(handout quote: President Zi Qiao)
First, how to appreciate quatrains
Second, talk about harmony poems.
Third, the third way to learn to catch quatrains
First, how to appreciate quatrains
Last time we talked about image concentration, seeing the big from the small. Poets in the prosperous Tang Dynasty described the image creation of quatrains as "making quatrains like a scene in a window, with a narrow stand and a broad vision." ("Sao Tan Secret Language"),
So today, I mainly talk about how to appreciate quatrains, generalize by partiality and win by metaphor.
Positive description is an inevitable description, which uses the most pen and ink. The right foil is often twice the result with half the effort. Another kind of quatrains is to avoid the short and use the long, that is, Liu Xizai said: "quatrains take a deep road and have endless meanings. The front side does not write the back side, and the back and sides do not write. You must know that poles are wonderful, just as you see shadows. " "There are birds singing in spring and insects singing in autumn. Creation is also a metaphor, and quatrains are like seeing the big picture in a small way." ("Art?" The Outline of Poems also says: "The Seven Wonders are deviant teachers, not necessarily starting an array, but just flags, people who fight mountains or underground." ("Poetry around the Furnace")
In the prosperous Tang Dynasty, quatrains writers paid special attention to the use of metonymy, and suggested that they should be slightly selected from the front and the side, so as to achieve the effect of being concise and seeing the big picture from the small.
For example, Liu's "five musts" Chun Xue "
The spring breeze is full of snow, floating around and everywhere.
You look like a flower, but you are in Los Angeles.
It seems to describe Chun Xue, like a work of chanting catkins with salt, but "You look like a flower, but you are in the middle of Los Angeles" implies that for the poor people outside Los Angeles, they finally survived the snowy winter in hunger and cold, looking forward to the arrival of spring, but what does this mean to them? Do they think snowflakes are flying like flowers? The poet didn't say it, but it's not hard to see the hardships and resentment brought by the lost threats and disasters.
The strength of this poem lies in the last sentence, and the strength of the last sentence lies in the word "partial", which constitutes the contrast between emptiness and reality, two realms, two lives and two feelings. The poet's love and hate, sympathy and hatred are also integrated into this contrast.
However, due to the side of contrast, the appearance of contrast, the different situations revealed by contrast, and the theme it breeds, all remain outside the poem, opening up a broad imagination space for readers. Because "the front does not talk about the side", it is implicit and thought-provoking.
Cen Can's "Four Wonders"? Spring in the mountain house:
There are blackbirds flying in Liangyuan at dusk, and there are three or two families in the order.
I don't know how many people will go, but old flowers are coming.
The use of flowers and trees shows people's sadness mercilessly, and it is also a slight picking on the side. The effect is much better than telling the truth about the past and the present. With so many examples of poetry cited, I think everyone understands the method of "generalizing by analogy and winning by metaphor".
Let's learn what harmony poetry is.
Second, what is harmony poetry?
Harmony poem: refers to singing with others as a poem. Also refers to this kind of chorus poem. And reading hè means singing and answering.
There are roughly the following ways to write poetry:
1 and the poem, only for poetry, has no rhyme with the original poem;
According to rhyme, also known as homophonic, harmonious poems and poems belong to the same rhyme department, so it is not necessary to use their original words;
3 rhymes, also called from the cloud. That is, the words in the original rhyme do not have to be in order;
4-step rhyme, that is, using the original rhyme and the original word, the order must be the same.
Harmony is echo. In traditional poetics, harmony poems consist of more than two poems, the first is the original song, and the second is the echo poem.
Look at the example. The original poem belongs to Sister Yu Zhou, the founder of our small fishing village, while the model poem belongs to the teachers of our small fishing village in different periods.
Teacher Yuan Yu:
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/fishing boat sings late
The green sticks in the forest are exposed, and the piano sounds beautiful.
Wandering warblers lie in the wild room, quiet and quiet.
The following is the first example, and poetry, which is only paid for poetry and has no rhyme with the original poem.
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/Yuzhu Mo Yun
The breeze curled up in the south of the Yangtze River, and green sticks hung with spring beads.
