Do one's part for the country,
I want to be a gardener.
Cultivate the flowers of the motherland,
think it over ...
I really want to be a doctor,
Do your part for the patient,
I really hope that they will recover soon,
Tell them kindly, come on, you can do it,
think it over ...
I really want to be a policeman,
Harm people, eliminate violence, be virtuous,
Say for the victim, come on, you win,
Let them stop being depressed and think about it. ...
I really want to be a fireman,
Serve the people, help people in trouble,
Earthquake, fire, etc. All kinds of natural disasters.
I'm everywhere,
think it over ...
I really want to be a person who cares about the environment
Let's stop cutting down one tree or planting two trees.
Seeing someone trampling on the grass, he said kindly:
Everyone loves grass, and the earth is my home.
think it over ...
I really want to be a big tree,
Do your part for your motherland,
Absorb carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide, release oxygen,
Living in the anoxic Qinghai-Tibet Plateau,
Let Tibetan compatriots get some new oxygen.
think it over ...
I really want to be an inventor,
Do your part for the future,
Invented all kinds of safety windows, safety doors,
For the benefit of future generations, think about it ...
I think too much,
Words can't express,
I will study hard,
Realize my dream at an early date,
I want to work hard. ...
2. Composition Counseling for the Fourth Grade of Primary School [Composition Counseling for the Fourth Grade of Primary School] Teaching Plan of Composition Counseling Course for the Fourth Grade of Primary School 1. Compare the differences of composition training between primary school and junior high school (1). The goal of primary school students' composition: the composition written by primary school students can be divided into two categories: one is simple narrative; One kind is commonly used practical writing, which is helpful for the composition of the fourth grade in primary school. Simple narrative writing should include notes, travel notes, interviews, activities, writing landscapes, objects, etc. Commonly used practical articles mainly include: leave notes, messages, notices, bulletin boards, diaries, letters, etc. In the form of composition training, in addition to the commonly used propositional composition and semi-propositional composition, there are also training forms such as looking at pictures, supplementing the beginning, supplementing the end, abbreviations, modifying words with symbols, and changing the fragments that are not specific enough into concrete ones. The basic goal is to learn to choose materials, write an outline of the composition, and be able to write a central one. A simple narrative of about 400 words, true feelings and fluent sentences. (2) Analyze the following 20 essay topics and classify one thing in the summer vacation according to the content. I love the story that laughter is exchanged for sweat in my hometown. I am familiar with the person who wrote the notice in the morning. Write a thank-you letter to love me. I love farmers' markets (see picture composition). A kind-hearted man wrote a letter to Mr. Zhao and recorded a personal experience. A man I respect wrote a blackboard newspaper to hire my good teacher. Two or three things about my life after school. Narrative: (1) Writer: (2) Notes: (3) Notes: (4) Activities: (5) Object: Practical writing: (3) Literary works express meaning word by word. They can write in ordinary ways according to the needs of daily life. Junior high school is an important stage of a person's personality growth, so personalized writing has become the most important requirement in junior high school students' writing. It requires junior high school students to strengthen their life accumulation, use the most appropriate and personalized materials, and use the most appropriate expressions and forms. To show a deeper understanding of life. (4) The general form of junior high school students' composition training: practical writing training such as propositional composition, semi-propositional composition, topic composition and material topic composition. In recent years, the hot topic of exams is topic composition. Topic composition generally consists of three parts: prompt, topic and writing requirements. We will guide you to carry out specific training later. Second, personalized writing training (about 400 words) Scheme 1: Customize the topic (optional), content and genre according to your usual writing habits, and write down what you want to say most recently. Option 2: Go to the farmer's market (or your favorite place) and write down your experiences and feelings. How to write an article (1) Content: How to modify the composition 1. Famous sayings about article revision. Deliberate good sentences repeatedly. It is better to do good than to do good. 3. He Qifang: Throughout the ages, whoever writes well has probably worked hard on revision. 4. Ye Shengtao: It's a good habit to read things several times, revise them and then calculate. 