There is a lot of chalk on the table in front of the blackboard. These chalks are almost at the end of their lives, and some are even too small to mention. Ding Lingling, the * * * rang in class. The students rushed to their seats and straightened their chests, waiting for the teacher to arrive. The teacher strode in, put the papers on the table and began the class. The teacher picked up a piece of chalk just enough to hold and turned to write for us from the blackboard. Sasha vujacic, sasha vujacic and chalk turned into white granular objects, left their marks on the blackboard, and then disappeared a little. "Borrowing things is better than people, supporting things to express our ambition", when this little piece of chalk wrote the last word for us, taught us the last knowledge and completed its last task, it disappeared. From this small piece of chalk, what a great quality is reflected. That is-dedication.
Dedication is a kind of selfless beauty, it is silent, but it is around us. Where cars honk, there are policemen. No matter the wind, frost, rain and snow, no matter the cold and hot summer, he (she) is sticking to his post, inhaling the exhaust gas of the car, hearing the horn and smelling the peculiar smell of the exhaust gas, but in exchange for the rapid and smooth traffic. Isn't this also a kind of dedication?
Chalk, your beauty is selfless, great beauty, dedicated to others, Tagore said: "The cause of fruit is lofty, the cause of flowers is sweet, but let me do the cause of leaves and contribute silently in the shadow." This is a tribute to you, how great you are, and I praise you, chalk!
2. How to write a composition that compares things with people in primary schools is to compare people's personality with the characteristics of something. This is also a common way to express and highlight the central idea in composition.
For example, groundnut tells the whole process of our family celebrating the harvest festival, tasting new peanuts and talking about the benefits of peanuts; Tell people to be pragmatic and useful, not decent and bad for others. When talking about the benefits of peanuts, there are a few paragraphs: Father said: "Peanut has many benefits, but one of them is the most precious: its fruit is buried underground, unlike peaches, pomegranates and apples, which hang bright red and green fruits high on the branches, which makes people feel amazed at first sight. You see it's getting shorter on the ground. When it is ripe, you can't immediately judge whether it has fruit or not. You have to dig it out to know. " We all agreed, and mom nodded. Father went on to say, "so you should be like a peanut." Although it is not good-looking, it is very useful, not something that looks good and has no practical use. " I said, "well, people should be useful, not just decent, but bad for others." The father said, "Yes. This is my hope for you. "
These paragraphs use the method of borrowing things to describe people (borrowing the characteristics of peanuts to describe how to be a man): the father leads the children to talk about peanuts in order to talk about life; He praised peanut's character and explained what kind of person a person should be. "I" learned from my father's words that "people should be useful, not only decent, but also not good to others." This understanding was affirmed by my father. This is like the finishing touch, which naturally expresses the central idea of the article.
It can be seen that, whether writing character notes or writing landscapes, the correct use of the method of metaphor can make the article more profound and the expression more subtle; It can greatly enhance the expressive force and appeal of the article.
Read the following article again and experience the characteristics and functions of metaphor:
Old apricot trees in the mountains
Apricots are ripe, just in time for the bumper wheat harvest in rural areas. One day after the wheat harvest, I took time to carry a stick with a basket on it and climbed the South Mountain.
I met my neighbor's second aunt on the way. When my second aunt saw me picking apricots, she said to me, "I have looked everywhere. There is Xinger on the tree in the second ravine in the south of Shanliang, but the apricots are green and small, and they are not delicious!" Say that finish, second aunt went down the mountain.
I climbed the ridge and saw the tree in the distance. This is the only apricot tree in that valley. When I looked closer, I saw the semi-red apricots in the green leaves on the tree, which were crowded with branches in strings. With a breeze, apricot trees shook their branches and leaves as if to say hello to me.
This is an old apricot tree, which grows beside the rocks lacking soil and water at the bottom of the ditch. Its trunk is tall, curved, thick and scarred. Obviously, it has experienced many vicissitudes. I put a stick around my waist and climbed up the tree. Sitting on the thick branches, I can see more clearly: on the branches, there is a round apricot hanging on each leaf nest. Most apricots have "yin and yang faces"-one side is green and yellow, and the other side is yellow and red; He is not small, and everyone looks like a little apple. Looking at apricots with branches among these green leaves, I don't know whether they are like pearls or precious stones, or like jadeite or agate. Squeeze a look, alas, the golden pulp is soaked in the juice and put in the mouth, sour and sweet, refreshing.
