The next morning, I decided to go home. I was sitting in the carriage, anxious to return, very excited. I left home when I was a teenager, and now I am white-haired. What will my hometown look like after thinking about it day and night? With full expectations, the bumps on the road have become less unbearable.
Finally, after a long journey, the carriage stopped. I hurried down, and the clear stream of my hometown came into view from a distance. The sky is still so blue, the trees are still so green ... the endless beauty in front of me reminds me of my childhood.
Just as I was falling into memory, a sweet child's voice floated into my ear: "Uncle, where are you from?" When I looked intently, I saw two children in bright yellow dresses looking at me curiously with round eyes. I bent down and smiled and said to them with my hometown accent, "I come from far away, but I used to be here!" " "They inexplicably touched their little heads and said in unison," Are you from here, too? "? Then how come we haven't seen you? "I heard that, my heart is surging and I am very sad. I couldn't help crying at that time. My dear hometown! I should have come back to see you earlier!
Back to my residence, with a sad feeling of missing, I wrote a song "Back to my hometown":
Young people leave home, old people return, and the local accent has not changed.
When children meet strangers, they will smile and ask where the guests are from.
Put down the pen, * * * dry eyes can't help but wet. ...
2. Start a 400-word homecoming couplet in the first person, and write two homecoming couplets: He Nian left home, and the local accent has not changed.
When children meet strangers, they will smile and ask where the guests are from. I have been away from my hometown for many years, and I have been half-dead recently.
Only in front of Jinghu Lake, the spring breeze does not change the waves of the past. In the third year of Tianbao (744), He resigned and retired to his hometown of Yongxing, Yuezhou (now Xiaoshan, Zhejiang). At that time, he was eighty-six years old, and he had left his hometown for more than fifty years in middle age.
Life is easy to get old, the world is vicissitudes, and my heart is filled with emotion. The word "even" in hometown books not only means that poetry was written by accident, but also reveals the meaning that poetry comes from life and from the bottom of my heart.
The first song was written when I first came here, expressing my feelings of hurting the old for a long time. In the first and second sentences, the poet was in a familiar and unfamiliar environment in his hometown, and he felt quite uneasy all the way: he left home in his prime; When I got home today, I couldn't help feeling.
The first sentence summarizes the fact that you have been away from home for decades with sentences like "running away from home when you are young" and "going back to your boss", which implies the feeling of hurting your boss. The second sentence inherits the previous sentence with "the hair on the sideburns is fading", which specifically describes the state of being a boss, and sets off the changed "hair on the sideburns" with the constant "local accent", which means "I don't forget my hometown, can my hometown still recognize me", thus paving the way for the following two sentences to arouse children's questions.
Three or four sentences changed from an emotional self-portrait to a dramatic scene in which children smiled and asked questions. "Laugh and ask where the guest comes from", which is just a faint question among children, so stop here; On the poet, it became a heavy blow, which triggered his infinite feelings. In his later years, the sadness of the opposition between subject and object was included in this seemingly dull question.
This is the place where the whole poem ends quietly, but the meaning is like an empty valley, full of sadness and boundless. As far as the whole poem is concerned, one or two sentences are mediocre, while three or four sentences are like twists and turns, with no boundary.
The beauty of the last two sentences lies in the powder on the back, which is seamless: although mourning is written, it is expressed in a happy scene; Although I wrote about myself, it was turned out from the side of the child. The scene where children ask questions is full of life interest. Even if we are not infected by the poet's long-term feelings of hurting the elderly, we can't help but be moved by this interesting life scene.
The second song can be regarded as a sequel to the first one. After the poet got home, he learned about the personnel changes in his hometown through conversations with relatives and friends. While sighing for a long time, he could not help sighing about the impermanence of personnel.
"Leaving my hometown for many years" is equivalent to the last song "Leaving home to be the boss when I was young". The poet never tires of repeating the same meaning, just because all feelings are caused by decades of exile.
So the next sentence is to dig out the discussion about personnel. The sentence "Recently, people have passed half" seems abstract and objective, but it actually contains many specific contents that deeply touch the poet's feelings. The sigh of "finding half our friends dead" and all kinds of sighs caused by the sinking of relatives and friends are included.
