0-point composition for college entrance examination

A girl's composition in 2005 college entrance examination was zero.

Zero-score composition from Hubei

Read the following text and write as required. (60 points)

A poet must be both inside and outside the universe. If it is involved, you can write it. Outside it, we can see it. Into it, so there is life. Beyond it, it is high.

The above is a passage from Wang Guowei's "thorns on earth", which discusses the poet's attitude and method of observing and expressing the life of the universe. In fact, the ideas contained in this passage are enlightening to us in writing, doing things, being a man, enjoying nature and understanding society.

Please write an article of no less than 800 words according to your understanding of this text, with your own ideas, style and title.

Wang Guowei, who can get out of the hall and into the kitchen, can have a rest.

(2005 college entrance examination composition Hubei 0 volume)

Wang Guowei said in "Words on Earth": "Poets must be inside and outside the universe. If it is involved, you can write it. Outside it, we can see it. Into it, so there is life. Beyond it, it is high. " What he means is nothing more than being flexible and not rigid, hanging from a tree; Look at a thing, whether it is perfect or not, but also from the inside out. From the outside, it has good connotation and elegant and exquisite appearance, so there is no top class. But in my opinion, from the realistic social sense, we should know more about people's identity and ability, not stick to a certain place, but be flexible in order to succeed in society.

I am a girl, but I also know that this truth has been solemnly written in the book, and life has educated us. To tell you the truth, I haven't decided whether to go to college or not. Even if this composition gives me a low score, I won't care too much. What about going to college? ! Many people lost their jobs after graduating from college, tried hard to find jobs and were scolded for their inferiority. Didn't you mention some time ago that someone only got 200 yuan, PhD 1400 yuan? I was too early in the street today. The delicious Regan Noodles is really delicious, but guess what, the stall owner of the breakfast stall is my neighbor, A Juan, an undergraduate.

Flexibility is the key to success, especially as a woman. Mianmian and Wei Hui call themselves beauty writers: writers who can write because of their participation; Beyond it, you can see beauty. People like Zhang can walk out of the lecture hall of the university and enter the feast of capitalists. According to the current standard of living, it is a dragon and a phoenix among people. Two years ago, there was an investigation report about female college students' prostitution, which caused a great storm in the city. Is it not based in Wuhan? I am a serious female college student during the day, but a prostitute with a hundred dollars at night. You said, how rare it is that I am a female college student! Being a man and doing things can't be the same, and it's better not to be perfect inside and outside. My mother taught me how to make Wuhan duck neck. She repeatedly reminded me that it must be delicious and the external color should be high, so that people can't mistake it for some kind of excrement.

The social competition is extremely fierce, giving people a jungle feeling of the jungle. What's more, it is still a patriarchal society in essence, and gender discrimination in employment is common. Should I say "I'm wet with anger" like a beauty writer? Our nickname in Hubei is nine-headed bird. How can we make a full meal if we don't learn the ability to see and listen in all directions? In ancient times, we were called the Chu State of Hubei Province. There was a saying that "the king of Chu was thin-waisted and starved to death in the palace", which shows how much we love beauty. But why are we Hubei women impatient and easy to call names now? I think it must have something to do with the current social situation. The slogan of equality between men and women has been shouted for decades, and equal pay for equal work for men and women has turned them into men, women, men, stout and strong, who don't like red clothes and love armed men. Many abnormal men actually appreciate the uniformed female soldiers, policewomen and cadres, saying that they are heroic and spirited. Isn't this a man's crime?

Madame Curie said, "Women can do what men can do." However, she left out the following sentence: "What women can do, men may not be able to do." We must decide our own path. Lady Chatterley once said, "Men conquer the world and women conquer men." We just want to do the living room into the kitchen and go back to the old road decades ago. My husband, on the other hand, doesn't ask for anything-that is, sudden short life or disaster-as long as he has a beautiful BMW and a villa, he will be satisfied. And all this depends on our efforts to dress up, care for our skin, be clear as water, practice etiquette, and then be elegant and affectionate. This is the only way to catch the rich. Can this knowledge be taught to us in college classes? The road to success is not so much our own choice, but rather forced by the patriarchal society. They actually ask us to be housewives at home, ladies outside and sluts in bed. I am very angry. . . . . .

Wang Guowei is talking about what a poet should do. He doesn't know that poets and poems have long been unpopular in this society. Haizi has heard of it. I don't know what it means to face the sea in spring. According to the visual depiction order, how to see the spring blossoms facing the sea? Is it a mirage? What this poet does is not logical, his brain is unclear and his nerves are wrong. He either commits suicide or kills his wife. Is there a better ending than this? Such a man, a pair of poor appearance, and which young woman value? ! And he, Wang Guowei, is said to be an old man before the Qing Dynasty. "Your majesty, your majesty, where have you been!" Seeing the building collapse, I lost my spiritual home. Although I have no worries about food and clothing, I am still like a lost dog, plunging into that pile of old paper and trying to find a good way to govern the country. Where did he know that the new era had arrived, and where could he find a new prescription to adapt to the new civilization and new ideas in the moldy Three Graves and Five Codes? ! Even the concept of equality is imported. In the Bible, God said, "Children, you are all brothers and sisters!" " "It seems that with light, there will be light, and the people-oriented equality thought will come out. We also have an old saying: "The Emperor of Heaven is guilty of the same crime as Shu Ren! "However, we are not for the equality between people, but to protect the authority of the law from being destroyed and not to give people an excuse to escape punishment after breaking the law.

Wang Guowei was desperate and committed suicide, "hanging from a tree", which is inevitable. His attitude and method of observing and expressing life in the universe are quite different from the attitude towards life reflected in his poems. What a pity! Wang Guowei's appreciation of some tricks, such as poetry, is like a rich man who stinks of copper, fiddling with an ancient snuff bottle, or an exquisite chamber pot used by the court nobles of the previous dynasty. Life has given us more and deeper insights, but he rambles in "The Thorn on Earth". I think this book "Thorns on the Earth" can be thrown into the trash can. Wang Guowei can rest.

The last sentence: teacher, just give a point. As long as you go out, you are worthy of the integrity between heaven and earth. When you enter, you are tortured in the depths of your conscience. Otherwise, there is nothing I can do. Even if I swear in any street, I can't hurt you.