Looking up, I accidentally found a stone stuck between two branches. Oh! I got it all: My second aunt said that apricots are green and small because the trees are too high. She couldn't see the knotted apricots on it, so she only picked some small ones below. She can't climb a tree, can't reach it, and can't throw stones at it. Obviously, she really wronged this old apricot tree.
Looking at the fruit within reach of the tree, and then looking down at this weather-beaten old apricot tree, a feeling of admiration arises spontaneously. Old apricot tree, old apricot tree, you are not afraid of loneliness, difficulties and hardships, and you are rooted alone in this strange mountain, old and lasting. How many apricots have you produced for people year after year? But you don't want anything from others. When you are wronged or have a cold shoulder, your heel is still so firm and your mind is still so open and selfless. What a respectable old apricot tree! I gently removed the stone and pulled out the stick at my waist, but refused to hit it, for fear of hitting Xinger, damaging the branches and leaves of the old tree and hurting its body and mind. So, I got off the tree, put a basket on the tree, climbed up the tree, sat in the arms of the old apricot tree, picked apricots to my heart's content and enjoyed the fruits of its dedication.
This is a beautiful, vivid and touching article. I believe that after reading this article, every student will realize that this is not just a "thing"; The author eulogizes the people with the character of the old apricot tree in the mountains by metaphor, enthusiastically eulogizes the people with the character of the old apricot tree (not afraid of loneliness, hardship, rooted in the mountains, weather-beaten, old and lasting, only dedication, open-minded and selfless), and at the same time sincerely expresses great respect and love for the people with the character of the old apricot tree.
It should be noted that the characteristics of things described in words should be similar to people's personality; After reading the article, people can clearly understand what to say when borrowing things and what kind of people to praise when borrowing things. If this is not the case, the method of "comparing people with things" will lose its meaning.
3. Primary school composition, borrowing things to describe people. Plum blossoms have small petals, thin and strong branches, pale pink and fragrant all over. This is a flower that blooms proudly in winter. This is a flower that looks whiter in the snow. It is a flower that cannot be crushed by snowflakes. Yes, it is plum blossom. Flowers standing proudly in the winter snow. May, spring and summer seasons. The sun is shining and colorful. Just after the defeat of Jasminum nudiflorum and Magnolia grandiflora, small buds, strings of pink peach blossoms and lush green grass appeared in the Chinese rose. All this is just as people say, yes, I agree, spring is indeed the season when everything recovers. She gives people the feeling of light green, faint green, endless green, and in summer, the green is deeper, that is green, and the green is deeper. However, winter, the most lifeless season of the four seasons, gives people the feeling that it is a vast expanse of whiteness, and the snow is overwhelming and sweeping, which can only add a little pine and cypress to this withered winter, and at this time it is covered with thick snow. Those flowers in summer are just dead branches and rotten leaves at this time. There is no longer the charm, wealth and air of the past, and their only twigs are too tired to breathe under the weight of snow, so they can only wait for death sadly. At this time, in the snow all over the sky, in the lament of everything, plum blossoms appeared and stood proudly in the snow. Her tall and thin branches are not affected by the snow at all. Snow proud first frost. In full bloom in the snow, full of pride, standing upright, standing upright, regardless of the wind and snow blowing ... this is why I love plum blossoms, strong and unyielding. Although it is too cold to go out in winter, plum blossoms bloom in the snow. The spirit symbolized by this small flower is far more noble than the colorful roses, Chinese rose and peony in that summer. Look at that plum blossom. Seemingly pure white snow, only a pool of stains is left after the snow melts, which is flashy. And plum blossom, she is really pure white, sometimes with a little pink, she left a fragrance that seems to be absent. Her simplicity and elegance are beyond the reach of ordinary people. Look at the plum blossoms standing proudly and blooming in the snow. Don't you feel her beauty at all? Didn't you suddenly see a plum blossom standing in front of you in the vast snow, and you wouldn't be infected by her indomitable spirit of not being afraid of cold and frost? Have you ever thought that she is somewhat similar to the indomitable spirit of the Red Army soldiers? Don't you think this notice covered with heavy snow really symbolizes our revolutionary soldiers, their indomitable spirit, their courage to fight and their will quality? People praise the peony because of its wealth, the lotus because it emerges from the mud without being stained, and I praise the plum because of her indomitable spirit, which also symbolizes those who are more and more brave in the face of difficulties! +1 Like 1 Other answers (1)
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4. How do primary school students write the article "Poplar" by metaphor? First, write the characteristics of Bai Yang, which is tall, graceful, adaptable and full of vitality, so as to express his father's ambition to take root in and build the frontier.