It's too numerous to mention, and you have to go in a cage. After three or four sentences, the poet's eyes shifted from personnel changes to the description of natural scenery.
Jinghu Lake is located at the northern foot of Huiji Mountain in Shaoxing, Zhejiang, more than 300 miles from Fiona Fang. He's former residence is next to Jinghu Lake.
Although it has been decades since I left Jinghu Lake, the water waves in Jinghu Lake are still rippling in the surrounding spring scenery. By the independent mirror lake, a feeling of "things are different from people" naturally came to my mind, so I wrote a poem "Only the mirror lake in front of the door, the spring breeze will not change the old waves".
The poet compares "semi-killing" with "unchanging", further develops the meaning of "semi-killing" with "only", and emphasizes that almost all things in the past have changed except the lake wave. From the direct expression of one or two sentences to the writing and discussion of three or four sentences of scenery, it seems to be idle and irrelevant. In fact, this is a clever contrast, which only strengthens the feelings to be expressed from the opposite side. Under the background of continuous lake waves, the feelings of personnel are getting deeper and deeper.
It should also be noted that words expressing time such as "many years", "recent" and "old times" run through the whole poem, which makes the whole poem shrouded in an atmosphere of deep meditation and overwhelming emotions. Compared with the first Prime Minister, if the poet once felt that it was a little relief to be among his relatives when he entered the house for the first time to see the children, then when he was introduced by his relatives and friends, he became independent from the sparkling mirror lake, which undoubtedly became more and more sad.
Lu You said: "The article is natural, and it is wonderful." In the final analysis, the success of the two poems "The Return of the Native" lies in the fact that the poems show a state of transformation.
The feelings of poetry are natural and vivid, and the language and rhythm seem to flow naturally from the heart, unpretentious and unadorned, unconsciously introducing readers into the artistic conception of poetry. Such a good poem comes from life and from the heart, which is very rare.
The title * * * was written by the author when he returned to his hometown to be an official in the fourth year of Tianbao (744). The poem not only expresses the feeling of hurting the old after a long separation, but also is full of the intimacy of returning home after a long separation. Although it was written in his later years (85 years old), it is full of life interest.
Sleeping Night Talk: "Yang Heng said in a poem:' It's time to remember the mountain, and then send the guests back to the mountain. "Zhang Jiyun:' I remember when I left home because I gave it away.
Lv Xiang's poem "Going Home" said:' My brother is still young, but I don't know when I return home. He Zhangzhi said: "When children meet strangers, they will smile and ask where the guests are from.
Language benefits are exchanged for benefits, and people who are good at it should participate. "He (659-744) was born in Yongxing, Yuezhou (now Xiaoshan, Zhejiang).
Wuhou was a scholar during the reign of Shengyuan (695), and his literary works were not famous. In the 11th year of Kaiyuan (723), he was transferred to the position of Assistant Minister of Ritual, and later served as the guest and secretary supervisor of the Prince.
In the winter of the second year of Tianbao (743), he returned home due to illness and was given a song "The Interpretation of Jing Hu". In the first month of the following year, Xuanzong personally wrote poems, and hundreds of officials below the prince wrote poems to bid farewell.
Soon after he came back, he died of illness at the age of eighty-six, and was later given the title of history of the Ministry of Rites. He is the most proud of the "Four Scholars of Wuzhong" (He, Zhang Xu, Bao Rong and Zhang), and the other three are all small officials.
But he is not a man of fame and fortune. At the same time, fellow countryman Lu Xiangxian often calls people and says, "Brother He is a charming man.
My children and I never thought about being rich. I'm stingy if I can't see my brother for a day. "("Old Tang Book "). When he saw him in the Purple Pole Palace in Chang 'an, he cried. Quot drop fairy ",praised his" Shu Dao Nan ".
3. Start a 400-word homecoming couplet in the first person and write two homecoming couplets: When he left home, the local accent remained unchanged.
When children meet strangers, they will smile and ask where the guests are from. I have been away from my hometown for many years, and I have been half-dead recently.
Only in front of Jinghu Lake, the spring breeze does not change the waves of the past. In the third year of Tianbao (744), He resigned and retired to his hometown of Yongxing, Yuezhou (now Xiaoshan, Zhejiang). At that time, he was eighty-six years old, and he had left his hometown for more than fifty years in middle age.
