A collection of wonderful essay correction comments
1. Content:
1. The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasps the pulse of the times, and reflects the flavor of the times.
2. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, the narrative is orderly, and there is no chaos.
3. The details are appropriate, the priorities are clear, and the ideas are clear.
Carefully selected, the materials seem to be tailor-made for the theme.
4. The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and realistic, the characters have distinctive personalities, and the images are full and vivid on the page.
5. Use the environment to highlight the mood of the characters, blend the scenes, show the emotions in the scene, and the scene with the scene.
6. The book is rich in imagination, unique in conception and does not deviate from the reality of life. It is rooted in the associations of life, broadens readers' thinking, and makes people feel lively and interesting.
7. The description of the scenery is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate and appropriate, the sceneries follow the emotions, and the scenes blend together. What is presented to the reader is like a vivid sketch that conveys emotion.
8. The imagination is wonderful, which not only originates from life, but does not lose the reality of life, and is higher than life, broadens readers' horizons, and is full of artistic charm.
9. The description of the event process is detailed and specific. Although the content is large, it appears methodical and orderly, reflecting the author's clear thinking and ability to plan the article.
10. The description of the appearance is vivid, the character's face is realistic, and the clothing is appropriate and suitable. It is like a mirror reflecting the character's personality. It is really the so-called "life depends on the relationship".
11. The description of the environment is objective and true. The environment serves the character's personality and better explains the ins and outs of the character's personality formation process.
12. The description of the expression is vivid and expressive, and in just a few words, the character's personality characteristics are clearly outlined, and the character's speech and behavior have a distinct and unique personality.
13. The content before and after is not closely related, some content is too isolated, and the connection with the main body of the article is not close enough.
14. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality traits.
15. The details are not arranged properly and the priorities are not clear enough.
16. The content is mostly line outlines and lacks detailed point drawings.
5. It is inconsistent with the flavor of the times and the content is too outdated.