At the same time, it also expresses the father's expectation and trust for his children. He believes that children will thrive in the sandstorm like little poplar and become a new force in building the frontier. "Peanut" is also a metaphor for people. Asking peanuts to bury their fruits in the ground illustrates the truth of being a man-to be realistic, not just decent.
For example, groundnut tells the whole process of our family celebrating the harvest festival, tasting new peanuts and talking about the benefits of peanuts; Tell people to be pragmatic and useful, not decent and bad for others. When talking about the benefits of peanuts, there are a few paragraphs: Father said: "Peanut has many benefits, but one of them is the most precious: its fruit is buried underground, unlike peaches, pomegranates and apples, which hang bright red and green fruits high on the branches, which makes people feel amazed at first sight.
You see, it grows short on the ground, and when it matures, you can't immediately tell whether it has fruit or not. You have to dig it up to know. "We all agreed that my mother nodded.
Father went on to say, "so you should be like a peanut." Although it is not good-looking, it is very useful, not something that looks good and has no practical use. " I said, "well, people should be useful, not just decent, but bad for others."
The father said, "Yes. This is my hope for you. "
These paragraphs use the method of borrowing things to describe people (borrowing the characteristics of peanuts to describe how to be a man): the father leads the children to talk about peanuts in order to talk about life; He praised peanut's character and explained what kind of person a person should be. "I" learned from my father's words that "people should be useful, not only decent, but also not good to others."
This understanding was affirmed by my father. This is like the finishing touch, which naturally expresses the central idea of the article.
It can be seen that, whether writing character notes or writing landscapes, the correct use of the method of metaphor can make the article more profound and the expression more subtle; It can greatly enhance the expressive force and appeal of the article. Read the following article again and realize its characteristics and functions: the old apricot trees in the mountains are ripe and catching up with the rural wheat harvest.
One day after the wheat harvest, I took time to carry a stick with a basket on it and climbed the South Mountain. I met my neighbor's second aunt on the way.
When my second aunt saw me picking apricots, she quickly told me, "I have searched everywhere. There is Xinger on the tree in the second ravine in the south of Shanliang, but the apricots are green and small, and they are not delicious!" Say that finish, second aunt went down the mountain. I climbed the ridge and saw the tree in the distance.
This is the only apricot tree in that valley. When I looked closer, I saw the semi-red apricots in the green leaves on the tree, which were crowded with branches in strings.
With a breeze, apricot trees shook their branches and leaves as if to say hello to me. This is an old apricot tree, which grows beside the rocks lacking soil and water at the bottom of the ditch. Its trunk is tall, curved, thick and scarred. Obviously, it has experienced many vicissitudes.
I put a stick around my waist and climbed up the tree. Sitting on the thick branches, I can see more clearly: on the branches, there is a round apricot hanging on each leaf nest.
Most apricots have "yin and yang faces"-one side is green and yellow, and the other side is yellow and red; He is not small, and everyone looks like a little apple. Looking at apricots with branches among these green leaves, I don't know whether they are like pearls or precious stones, or like jadeite or agate.
Squeeze a look, alas, the golden pulp is soaked in the juice and put in the mouth, sour and sweet, refreshing. Looking up, I accidentally found a stone stuck between two branches.
Oh! I got it all: My second aunt said that apricots are green and small because the trees are too high. She couldn't see the knotted apricots on it, so she only picked some small ones below. She can't climb a tree, can't reach it, and can't throw stones at it.
Obviously, she really wronged this old apricot tree. Looking at the fruit within reach of the tree, and then looking down at this weather-beaten old apricot tree, a feeling of admiration arises spontaneously.