Life is easy to get old, the world is vicissitudes, and my heart is filled with emotion. The word "even" in hometown books not only means that poetry was written by accident, but also reveals the meaning that poetry comes from life and from the bottom of my heart.
The first song was written when I first came here, expressing my feelings of hurting the old for a long time. In the first and second sentences, the poet was in a familiar and unfamiliar environment in his hometown, and he felt quite uneasy all the way: he left home in his prime; When I got home today, I couldn't help feeling.
The first sentence summarizes the fact that you have been away from home for decades with sentences like "running away from home when you are young" and "going back to your boss", which implies the feeling of hurting your boss. The second sentence inherits the previous sentence with "the hair on the sideburns is fading", which specifically describes the state of being a boss, and sets off the changed "hair on the sideburns" with the constant "local accent", which means "I don't forget my hometown, can my hometown still recognize me", thus paving the way for the following two sentences to arouse children's questions.
Three or four sentences changed from an emotional self-portrait to a dramatic scene in which children smiled and asked questions. "Laugh and ask where the guest comes from", which is just a faint question among children, so stop here; On the poet, it became a heavy blow, which triggered his infinite feelings. In his later years, the sadness of the opposition between subject and object was included in this seemingly dull question.
This is the place where the whole poem ends quietly, but the meaning is like an empty valley, full of sadness and boundless. As far as the whole poem is concerned, one or two sentences are mediocre, while three or four sentences are like twists and turns, with no boundary.
The beauty of the last two sentences lies in the powder on the back, which is seamless: although mourning is written, it is expressed in a happy scene; Although I wrote about myself, it was turned out from the side of the child. The scene where children ask questions is full of life interest. Even if we are not infected by the poet's long-term feelings of hurting the elderly, we can't help but be moved by this interesting life scene.
The second song can be regarded as a sequel to the first one. After the poet got home, he learned about the personnel changes in his hometown through conversations with relatives and friends. While sighing for a long time, he could not help sighing about the impermanence of personnel.
"Leaving my hometown for many years" is equivalent to the last song "Leaving home to be the boss when I was young". The poet never tires of repeating the same meaning, just because all feelings are caused by decades of exile.
So the next sentence is to dig out the discussion about personnel. The sentence "Recently, people have passed half" seems abstract and objective, but it actually contains many specific contents that deeply touch the poet's feelings. The sigh of "finding half our friends dead" and all kinds of sighs caused by the sinking of relatives and friends are included.
It's too numerous to mention, and you have to go in a cage. After three or four sentences, the poet's eyes shifted from personnel changes to the description of natural scenery.
Jinghu Lake is located at the northern foot of Huiji Mountain in Shaoxing, Zhejiang, more than 300 miles from Fiona Fang. He's former residence is next to Jinghu Lake.
Although it has been decades since I left Jinghu Lake, the water waves in Jinghu Lake are still rippling in the surrounding spring scenery. By the independent mirror lake, a feeling of "things are different from people" naturally came to my mind, so I wrote a poem "Only the mirror lake in front of the door, the spring breeze will not change the old waves".
The poet compares "semi-killing" with "unchanging", further develops the meaning of "semi-killing" with "only", and emphasizes that almost all things in the past have changed except the lake wave. From the direct expression of one or two sentences to the writing and discussion of three or four sentences of scenery, it seems to be idle and irrelevant. In fact, this is a clever contrast, which only strengthens the feelings to be expressed from the opposite side. Under the background of continuous lake waves, the feelings of personnel are getting deeper and deeper.
It should also be noted that words expressing time such as "many years", "recent" and "old times" run through the whole poem, which makes the whole poem shrouded in an atmosphere of deep meditation and overwhelming emotions. Compared with the first Prime Minister, if the poet once felt that it was a little relief to be among his relatives when he entered the house for the first time to see the children, then when he was introduced by his relatives and friends, he became independent from the sparkling mirror lake, which undoubtedly became more and more sad.
Lu You said: "The article is natural, and it is wonderful." In the final analysis, the success of the two poems "The Return of the Native" lies in the fact that the poems show a state of transformation.
The feelings of poetry are natural and vivid, and the language and rhythm seem to flow naturally from the heart, unpretentious and unadorned, unconsciously introducing readers into the artistic conception of poetry. Such a good poem comes from life and from the heart, which is very rare.