5. Lu Xun: Read it at least twice and do your best. It's not a pity. Second, the story about the revision of the article: 1. Bai Juyi's poems are easy to understand, even an illiterate old woman can understand them. One day, Bai Juyi read a well-written poem to her neighbor's old woman, who didn't understand it at first. Bai Juyi went back and carefully revised it, and then read it to her, but the old woman still didn't understand. He is only satisfied. 2. According to legend, Wang Anshi, a famous litterateur in the Northern Song Dynasty and one of the eight masters in the Tang and Song Dynasties, repeatedly scrutinized and revised the word "green" when writing the sentence "Spring breeze is greener in Jiang Nanan", from "to" to "successively. That's why this famous saying has been passed down to this day. 3. The essay "Mr. Fujino" by Mr. Lu Xun, a great master of China literature, is less than 4,000 words, but there are more than 160 changes. Hamming 4. According to records, the great novels War and Peace by Russian writers Lev and Tolstoy have been revised seven times, while Anna? Karenina has been written for five years, and only the beginning has been revised 20 times. Wei revised the end of A Farewell to Arms, that is, the last page, and revised it 39 times before he was satisfied. Three. The revision of (1) regular composition is 1. Pay attention to external beauty: First of all, the basic requirements of writing modification are correct font, clear strokes and proper modification. It's a blur. Whether the font is correct or not and whether the words are neat or not is also one of the manifestations of a person's language quality. A person with high cultural accomplishment must master Chinese characters, develop good writing habits and give people a good impression. Second, we should pay attention to the style of writing. For line format, the font size should be moderate, the stroke thickness should be appropriate, and the word order should be just right. Horizontal paper and check paper. This is something you should pay attention to when writing. In addition, punctuation marks not only play a role in breaking sentences, but also play a very important role in mood, which directly affects the ideological expression of the article. Therefore, for punctuation, the usage should conform to the regulations, the standard of formal writing, and the format should be used properly. For example, various periods cannot appear at the beginning of a line; Quotes, brackets and the first half of the title cannot appear at the end of the line, and the second half does not appear at the beginning of the line; Dashes and ellipses occupy two spaces and remain open; Serial number and interval number occupy a grid, and these four symbols live on the line when writing; The words are marked with bullets, appropriate titles and wavy titles. 2. Pay attention to inner beauty: modify the conception, structure and language (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7) The specific steps and methods are as follows: See if the content of the article is relevant and the center is clear. The missing places should be filled. Second, whether the structure of the article is clear depends on whether the paragraph arrangement is reasonable, whether the details are appropriate and focused, whether the transition is natural, whether the whole process is taken care of, and so on. If there are any inadequacies or deficiencies, they should be adjusted or changed, and if there are any repeated paragraphs, they should be deleted. Third, look at the language of the article.
3. The poem "Chilechuan" written by the fourth grade pupils is at the foot of Yinshan Mountain.
The sky is like the sky, and the cage covers four fields. The sky is wild, and the wind and grass are moving to see cattle and sheep.
Jiangnan: Lotus can be picked in Jiangnan of Han Yuefu, and lotus leaves are sweet! Fish are frolicking among the lotus leaves. Fish hits the lotus leaf east, fish hits the lotus leaf west, fish hits the lotus leaf south, and fish hits the lotus leaf north.
Sunflowers in the Qingqing Garden in A Long Song of Han Yuefu are exposed to the sun. Spring fills the earth with hope, and everything presents a scene of prosperity.
I am always afraid that when the cold autumn comes, the trees in Ye Er will turn yellow and the grass will wither. The river runs to the sea, and when will it return to the west? A lazy youth, a lousy age.
"A Piece of Plum" Li Qingzhao is fragrant with red lotus root, jade is lingering in autumn, Luo Shang is light, and he is alone in the lotus boat. Who sent the brocade book, the word geese returned, and the moon was full of the West Building.
Flowers from Shui Piao to water, a kind of acacia, two places of leisure. There is no way to eliminate this situation, only frown and mind.
"it is hard to go" Li Baijin Zun fights for 1000 pieces of sake, and the price of jade plate delicacies is millions. I threw the food bar and cup aside. I couldn't eat or drink. I pulled out my dagger. I peeped in four directions in vain.