Old apricot tree, old apricot tree, you are not afraid of loneliness, difficulties and hardships, and you are rooted alone in this strange mountain, old and lasting. How many apricots have you produced for people year after year? But you don't want anything from others.
When you are wronged or have a cold shoulder, your heel is still so firm and your mind is still so open and selfless. What a respectable old apricot tree! I gently removed the stone and pulled out the stick at my waist, but refused to hit it, for fear of hitting Xinger, damaging the branches and leaves of the old tree and hurting its body and mind.
So, I got off the tree, with a basket on my arm, climbed up the tree, sat in the arms of the old apricot tree, picked the apricots heartily, and enjoyed the fruits of its dedication heartily. This is a beautiful, vivid and touching article.
I believe that after reading this article, every student will realize that this article is not a simple "thing"; The author eulogizes the people with the character of the old apricot tree in the mountains by metaphor, enthusiastically eulogizes the people with the character of the old apricot tree (not afraid of loneliness, hardship, rooted in the mountains, weather-beaten, old and lasting, only dedication, open-minded and selfless), and at the same time expresses his great love for the people with the character of the old apricot tree from the heart. It should be noted that the characteristics of things described in words should be similar to people's personality; After reading the article, people can clearly understand what this article is trying to explain and what kind of people it is praising.
If this is not the case, the method of "comparing people with things" will lose its place. Niu Niu is ordinary, but also great. A cow has a diagonal on its head, slender limbs, strong body and slender tail.
Young and strong cows can pull plows, cows can produce milk, cowhide can make shoes, and beef can be eaten. It can be seen everywhere in the countryside.
Cattle gave their lives to people, but died silently in a corner of the cowshed, asking for nothing in return. No one will notice the death of a cow, and no one will remember what it did for us after it died.
Cows are like this, born in obscurity in the world, left in obscurity, but left many things to people. But it never asks for anything, only.
5. The composition in the fifth grade of primary school is a metaphor for people. Some people often compare teachers to candles, burning themselves and illuminating others; Others compare teachers to gardeners, watering and fertilizing our seedlings every day. However, I want to tell you more, Miss Liu, that you are really like my mother and care about us as much as your mother.
Teacher, you taught me from grade four to grade six. For more than two years, you have been taking care of me like a mother. I didn't understand your severity at first, and even spoke ill of you behind your back. Teacher Liu, now I want to tell you that I have finished reading Understanding. Teacher Liu, you want me to correct myself. Teacher Liu, sometimes you lose your voice in order to give me lessons. I really want to buy you a throat lozenge!
Teacher Liu, do you remember? Once, the girls' dormitory in our class was deducted 5 points for talking during recess, and we were afraid to admit it. Only two girls admitted it themselves. The teacher was sad to learn that you were afraid to admit that your students had made mistakes, and you put the blame on others. Now I know that our selfish behavior is a disgrace to our teachers! I remember that all the girls in our class stayed after the third class in the afternoon, and all the boys went to eat. But girls should punish themselves with actions in order to be a noble person in society in the future. After you knew it, you rushed to persuade us. Think about how naive we were then! Mr. Liu, you would rather stay with us than eat. We all cried when we saw you like this. From then on, we made up our minds to be honest people. Teacher Liu, you must be very hungry that day, but you smiled and told us that you were losing weight. Teacher Liu, in order not to do anything wrong again, I would rather you gain weight!
Miss Liu, although you are a strict teacher, you are very concerned about our physical and mental health. Sometimes you get tired of studying and play with us like a child. Sometimes you play crazy, you are joking. Your jokes are humorous and pleasant to listen to. You can tell them to us one by one through stories, and often make the students laugh. Teacher Liu, I want to tell you that being fat is better than being thin! People often say that the heart is wide and the body is fat! You watch the host in Hong Kong on TV, "Pangpang", and she smiles, so charming.
Teacher, I also want to tell you that it is because you are broad-minded and treat us as your children that you live so smartly and fully! Miss Liu, I love you!
"It" is familiar to everyone. "It" sacrificed itself and brought light to everyone. What is this? It's a candle that everyone thinks is inconspicuous. It is usually forgotten and thrown in a drawer or corner, but when the power is cut off, it will come forward, illuminate others and consume itself.