The title * * * was written by the author when he returned to his hometown to be an official in the fourth year of Tianbao (744). The poem not only expresses the feeling of hurting the old after a long separation, but also is full of the intimacy of returning home after a long separation. Although it was written in his later years (85 years old), it is full of life interest.
Sleeping Night Talk: "Yang Heng said in a poem:' It's time to remember the mountain, and then send the guests back to the mountain. "Zhang Jiyun:' I remember when I left home because I gave it away.
Lv Xiang's poem "Going Home" said:' My brother is still young, but I don't know when I return home. He Zhangzhi said: "When children meet strangers, they will smile and ask where the guests are from.
Language benefits are exchanged for benefits, and people who are good at it should participate. "He (659-744) was born in Yongxing, Yuezhou (now Xiaoshan, Zhejiang).
Wuhou was a scholar during the reign of Shengyuan (695), and his literary works were not famous. In the 11th year of Kaiyuan (723), he was transferred to the position of Assistant Minister of Ritual, and later served as the guest and secretary supervisor of the Prince.
In the winter of the second year of Tianbao (743), he returned home due to illness and was given a song "The Interpretation of Jing Hu". In the first month of the following year, Xuanzong personally wrote poems, and hundreds of officials below the prince wrote poems to bid farewell.
Soon after he came back, he died of illness at the age of eighty-six, and was later given the title of history of the Ministry of Rites. He is the most proud of the "Four Scholars of Wuzhong" (He, Zhang Xu, Bao Rong and Zhang), and the other three are all small officials.
But he is not a man of fame and fortune. At the same time, fellow countryman Lu Xiangxian often calls people and says, "Brother He is a charming man.
My children and I never thought about being rich. I'm stingy if I can't see my brother for a day. "("Old Tang Book "). When he saw him in the Purple Pole Palace in Chang 'an, he cried. Quot drop fairy ",praised his" Shu Dao Nan ".
4. Change my hometown book into a composition, with more than 500 words. Punctuation is not "Homecoming Book" (rewriting). At the age of 36, I am strong and poetic.
That year, the emperor chose me to be an official in Beijing. Since then, I have been busy with business every day and have no time to go home and reunite with my relatives.
Thirty-nine years later, I am old. The emperor looked at me as useless, a little deaf, and his eyes were a little blurred. I am 75 years old, so he ordered me to resign and go home.
I smiled on my wrinkled face at the thought of meeting my relatives soon. I sat in a carriage, admiring the beautiful mountains and rivers of the motherland along the way, and thought: Is Shaoxing, my hometown, still like that? I really can't wait to go home immediately and try the tender loofah and red tomatoes in the garden ... I must go to the big peach tree to enjoy the cool and go fishing in the big round fish pond at night ... My hometown accent hasn't changed for decades, but my hair is gray. I wonder if my wife and family still know me. After a month of camping, I finally returned to my hometown.
Ah, my hometown, my home! The hut I built when I was a child is still there, the clear fish pond is still there, and the colorful goldfish are still there! I also saw a group of lively and lovely children playing in front of my house. Ah, these must be my children and grandchildren. Although my hair is white and I still have a beard, I am very satisfied with my children and grandchildren now. Several children saw me coming and gathered around curiously. An older and bolder little boy looked up and said to me with a smile, "Grandpa, where are you from and where are you going?" When I heard that, my face was covered with a wry smile and I was deeply touched. Once, I was so excited that I sang a poem: When I was young, I left home, and when my boss came back, my local accent remained unchanged.
Children don't know each other when they meet. Where do they come from? 550-word references:
Composition.
Rewrite a composition of about 720 words in my hometown book.
When the young people left home, the local accent did not change. When children meet strangers, they will smile and ask where the guests are from.
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Farewell station, full of thoughts for loved ones, never meet again.
Years are like a dream, I wake up in the simple and cordial smile of the villagers, although I am strange.
Looking at the simple and honest cheeks of the villagers and the vicissitudes of life written here over the years, I understand-
Time flies from the walls of the quaint hut, because I saw the fingerprints of the memories left by my brothers and children; I saw the sweat shed by my parents when they laid this "Jiangshan".
