Bai Pu
The sunset in the lonely village, Western jackdaw in the west, an old tree smoking, and a little Fei Ying.
Green mountains and green waters, white grass, red leaves and yellow flowers.
[Notes]
1 sunset: sunset.
② Western Western jackdaw: Crows returning to the forest in cold weather.
[Appreciation]
Although it is similar to Ma Zhiyuan's Qiu Si, it also has its own characteristics. The first two sentences are drawn from Lonely Village, deliberately rendering the cold silence of autumn dusk. "A Little Hong Fei" brought vitality to the cold static picture, which caused the emotional transfer of the song. Then the poet described the beautiful autumn scenery in five colors: blue, green, white, red and yellow, from far to near, from high to low, multi-level and multi-faceted, which made the whole picture full of poetry. This song is full of artistic tension. It successfully combines the bleak scenery of autumn with the bright and gorgeous scenery, and takes the pleasing autumn scenery as the main theme of the song. It is another masterpiece of writing autumn.
Bai Pu took autumn scenery as the theme of this song, and it can be seen from its rhetoric that his literary accomplishment is extremely high. The whole work consists of some beautiful natural scenes, and Bai Pu himself, like an artist with these natural puzzles, pieced together a beautiful picture of life in harmony.
When writing autumn scenery, it is inevitable to set off a bleak atmosphere, but if the bleak atmosphere is the theme of the whole article, it will make readers feel bored and stressed. In order to avoid this situation, Bai Pu took great pains in choosing words. The first two sentences of "Lonely Village Sunset Red, Old Trees in West Western jackdaw" use six pictures of "Lonely Village", "Sunset", "Sunset", "Light Smoke", "Old Trees" and "West Western jackdaw", and any one of them represents the bleak atmosphere in autumn scenery in autumn. In order to enliven this bleak atmosphere, the author chose Flying in the Shadow as the end of the first half. As a result, the bleak picture turned to be active, and the lonely autumn scenery seemed to present another vivid life. Finally, in order to strengthen the beautiful and charming image of the author autumn scenery, he used "green mountains and green waters, white grass, red leaves and yellow flowers". "As Wen Qu's conclusion. These two sentences use five colors: green, white, red and yellow, and mix the three colors of white grass, red leaves and yellow flowers in the two colors of green mountains and green waters. "Green mountains and green waters" is a vast picture scroll, and "white grass, red leaves and yellow flowers" is a delicate picture scroll, so it is strewn at random, so autumn scenery, which was originally lonely and bleak, suddenly becomes colorful. Thus, Bai Pu's prose writing skills are brilliant.
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