I want to cross the Yellow River, but ice will block the ferry and Taihang Mountain will be covered with snow. I will sit on a fishing rod and lean lazily by the stream, but I suddenly dream of sailing a boat towards the sun.
It's hard to walk, it's hard to walk, a lot of roads, and today's safety. One day, I will ride the wind and waves, raise the Yun Fan and cross the sea.
"Into the wine" Li Baijun did not see how the water of the Yellow River entered the ocean from heaven and never returned. Have you seen the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is still silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night?
Oh, let a man with spirit take risks where he wants to go, and never point his golden cup at the moon empty! . Since God has given talents, let them be used! As for the money, although it is scattered, it will get together again.
Cook a sheep, kill a cow, sharpen your appetite, and let me, 300 bowls, take a big drink! . Master Cen, Dan Qiusheng can drink and drink endlessly.
Let me sing you a song! Please listen to me. The northern folk song Chilechuan, at the foot of Yinshan Mountain.
The sky is like the sky, and the cage covers four fields. The sky is wild, and the wind and grass are moving to see cattle and sheep.
Jiangnan: Lotus can be picked in Jiangnan of Han Yuefu, and lotus leaves are sweet! Fish are frolicking among the lotus leaves. Fish hits the lotus leaf east, fish hits the lotus leaf west, fish hits the lotus leaf south, and fish hits the lotus leaf north.
Sunflowers in the Qingqing Garden in A Long Song of Han Yuefu are exposed to the sun. Spring fills the earth with hope, and everything presents a scene of prosperity.
I am always afraid that when the cold autumn comes, the trees in Ye Er will turn yellow and the grass will wither. The river runs to the sea, and when will it return to the west? A lazy youth, a lousy age.
"A Piece of Plum" Li Qingzhao is fragrant with red lotus root, jade is lingering in autumn, Luo Shang is light, and he is alone in the lotus boat. Who sent the brocade book, the word geese returned, and the moon was full of the West Building.
Flowers from Shui Piao to water, a kind of acacia, two places of leisure. There is no way to eliminate this situation, only frown and mind.
"it is hard to go" Li Baijin Zun fights for 1000 pieces of sake, and the price of jade plate delicacies is millions. I threw the food bar and cup aside. I couldn't eat or drink. I pulled out my dagger. I peeped in four directions in vain.
I want to cross the Yellow River, but ice will block the ferry and Taihang Mountain will be covered with snow. I will sit on a fishing rod and lean lazily by the stream, but I suddenly dream of sailing a boat towards the sun.
It's hard to walk, it's hard to walk, a lot of roads, and today's safety. One day, I will ride the wind and waves, raise the Yun Fan and cross the sea.
"Into the wine" Li Baijun did not see how the water of the Yellow River entered the ocean from heaven and never returned. Have you seen the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is still silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night?
Oh, let a man with spirit take risks where he wants to go, and never point his golden cup at the moon empty! . Since God has given talents, let them be used! As for the money, although it is scattered, it will get together again.
Cook a sheep, kill a cow, sharpen your appetite, and let me, 300 bowls, take a big drink! . Master Cen, Dan Qiusheng can drink and drink endlessly.
Let me sing you a song! Please listen to me. What are bells and drums, delicacies and treasures? I hope I will never wake up.
The sober and sages in ancient times were forgotten, and only drinkers could keep their names. Chen bought a barrel of wine with 10 thousand gold coins at a banquet in the temple, and everyone laughed and said one-liners
Why do you say, my master, your money is gone? , to buy wine, we drink together! . Five flower horses, golden jubilee, give them to boys in exchange for good wine, and I will share with you the sorrow of the ages.
Boarding Gao Du Fu, apes whimpered in a sharp wind from the vast sky, and birds flew home to the clear lake and white beach. The endless trees are rustling leaves, and the Yangtze River is rolling unpredictably.
Li in the sad autumn scenery, a wanderer all the year round, lives alone on the high platform in today's illness. After all the hardships and hatred, the white hair is full, and the wine glasses are damaged.