I don't know when I started to learn plastic surgery these years and turned people's hair into white hair. I have been urging the elderly from generation to generation, and now I understand that a weather-beaten face is more cordial.
Walking in the countryside, I feel that I have been to the countryside where my parents are full of Artemisia annua, and my familiar childhood grew up in a familiar field.
Time has gone far away from the country road with deep footprints of villagers. Now I understand that walking there is a solid road.
Years finally settled in people's hearts, casting the most beautiful face and the most charitable heart in the world.
Township! My forever home.
Time can change age, face and even everything-what can't be changed is the pure beauty of everything.
6. Rewrite my hometown book into a composition, willow is Yi Yi, and geese fly south. He has got the approval of the emperor and can retire and go home. He dreamed of his hometown many times in his dream. At the thought of going home this time, he was as happy as if he had returned to his childhood.
He recalled the scene of trying to be an official as a teenager. In a blink of an eye, I have been an official in the imperial court for 56 years. I am eighty years old and six years old. But he can't change his hometown accent. As soon as he looked in the mirror, he saw that his sideburns had turned white, and he was no longer the youth when he took office.
He Zhangzhi rides on horseback and travels thousands of miles to anxious to return every day. He laughed all the way and even sang his own "Liu Yong". Finally, I returned to my hometown after a long separation. He smelled such fresh air and such a quiet hometown. Taste the clear spring in my hometown. It's so sweet. Touching the soil in my hometown makes me feel so fragrant. The country road is still so winding, and the scene of carrying a schoolbag to school as a child seems to reappear.
He touched the old willow and said to himself, Do you still recognize me? But I still miss you. I still think about everything in my hometown. Do people in my hometown still recognize me?
At this time, a group of children, seeing He behaving unusually and full of energy, walked back and forth, thinking that he was from other places and lost his way. They surrounded him with questions. A little boy asked innocently, "Grandpa, where are you from?" Are you lost? "He was shocked and then said," Son, I'm from Yongxing, Yuezhou, and this is my hometown! " As he spoke, he burst into tears.
The little boy still smiled and asked, "How come we haven't seen you?" So you must be from Beijing? He Zhang Zhishuang quickly replied, "I'm from Beijing. I passed the exam when I was your age and I haven't come back yet. Of course you haven't seen me! "Then why don't you settle in Beijing? Beijing luxury! " The other boys asked. He said: "No matter how good Beijing is, it is not as good as my hometown! Trees also know that leaves fall to their roots, not to mention us? " He Zhangzhi said with emotion. Suddenly, a little boy said, "I heard from my grandfather that there is a big official in Beijing who is from here." His name is He Zhangzhi. Is that you? " He nodded. "That was you! Grandpa, you can stay at my house these days! Find a place to live in the future! My grandfather is very enthusiastic, maybe you know him! "
"Thank you!" He moved Zhang Zhi very much. Later, he really met his childhood playmate, the child's grandfather. He couldn't believe it.
That night when he was in the little boy's home, when he was excited, he wrote the famous "Homecoming Book":
Young people leave home, old people come back,
The local accent has not changed.
The children don't know each other,
Smile and ask the guest where he is from.
7. Rewrite the Homecoming Book into an article with a self-designed title of not less than 300 words, and the geese fly south. He has got the approval of the emperor and can retire and go home. He dreamed of his hometown many times in his dream. At the thought of going home this time, he was as happy as if he had returned to his childhood.
He recalled the scene of trying to be an official as a teenager. In a blink of an eye, I have been an official in the imperial court for 56 years. I am eighty years old and six years old. But he can't change his hometown accent. As soon as he looked in the mirror, he saw that his sideburns had turned white, and he was no longer the youth when he took office.
He Zhangzhi rides on horseback and travels thousands of miles to anxious to return every day. He laughed all the way and even sang his own "Liu Yong". Finally, I returned to my hometown after a long separation. He smelled such fresh air and such a quiet hometown. Taste the clear spring in my hometown. It's so sweet. Touching the soil in my hometown makes me feel so fragrant. The country road is still so winding, and the scene of carrying a schoolbag to school as a child seems to reappear.
He touched the old willow and said to himself, Do you still recognize me? But I still miss you. I still think about everything in my hometown. Do people in my hometown still recognize me?