This is a stranger outside the world of mortals, and the innocent heart is contained in a fog.
This is the second example. Rhyme, also called homophonic, means that the poem and the poem belong to the same rhyme, so it is unnecessary to use their original words.
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/Er Yuxuan
Bamboo straw sandals invite wild cranes, and mountains blow springs into the piano.
High winds also send music between clouds, and fluctuations only produce overtones.
This is the third example, using rhyme, also called from the cloud. That is, the words in the original rhyme are used without following the order.
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/Cheng Rui
Quietly explore the arm into the void, attracting jade dew to wash the soul.
Thousands of bamboos are playing in the morning breeze, birds are singing softly and sisters are singing.
This is the fourth example, step rhyme, which is to use its original rhyme and original words, and the order must be the same.
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/Zhong Yi Pavilion
In the lush spring, a few sang Xia songs.
Who let the morning light wear dew, making it fragrant, gentle and pure?
Talk about the format of pasting poems:
When we are in harmony with poetry, it is modest to write "rough harmony"; Writing "original jade" when attaching the original is a respect for the original author. You should write like this when posting!
Let's learn the last question.
Third, the third method of Yuyang quatrains
1 creative points
The third sentence pretends to assume or ask questions, and the fourth sentence answers.
The key is three or four sentences, the meaning must be coherent and never broken. Excuse me, where is the restaurant? The position of the third sentence must be answered clearly in the fourth sentence, that is to say, the meaning must be related.
Poetry paradigm
Du Mu's Seven Musts? Qingming Festival
A drizzling rain falls like tears on the Mourning Day; The mourner's heart is going to break on his way.
Excuse me, where is the restaurant? The shepherd boy pointed to Xinghua Village.
Let's look at the position of the third sentence, "Excuse me, where is the restaurant?" The fourth sentence "The shepherd boy points to Xinghua Village" is the answer to the third sentence.
People ask, you have to answer, right?
The third sentence asks an example.
First, the third sentence begins with "I ask", "I want to ask", "I ask" and "I want to ask", followed by words such as "he" and "who" to clarify what I am asking, and the fourth sentence is also an answer.
Such as: "Seven Wonders? Success is on the boat. "
Wang Ben
The south of my hometown is endless, and the clouds on the water are deep and oblique.
If you want to know what floating life is like, try to see Huayang in the wind.
Secondly, the third sentence also uses the words "question" and "question", and three or four sentences are used as cross-examination language, so the fourth sentence is written as "nothing", "a few", "he" and "who", not the third sentence.
Such as: "Seven Wonders? Hejuan "
Su Shi
Peony, pine and cypress were planted for a while, and the spring breeze was free and open.
How many people don't come to see flowers?
"The four wonders? On the way to Qiupu
Du Mu
The autumn rain is continuous and the mountain road is poor, and the stream wind blows one shore.
Ask Hongyan, who just came to Hansa's house, when did she pass by my hometown Ling Du?
Let's enjoy this poem: the first two sentences of the poem are painted on the periphery, showing a bleak picture. How to develop, deepen and set off the emotional vortex in the next step? The poet turned his attention to yan zhen in the cold pavilion, and three or four sentences were false and true, so he asked questions and immediately turned up waves, which was a wonderful pen.
Conceptually, it means:
First, along Hong Fei's route, people's thoughts extend from the immediate realistic scene to the distant horizon, expanding the picture of poetry;
Secondly, when I asked about birds, I made a metaphor, which clearly showed the loneliness and silence of the journey;
Third, to send affection to geese reflects the poet's suffering from displacement when he has a home. These meanings are not directly spoken, but embedded in the scenery, which makes people feel in secret chanting. There are no words, and it's fun. The third sentence is well turned, and the fourth sentence is like berthing naturally with an underwater ship, and the wind is infinite.
Third, use the third sentence as the language of cross-examination.
Start with the words "He", "Who", "Several", "An" and "Na", or answer with the fourth sentence.
Such as: "Seven Wonders? Weiwangdi
Bai Juyi
Flowers are lazy, birds are careless, and horses are idle.
