Change the writing order by moving to different scenes. First enter the mountain - then walk to the middle of the mountain - then stand in front of the pavilion - and finally take a walk around the garden in front of the temple
Excerpt from the original article:
Only when you enter the mountain do you know that the spring water is not just one stream, both front and back. To the left and right, in the cracks between grass and rocks, there is a surge of sound almost everywhere, and there is no sound everywhere.
Walking to the middle of the mountain, there is a Bushan Pavilion. The pavilion is dilapidated and there is nowhere to look. However, a couplet inside the pavilion reads, "There is no dust here, and there is even more green Qianxun when you come up." The spirit of this pavilion makes people nod in understanding.
Standing in front of the pavilion and looking out, my eyes are indeed filled with dense green. Far and near, high and low, the branches of the trees are entangled with vines, and they are densely packed. The heavy wet green is like the waves of the sea, layer by layer, pushing straight to the top of the mountain.
Wander around the garden in front of the temple. The garden is full of flowers, bees and butterflies flying, and is full of business, which is very different from the solemn atmosphere in the main hall. Among the flowers, there are two tall ancient trees with lush branches and leaves, covered with green shade, and their roots are protected by stone railings, which makes them look unique.
Article introduction:
"Dinghu Mountain Listening to the Spring" is a beautiful scenery prose written by the famous essayist Xie Daguang. It describes the author's trip to Dinghu Mountain to listen to the spring in Zhaoqing City, Guangdong Province. , describing the sound of springs heard during the day and night in a beautiful style, expressing the author's love for the spring water of Dinghu Mountain and his love for nature. Extended information
About the author:
Author: Xie Daguang? Gender: Male, date of birth: December 1943, Han nationality from Linyi, Shanxi, member of the Communist Party of China, contemporary prose writer. Graduated from the Electric Power Department of Hebei Institute of Technology in 1962. In 1962, he was drafted into the army and served successively as a soldier, clerk, and creative member of the literary team of a certain department of the General Logistics Department, an employee of the printing factory of Tianjin People's Publishing House, editor of the monthly "Prose", editor, deputy team leader, director of the editorial office, and deputy director of Baihua Literature and Art Publishing House. Chief editor, deputy director and chief editor of the editorial department of "Novelist", chief editor and deputy editor of "Selected Chinese and Foreign Prose".
Executive director of the Chinese Prose Society and director of the Tianjin Branch of the Chinese Writers Association. Started publishing works in 1980. He is the author of a collection of essays "Falling Flowers" and a collection of reportage "Swan Song". The prose "Listening to the Spring in Dinghu Mountain" was selected into the Shanghai high school Chinese textbook and the Jiangsu Education Edition ninth-grade Chinese textbook. The reportage "Tie Ning and Her Father" won the Tianjin Excellent Work Award.
Content introduction:
The article does not write about seeing the spring but listening to the spring, which is quite innovative. The background of the article is explained at the beginning: Because the mountains are filled with fog, "the eyes are blind, but the ears are clearer", so we have the opportunity to appreciate this beautiful music. The author uses time as a clue, from dusk to night, focusing on the feeling of listening to the spring at night. The wonderful use of a series of metaphors makes the feeling of listening to the spring more concrete, and the association generated by listening to the spring at the end makes the article interesting. Full of flavour, with a long aftertaste.
These various spring sounds are woven together by an invisible baton, forming a wonderful symphony. In the symphony of this spring, it seems that you can hear the passage of time, the changes in history, the birth, growth, reproduction, and death of life, and the sound of metabolism, from weak to strong, gradually unfolding, rising to become the main melody.
Bent over, listening, and distinguishing, my mind felt like it was melting into the water, flowing with the spring, and swimming all over Ding Lake; it also felt like the spring water filtered through my heart, washing away the dirt, leaving behind deep feelings for me to taste. , attract my imagination. Ah, completely intoxicated by the singing of the spring water. It is said that "the mountain is not high, but the immortal is famous", but it is said that "the mountain is not famous, but the spring is spiritual". Breeding vitality and nourishing all trees, spring water is the soul of Dinghu Mountain. Revealing the insights triggered by listening to the spring, "an invisible baton" refers to the author's natural inner feeling of the sound of the spring.