Our teacher is like a candle. For us, teachers have to prepare lessons and attend classes every night. They gave up the good old days. For us, white hair has grown on their heads and contributed to the cultivation of the next generation.
Take Mr. Li for example. Every time he starts teaching a new lesson, he always sits in front of the computer and checks the information. It takes 1-2 hours. Every time he goes to the textbook, several students don't listen. Are they worthy of the teachers who teach them? In my opinion, Mr. Li is just a glowing candle. He used knowledge to light up our way forward and make us useful to society.
And retired teacher Xia. Although she doesn't have to look up information like Miss Li, she is 75 years old, and she still has to copy papers, music scores and help write a composition ... In my opinion, there is only one candle left, but the candlelight is still shining!
Ah! We should learn the spirit of candles!
6. The composition in the fourth grade of primary school is a metaphor for people's 500-word shell life.
Pearl is the glory of life brewed by a shell after suffering. Life is like a shell, and shells live. Yes, just like your mother.
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The father who came back from a business trip brought one back to his mother who came back from a business trip. Looking at the big ivory pearls on it, my thoughts suddenly returned to the time I spent in Beihai that summer vacation.
"pearls are round particles produced in the shells of some mollusks (such as mussels), which are milky white or yellowish and shiny. It is formed by the pathological changes in this kind of animals or the entry of sand grains and microorganisms from outside into their shells. Used as an ornament ... "Looking at the motionless shells in the water, listening to the staff's detailed explanation of pearls and shells. They are neither biology teachers nor biologists, but they know a lot. I listened to his explanation with great interest, imagining in my mind that these shells were struggling in pain. After a period of time, beautiful pearls will be bred in their bodies, and I suddenly feel a little sad and sad. Maybe it's pity for these little creatures. So I stopped listening, turned and walked outside the pearl factory, staring at the sea. The pain of the shell is stuck in my heart like pieces, lingering. However, with the passage of time, that memory was gradually forgotten. Looking at this necklace now, my memory is gradually coming back.
Look at the happy mother's face wearing a necklace. Although it is still so gentle and beautiful, it is no longer the case. The passage of time, the torture of disease, in front of this strong woman who has been running around for many years, mercilessly carved a mark. A mother can't see her children all day, can't enjoy the warmth of her family, and runs around the land of her motherland alone. I don't know how much pain she has experienced and endured in recent years. To be sure, mom must be a successful woman, even if she doesn't earn that much money. Mom is very successful and great. There are two children at home, which is doomed from the beginning. In today's society, if you want your brother's family to live a happy life, your mother's responsibility is much heavier. My mother is a strong person. From then on, my mother went from Xi 'an to Shanghai to work hard. With her own strength and love for her family, she kept moving forward. Those feet have gone through most corners of the motherland and many parts of the world, and my mother has never stopped working hard. Loneliness can't make her shrink back, and illness can't stop her. How many times, watching my mother leave alone with luggage, that figure is taller and stronger than Valkyria. As time goes by, every effort of my mother is like a pearl, shining with undiminished brilliance in my memory.
Today's mother, who has just experienced the torture of lumbar hyperosteogeny, went home during a short sick leave, in order to give her children the maternal love they didn't get, and also to let her tired heart rest at home for a while. In fact, my mother's running is the embodiment of maternal love, so I don't know. A string, string together memories, just like my mother's love and her dedication have never stopped. Think about it this way, how appropriate this necklace is for mom! Mother is like that shell, hiding her home in it and guarding it with love. Once there is any difficulty, she wants to come in, and the love that wraps everything will turn the difficulty into a pearl. Mother used her own pain to make life and love create ordinary and extraordinary miracles.
Mother tells the true strength and suffering with her own experience. I will never forget my mother's back, like a pearl brewed with a shell and shining life.
Life is like a shell, and shells live. Yes, just like your mother.
7. Write a composition that describes people with things. An ordinary cylinder of 400 words, covered with a red coat and wearing an "antenna" on its head. This is a candle.