"Self-Thinking" Yuan Zhen was once a sea of water, and it will always be amber. Hurried through the flowers, lazy to look back; This reason is partly because of the ascetic monk, and partly because of who you used to be.
"Seven Steps Poetry" Cao Zhi cooks beans and cooks beans, and the beans cry in the kettle. We are born from the same root. What's the hurry? "Wild Goose Gate Taishouxing" Li Heyun crushed the city and destroyed it.
In autumn, the loud bugle sounded; The soldier's blood became dark in the night. The red flag rolled half, and the reinforcements rushed to Xiao; The night frost is heavy and the drums are gloomy.
I want to report to you on the golden platform, and I want to take Yulong to your death. Acacia when those red berries come in spring, they blush on your southern branches? People who want to miss them collect more, and Mix red beans have attracted people's attention.
Yan Zhenqing ordered five more chickens in the middle of the night, which was the time for men to study. Teenagers only know how to play, but don't know how to study hard. When they are old, they regret why they didn't know how to study hard when they were young.
Jiangnan.
4. How do pupils write poems? Children themselves are talented poets, because your imagination is rich and strange, which is the quality that poets need. The language of poetry is mostly visual language, such as "I took a nap in the season, and the flowers went through my life" and "I leaned out my green head in spring".
Poetry, like other literary themes, can start with imitation. The ancients said: literature begins with Hu, and poetry begins with shit. The more you imitate, the better your child's poems will be.
Here are some ways to introduce you: First, one of the thinking methods of children's poetry: seeking cause. Children's poetry consists of adult creation and children's creation. Popular in the typical, sentimental in aura, simple in childishness, natural in freshness, reflecting childlike innocence, childlike interest and childlike innocence. Some people say that poetry comes from inspiration, and so does writing children's poems.
So where did the inspiration come from? Mastering the thinking method of children's poetry can promote the germination of inspiration. Next, I will talk about the improvement of children's poetry inspiration from the way of thinking.
Finding a reason to give an object a reason is realistic, and the reason is illusory and inaccurate, but in children's poems, it is full of aura and childlike interest, innocent and lovely, with a "silly feeling" and a strange and unfamiliar feeling about your "reason".
For example, "Dayang": the sun is like a big media cake, which was baked in the mountain furnace all night, and the next morning, it burned all over its face. The red sun in the morning is a fruit, a fact, and why clams are red is a cause.
The "cause" that the little author is looking for is a big coal cake, which is baked red in the stove in the mountains. How naive and illusory imagination is. But one thing, both sides are "red", and red connects them.
Of course, the red color of the sun can also be associated with other reds, from which many children's poems can be written. Another example is "thinking stars": at night, the stars twinkle in the dark sky.
This is because the moon mother-in-law asked the stars to answer, and the stars were blinking and thinking. You see, when the stars blink, cause and effect are cause and effect. Why are you blinking? The little author immediately thought that children who can think will blink and blink. The twinkling of the stars is not thinking at all, it shows the childishness and naivety, endows the stars with human aura and makes them alive.
Another example is Peach Blossom: Peach Blossom is a girl who loves beauty. She doesn't like sleeping in Chunjie's arms. She got up quietly, stole Chunjie's rouge and tried to wipe it on her face. Sister Chun woke up and found that the cigarette fat was gone, so she came into the world to wake everything up quickly.
Look, is this the reason why the peach blossom is red? Not at all, but the little author made up a story to tell the reason. How interesting! Here, when you are looking for the reason, you should first look for the discovery point of connection from the "fruit" itself, and then make up a short story when you are in contact, and write it in a branching way, which becomes a children's poem. Look, is it easy? But there are two points worth noting: first, in causal connection, sometimes only one percent of the connection is enough, and 99 percent of the connection is far-fetched. If the connection is too real, it will lose childlike interest; Second, the causal link must jump out of the ordinary people's thinking to have a taste. For example, everyone will think of the connection between the rainbow and the bridge, which does not give readers a sense of freshness and does not show the childishness, innocence and aura of children. The thinking method of children's poetry The second lecture on association is that one thing thinks of another thing, and then another thing thinks of it, which is unfolded layer by layer and full of imagination.
