? I love the moonlit night, but I also love the starry sky. Once upon a time, in July and August in my hometown, when I was enjoying the cool in the yard, I loved to watch the dense stars in the sky. Looking at the stars, I will forget everything, as if I were back in my mother's arms.
Three years ago in Nanjing, there was a back door where I lived. Every night when I open the back door, I see a quiet night. Below is the vegetable garden, and above is the starry blue sky. Although starlight is tiny to our naked eyes, it makes us feel that light is everywhere. At that time, I was reading some books on astronomy. I knew some stars, as if they were my friends. They always talked to me.
Now at sea, facing the stars every night, I know them very well. I lay on the deck and looked up at the sky. There are countless stars hanging in the dark blue sky. The ship is moving, and so are the stars. They're so low, they're really shaky! Gradually my eyes blurred, and I seemed to see countless fireflies flying around me. The night at sea is soft, silent and dreamy. I look at many stars I know, and I seem to see them winking at me, and I seem to hear them whispering. And then forget everything. In the arms of the stars, I fell asleep laughing. I feel like a child, sleeping in my mother's arms now.
One night, the Englishman who got on the boat in Rumbo showed me the giants in the sky. He pointed out: those four bright stars are the head, the body below, these are hands, those are legs and feet, and the three stars are belts. After his guidance, I really saw the giants in the sky. Look, that giant is still running!
? Around the stars, the text has written four paragraphs in turn, namely, once upon a time (hometown), three years ago (Nanjing), now, and one night (sea), expressing the author's deep affection for the stars and the sky. In this paper, the "stars" are described closely in chronological order, and the scenes of "I" looking at the stars in different periods and places are described, which expresses my love for nature and longing for a better life, giving people rich associations and beautiful enjoyment.
Full text * * * four natural paragraphs. First of all, paragraph 1 describes that "I" like watching the stars best, and recalls the scene and feelings of looking up at the stars at night in my hometown. Then, the second paragraph recalls the scene and feelings of "I" looking at the stars when I was studying in Nanjing three years ago. The last two paragraphs describe the scene and feelings of "I" watching the stars at sea, and the third paragraph is the focus of the whole paper, describing the beautiful feelings that "I" has when watching the stars in a beautiful environment every night. This passage is gradually developed according to the idea of "looking up-wanting to sleep-sleeping". The fourth paragraph says that "I" got to know the constellation shaped like a giant under the guidance of others and felt the pleasure of "the giant is still running". We turn the whole article into a mind map according to this idea. You can try to recite the third paragraph according to the map.