Candles are very common things, I believe everyone has seen them! Very cheap, all over the world. You must be surprised to see this. Candles are too common. Why should I bother to introduce them? Indeed, the candle is very common, but its spirit of silently paying for others deeply attracts me. It lights itself up, illuminates others and asks for nothing in return. Thinking of this, I can't help but think of the cultivators of the motherland's flowers, the pillars of the motherland, and the teachers who silently pay for us. The teacher comes back to school early every day, teaching us the truth of being a man and imparting us rich knowledge. Everyone says that the teacher is a gardener and a bright light in the vast sea of people. But I want to say that the teacher is a candle. "One day as a teacher, life as a father." Teachers cultivate the flowers of the motherland with hard work and sweat, and let us become contributors to the motherland. We are never selfish and ask for nothing in return. If there is no teacher in life, just like there is no candle in power failure, life will fall into darkness. At this time, I remembered an ancient poem I recited last semester: silkworms in spring should spin until they die, and candles should drain the wick every night. This sentence is perfect for teachers. Teachers insist on attending classes until they are white-haired, just like candles, sacrificing themselves to illuminate others.
Candle, it is so ordinary and so great. In the future, I will be like a candle, giving silently and selflessly to the society.
8. In the fourth grade of primary school, figurative compositions are very common, but they are also great.
A cow has a diagonal on its head, slender limbs, strong body and slender tail. Young and strong cows can pull plows, cows can produce milk, cowhide can make shoes, and beef can be eaten. It can be seen everywhere in the countryside. Cattle gave their lives to people, but died silently in a corner of the cowshed, asking for nothing in return. No one will notice the death of a cow, and no one will remember what it did for us after it died. Cows are like this, born in obscurity in the world, left in obscurity, but left many things to people. But it never asks for anything, just a pile of hay and a cowshed. Mr. Lu Xun once said: "A thousand fingers are pointed, and you are willing to bow your head." Cattle eat grass and milk.
This unknown cow reminds me of similar people in my life. Farmers, factory workers and school teachers work in obscurity like cows, asking for nothing in return. Without them, how can society continue to exist? Without farmers, people will have no food and vegetables to eat; Without workers, there would be no tall buildings; Students can't learn knowledge without teachers.
In the west, there are many such people. In July 2006 1, the Qinghai-Tibet Railway was opened, which reminded me of those volunteers who participated in the western development. They endured severe cold, drought and floods, which brought prosperity to the western part of the motherland. They insisted on doing such a difficult thing. But how much did they get in return? Don't we have such a spirit? In fact, as long as everyone works hard, everyone can be unknown and selfless.
I respect cows. They are diligent, hardworking and selfless for unknown people. Can be compared with pine trees and poplars; You can sit with the Four Gentlemen. I must learn this spirit of cattle!
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9. How to teach fifth-grade pupils to write compositions using metaphors? One night, I was doing my homework in my room and my parents were surfing the Internet. Suddenly, the lights in the room flashed a few times, and unconsciously, the lights at home dimmed. Ah, the power is out.
It's dark at home and I can't see my fingers. I'm sitting alone in a dark room, a little scared. At this moment, a lamp appeared beside the door. It turns out that my mother brought me a lamp. Mother put the candle on my desk. Suddenly, the whole room was lit by candlelight, and I was at ease in doing my homework.
Finally, I finished my homework. Just as I was leaving the room, I was surprised to find that the candle was only half burned. I sat down again and stared at the candle, watching it burn bit by bit. At this time, I was moved by the spirit of candles. It burns itself, but it brings light to people. Although it has an ordinary appearance, it has a valuable spirit. At this moment, in my eyes, it is no longer an ordinary candle, but a great person, a selfless dedication. It is not for fame and fortune, nor has it ever thought about itself, but silently let its own fire light up the darkness. Can be said to be the ninth composition network. Original composition It gave life to human beings without reservation. This is the spirit of candles.
Suddenly, the lights at home came on again. The result is a strong call. However, the candles on the table have burned out and turned to ashes. Although the life of candle is short, it brings light to people during the power failure, and its life is meaningful. At this time, I remembered a proverb: "The silkworm in spring will weave until it dies, and the candle will cry the wick away every night."
Although candles are ordinary, they have a spirit of obscurity and selfless dedication. We should be a person with candle spirit and make our contribution to the society and the country!