Such as "Grandpa's Hand": Grandpa's hand is covered with cocoons, which looks like a "hillside"; Seeing this "slope", I remembered how many harvest songs were sung on the slope. You see, at the first level, we think of "hillside" from "cocoon", which is a similar association. The hillside in nature is higher than the flat land, and the calluses in the palm are slightly raised, like the flat land.
Of course, "hillside" can also think of greening and other things, because to be related to calluses, you must choose "bumper harvest", so the related association of the second layer is still related to the original (cocoon) of the first layer. Otherwise, there are many associations, which can't be penetrated and can't focus on the theme.
This poem shows that labor creates gains. Another example is "Grandpa Shan's beard", which is surrounded by white clouds, walking around the mountainside, just like Grandpa Shan's beard floating over the mountain, stroking, snoring and sleeping.
The first layer of this poem is similar to association. White clouds are floating around on the mountainside, much like Grandpa Shan's Hu Shun. The second level is still association. Grandpa Shan smoothed his beard and went to sleep. What a serene old man, vivid and lifelike.
Another example is "The Sorrow of Autumn Rain": it is like a cow's hair, like a thin line, and the autumn rain is continuous. Aunt Qiu, why have you been crying for so long? My heart is cold and my heart is broken.
The leaves have fallen, and I am worried about the coming of winter. The poem "Autumn Rain" is associated with continuous drizzle. Rain is like tears, and tears are associated with anxious psychological state.
Autumn rain is associated with the depression of scenery and psychological desolation, which is actually people's melancholy about autumn rain. The thinking method of children's poetry lecture 3 The third montage method is originally a film and television shooting method, but it can also be used to write poetry.
The film and television edited all the shots according to the needs and art, and then reassembled them, still presenting a complete story to the readers. The montage technique in children's poetry thinking method is also edited and combined into a poem in the same way.
If the content is broken, it is not thought and spirit. If all the contents are strung together with one thread, the candied haws will be strung together with bamboo wires. Please look at the children's poem "Cry": The pressure cooker is crying and hissing because it is red by fire.
Cloud doll is crying and spraying, because father-in-law Lei is criticizing it. Mom is crying, crying, because I don't listen.
What is crying? Crying is a kind of venting, and the face is brighter after crying. You see, pressure cooker, cloud and mother are irrelevant.
Instead, the little author strung together with "crying" as a line to express the ideological pursuit of being more brilliant after crying. When writing poems in montage, you should keep things as far away as possible, so that you can jump easily. If "laughter" is the topic, my father is laughing, hahaha ... my mother is laughing, hee hee ... my sister is laughing, and she is squinting ... so that her jumping ability is small, her poetry is not strong, and her mind is not high. If you write with different objects, then
The key to writing children's poems by montage is to pay attention to the same characteristics of different objects. The hiss of the pressure cooker is similar to crying, and the crying of the cloud doll is like tears, which is the characteristic of the mother.
5. How do primary school students write poems when they just start writing? You can do this: you can find some poems written by your peers and read them aloud before imitating them; After getting familiar with it, you can also find some simple fairy tales to write poems; As Jin Chiyu (another interviewee) said, just write your own heart, because there is no end to poetry.
So much advice. I'm only in the sixth grade, and I only know how to write poetry.
I am ashamed that the deepest love of my mother, father, classmates, grass trees and bees can't be expressed in a trickle. But today, I want to present a heart song for you. May my song become a needle and thread to mend your split wound. May my songs turn into raindrops and nourish your thirst. May my songs turn into a cloud and bring fragrance to your life. May my song turn into a cloud and refract sunshine for you. Time flies on my shoulders. That sweet and delicious meal was warm and soft. Tireless teaching; Connect you with my life.
