modern life, and it is a set of sentences arranged by modern words.
Therefore, modern poetry is about the feelings of our times, and it is written in modern language (that is, modern Chinese, not classical Chinese)-this is the most basic feature of modern poetry.
In addition, compared with junior high school students, modern poetry has the following important features:
1, content: beautiful imagination, extraordinary in the ordinary;
2. Write touching feelings ideologically. In other words, personal feelings and experiences should be added;
3. Format: If you want to branch, you can branch by sentence or by content.
After understanding the basic characteristics of modern poetry, you can start to try to create, so what must be paid attention to in creation?
Third, how to write a poem?
Poetry is beautiful. To make ordinary things shine with beautiful light, we must imagine. Imagination is the source of beauty and the storehouse of poetry.
A good imagination is a poem in itself.
Only by exerting imagination can we create a vivid image. Imagination endows poetry with vitality. Without imagination, the poems written are dry. Imagination can make a little thing show amazing charm.
Secondly, poetry must be true, and only true is beautiful. We should be able to find something that can move us from life and then express it in the language and form of poetry. In this way, people can make their hearts sing and poetry becomes meaningful.
With the wings of imagination and the power of emotion, the beauty of poetry will emerge as the times require.
However, we must be clear that the format of poetry is also a problem that must be paid attention to, except for writing according to content or sentences, especially in the organization of language. Mainly manifested in two aspects: first, the use of rhetoric; The first is to break the conventional combination. Flexible use of various rhetoric can enhance the vitality of poetry, and boldly breaking the conventional combination (that is, not matching according to grammatical requirements) can achieve unexpected results, but it should not be too much.
Rhetoric is an important skill in poetry. Including personification, metaphor, parallelism, rhetorical question, repetition, thimble, duality, exaggeration, symbol and so on. It can be said that each expression technique has its own uniqueness. The use of metaphor can express the content of poetry more vividly and vividly. The use of xing can make readers understand the artistic conception of poetry from the beginning, and make poetry more affectionate and lasting appeal; The use of exaggeration, symbolism, synaesthesia and other techniques can inject more fresh blood into poetry, make poetry more imaginative and approachable, without making people feel vague and obscure, and make readers truly understand the thoughts and feelings expressed by the author.
Symbolism, on the other hand, uses concrete things to express a special meaning, which is the most commonly used technique in poetry. For example, Bing Xin's Paper Boat symbolizes the yearning for his mother, and Feng Zhi's I am a river symbolizes the pursuit of love. Usually we also like to use symbols, such as "plum blossom" to symbolize perseverance and "candle" to symbolize silent dedication. Wang Jiaxin's Beyond the Mountain uses "sea" and "mountain" to symbolize "ideal" and "difficulties and setbacks in pursuing ideal". Do you know the common symbolic meanings of the following objects? Sun, bees, flies, mosquitoes, snowflakes? Bright, selfless, dirty, exploitative and pure.
I won't go into details about the use of other techniques, but we will continue to learn and use them in the creative process.
As mentioned above, there is another aspect of the language organization of poetry, that is, breaking the conventional combination, which can sometimes make poetry language and poetry achieve a leap-forward effect.
The language of poetry transcends the general grammatical rules, and it has the characteristics of jumping, prominence and supernormality. Its combination is flexible, for example, we can use modifiers with different functions alternately, such as "black sigh", "dream of oil foam", "pink memory", "warm silence" and "ivory song". And use this incredible expression to express the complex emotions of modern people (of course, this is also a rhetorical device called synaesthesia).
Part-of-speech conversion is also a routine technique in poetic language. For example, in love poems, "Summer is too heavy, autumn is too cicada" ("Light Snow Today") and "We have weathered the wind and frost" ("Heavy Snow in Hunan"), where nouns are used as verbs, can not only arouse readers' corresponding image feelings, but also contain rich experience. The word "lotus" gives people a feeling of declining enthusiasm, the word "cicada" gives people an impetuous and desolate image, and the words "wind" and "frost" give people a hard and mature life experience.
After mastering some creations, we should also have the effort of "hammering words and refining sentences", which is also a revision in our usual composition. This is especially important for us beginners. Du Fu's lifelong pursuit is "words are not surprising and never stop", while Li Bai is called "talents are amazing", and most poets are experts in hammering words and refining sentences.
Fourth, the writing of poetry.
1. Simile method-describes the characteristics of things and is suitable for describing physical objects and natural scenery.
2. Metaphorically rich associations.
3. Parade mode-the level of scenery.
4. parallelism-show the rhythm and deepen the impression.
5. personification-lively, lovely and interesting.
6. Imitate the fun of adding sound.
7. Assumption-write good hopes and imagination.
8. Exaggeration-creating special effects and deepening the impression.
9. questioning method-arouse interest and think deeply.
10. Overlapping method-the "heartbeat" of poetry, the rhythm is more obvious.
1 1. Story poem-write a story into a poem.
12. Picture poetry-adding interest and deepening impression by drawing pictures.
13. Call method-whether face to face or not, call the other party directly to make the content more profound and vivid.
14. Dialogue method-approachable, easy to accept if in front of your eyes and ears.
15. Contrast method-highlighting the content and nature, including color contrast, shape contrast, action contrast, event contrast, character contrast and space contrast. ...