At this time, a group of children, seeing He behaving unusually and full of energy, walked back and forth, thinking that he was from other places and lost his way. They surrounded him with questions. A little boy asked innocently, "Grandpa, where are you from?" Are you lost? "He was shocked and then said," Son, I'm from Yongxing, Yuezhou, and this is my hometown! " As he spoke, he burst into tears.
The little boy still smiled and asked, "How come we haven't seen you?" So you must be from Beijing? He Zhang Zhishuang quickly replied, "I'm from Beijing. I passed the exam when I was your age and I haven't come back yet. Of course you haven't seen me! "Then why don't you settle in Beijing? Beijing luxury! " The other boys asked. He said: "No matter how good Beijing is, it is not as good as my hometown! Trees also know that leaves fall to their roots, not to mention us? " He Zhangzhi said with emotion. Suddenly, a little boy said, "I heard from my grandfather that there is a big official in Beijing who is from here." His name is He Zhangzhi. Is that you? " He nodded. "That was you! Grandpa, you can stay at my house these days! Find a place to live in the future! My grandfather is very enthusiastic, maybe you know him! "
"Thank you!" He moved Zhang Zhi very much. Later, he really met his childhood playmate, the child's grandfather. He couldn't believe it.
That night when he was in the little boy's home, when he was excited, he wrote the famous "Homecoming Book":
Young people leave home, old people come back,
The local accent has not changed.
The children don't know each other,
Smile and ask the guest where he is from.
When I was an innocent teenager, I left my warm hometown. I miss my hometown. Finally, when my hair and beard turn white, I can go back to my hometown. Although my appearance has changed, my strong local accent has not changed. Although I have been away from home for so many years, my heart that loves my hometown is still beating.
One sunny morning, I rode back to my hometown, and the scenery in front of me was very familiar. The flowers are still so bright and the grass is still so green. . At present, a beautiful scene of childhood appeared again: my friends and I were fishing in the river and playing with each other. From time to time, the sound of our playing came from the river.
"Excuse me, this guest, where are you from?" I looked down and saw a child. He asked me with a smile and interrupted my dream. I can't help being speechless. I've been gone for so many years that people in my hometown don't know me!
9. When I go back to my hometown, I want to rewrite my book, which is original and not plagiarized, with at least 400 words and no more than 500 years. When I was young, I packed my bags, left my hometown and dreamed of going to the world. After going through all kinds of hardships, I finally made a career. Until now, I have been over eighty years old and returned to my hometown I miss.
A stranger in a foreign land misses his hometown all the time, so until today, his hometown accent has not changed, but his hair on his temples is sparse and gray. I used a horse to carry the goods and walked on a small road step by step. In front of me is our original town. I stopped to see my hometown for a long time.
Most children in my hometown don't know me, let alone have seen me. There are two children in front of me, staring at me blankly and looking me up and down.
"Grandpa, where are you from? Why did you come here? What can I do for you? " Two children asked, with innocent smiles on their faces.
"Ah, I'm from here. I left my hometown when I was a child. Now come and see my dear hometown! " I answered them with a smile.
There are some doubts on their faces.
At this moment, a teacher came. He is my good friend. After entering the house, we chatted about the recent situation in our hometown while drinking tea. This is a great pleasure. I can't help but hum:
"When young people leave home,
The local accent has not changed.
The children don't know each other,
Smile and ask the guest where he is from. "
After that, I wrote this poem and named it My Hometown Book.
10. Rewriting Hometown Handwriting [Rewriting Hometown Handwriting] Once upon a time, there was a young man named He who left his hometown and rewrote his hometown handwriting composition. Day after day, year after year, he grew old and returned to his hometown. But when he returned to his hometown, he was shocked and blossomed. There is also a blue lake where fish swim happily all year round. At this time, a child skipped over and asked with a smile, "guest officer, where are you from and who are you looking for?" He Zhangzhi smiled and said, "You don't know me?" The child scratched his scalp and cocked his head. In the sixth grade of primary school, I wrote a composition "Rewriting Hometown Books". When He Zhangzhi returned home, he wrote this ancient poem: When he was young, he left home and the old man returned. The local accent didn't change his hairstyle. When children meet strangers, they smile and ask where the guests are from. He rewrote the composition "Letter from Home" in 200 words.