I finally know that there is something in this world that is more continuous than the water of the Yangtze River and more breathtaking than the trend of the Yellow River. Tougher and evergreen than the green of pine and cypress; That's your love, your deep love, selfless love, my mother. I don't understand everything you give me, but if you polish my eyes, the world will be displayed before my eyes. I can always see a pair of big hands helping me move forward on my strange life road, so my life is no longer lonely and my road is no longer strange. Looking at your beautiful big hands, my eyes are blurred. I want to hear your breathing when you sleep. You should have more rest like this. Which was the first to be cured? It is like a winding river, flowing slowly, with endless warmth in my heart. It is your tired figure that urges me to be close to you and cry close to your heart. It won't let me listen to your shoulder. Your shoulders will always carry mountains and rivers, the sun and the moon. Away from regrets, no regrets, passionate love, passionate heart, Tengger singer singer-father and I, you created this home, and then you created me. You held my hand from yesterday to now. -It's just the night sky of students and teenagers in their prime tonight. Such a clear class reunion. Just like a clear river, it just makes a strange cry of "treasure" in an instant. There are countless raindrops in every corner of the country. Every smiling face remembers and shares the joy and pain that passed away yesterday. Strong emotions surge like waves. You and I enjoy a colorful life together. The wine brewed on campus is exciting and exciting. After the baptism of wind and rain, this youthful wine is better and more concentrated. This is a burning fire. The stars scattered all over the sky are very bright. It won't take long for this light of life to reflect our pure and beautiful hearts.
The following is the teacher's view on poetry-how to write modern poetry 1\ Poetry is too stupid, and space is fake or empty. 2\ As far as the object of writing is concerned, poetry must grasp emotion, reason and matter. As far as art is concerned, it should not only have a sense of rhythm, image, texture and movement, but also strength, hardness, breadth and depth. Four senses and four degrees depend on the creator's spiritual thought and artistic accomplishment, but they are finally accomplished through language.
According to my experience: use more content words, less function words, especially less or careful use of related words; Use more physical nouns than abstract nouns; The structure of sentences should be compact and powerful, and sentences should bite and support each other; Every word and sentence of a poem can't be poetic, or its poetry is silent, but it can't be considered useless. Many times, just find a key sentence and you can knock it alive. This is basically what the ancients said, "Call up the whole article". In this way, poetry can be solid and hard, and gain texture in seemingly clumsy. "Modern Poetry" emphasizes the spirit of freedom and openness, and communicates "between the sensible and the intangible" with straightforward situational statements.
4 "Poetry is like a person" and "Poetry is like a person". We advocate that poets and poems are integrated in connotation and extension, that is, poets should use words such as affirmation, promotion, praise, criticism, flogging and negation in their poems, and also practice them with practical actions in the secular world, so that poetry can become the poet's code of action and the poet's secular virtue can become poetry. 5\ What is irony? From ancient Greece to Hegel, to romantic literature, to new criticism, structuralism and post-modern theory, there are different interpretations of it; It is not only a rhetorical method, but also an aesthetic and philosophical concept.
Specific to poetry, the basic meaning of irony has the following two aspects: (1) a rhetorical device, that is, "what is said is not what is meant". It causes the difference between surface semantics and deep semantics.
(2) The general principle of poetic style, that is, poetic language has never been or should not be a single transparent symbol system; The language of any poem, no matter what the author's "subjective" intention is, will escape because of the role of context. What are the main writing techniques of poetry? 1. Expressions There are four main expressions in poetry: narration, description, discussion and lyricism, among which description and lyricism are the key points.
Different description methods, such as dynamic and static combination, virtual and real combination; Yes (lyrical way? There are two main ways: direct lyric and indirect lyric. ) Express your feelings directly, express your feelings through the scenery, cherish your feelings in the scenery, and blend the scenes. Because scenery is full of feelings, all scenery words are emotional words.
2. Structural form: the structural form of poetry is concerned from beginning to end, straight to the point, in-depth at all levels, first generalized and then divided, first scenery and feelings, last chapter and ambition, transition, bedding, foreshadowing and so on. 3. Rhetoric: The main rhetorical devices are: \ "antithesis \" \ "metaphor \" \ "personification \" \ "metonymy \" \ "exaggeration \" \ "parallelism \" \ "repetition \" symbol \ "and so on. 4.