Before spring comes, where is the mind? Wicker is powerless to Wei.
Or the fourth sentence also inherits the previous sentence and asks questions in one breath.
Such as: "Seven Wonders? Title calligraphy and painting
Lu Rong
The forest house is heavily resting on the wild pond, and the water is thousands of hectares.
When the new year is over, I'm going to take advantage of the mountain people to cool off for a few days.
Fourth, the third sentence is also used as an interrogative language, but the words "he" and "who" are not at the beginning of the sentence, but in the sentence.
For example:
"The four wonders? Send Du XIV to Jiangnan. "
meng haoran
Jason Wu is the hometown connected with water, and you are going to Chunjiang.
Where is the sail at sunset, where is the intestines at the end of the world?
"The four wonders? Smell the flute on a clear night.
Zhongshun
People in the small building were drunk at the beginning of the month, thinking all the way across the ocean.
The piccolo is full of fragrant snow and plum blossoms.
2 creative steps
Use the scene, roll call time.
Point out the place, people's implementation behavior and spatial environment.
The meaning of the opening sentence and the bearing sentence must be connected and never broken (you must pay attention to this for beginners)
Turn to hypothesis or question conversion, raise the height in the space-time environment of 1 and 2 sentences, and point out the theme.
Hold on to the question (that is, the third sentence) and answer it.
Examples of three poems
The cliffs are stormy, and the Forbidden City is sparse year after year.
Who hates Danqingli, leaving Holly crying for cuckoo?
-Title Hu Yukun Song Mei The picture shows Cheng Yicang
Xuanzong Imperial Temple Mountain is hollow, and the boat in Xiao Drum Tower is a thing of the past.
What is like dividing water in Maoling, tears in the autumn wind and south rocks?
-Four of the six miscellaneous poems on Cooked Lake.
Taihua is far from Wan Li in the south and everywhere in the west.
Asking for money in the boudoir, autumn rain and autumn wind cross Baqiao.
-Eight Bridges send the second of two songs.
Jiayang post road Wangjiang, cold rain to send late autumn.
Who knows the scene of a stroke? Dai Songniu from Yangzhou.
-Jiajiang Road, the second of two songs
Qian Jing has brushed off the deer's head, and the wind and rain are unwilling to be idle.
The place that pedestrians are most worried about is the murmur of water in pavilions.
-Luojiang Yi Night Rain
Mian's romantic life lasts forever, and the banks in Zhou Yuliang face Jiangcun.
What if you are extremely smart and take medicine to get rid of lumens?
—— Phoenix slope hangs Pang Shiyuan
Let's call it a day. This is homework:
The fifth lecture is the first stage of the study of unique fishing villages;
Today, we learned the third method of "Harmony Poetry" and "Fishing the Ocean", so we will do our homework according to these two methods.
Let's talk about a poem:
Seven-stop Tour and Quiet Cloud
Song sushi
Peony, pine and cypress were planted for a while, and the spring breeze was free and open.
How many people don't come to see flowers?
Requirements:
1 Adopting the third method of ocean fishing is correct.
2 semantic connection, can not be broken.
The third sentence must be transformed by asking questions, keep a certain distance from the sentences of 1 and 2, and point out the theme.
The fourth sentence firmly grasps the answer to the question.
4. Use the first three methods of harmony poetry (harmony poetry, rhyme, rhyme) to carry out harmony poetry.
Seven wonders. Watch peony, pine and cypress.
? -rough and "rhymes with Liu Jingwen"
Text/spring breeze is not as good as you.
Peony is noble and brilliant for a while, and pine and cypress have no flowers for four seasons.
Excuse me, where do the workers in the world want to go in this life?
The fifth lecture on the first phase of Jueyan in Xiaoyucun
(handout quote: President Zi Qiao)
First, how to appreciate quatrains
Second, talk about harmony poems.
Third, the third way to learn to catch quatrains
First, how to appreciate quatrains
Last time we talked about image concentration, seeing the big from the small. Poets in the prosperous Tang Dynasty described the image creation of quatrains as "making quatrains like a scene in a window, with a narrow stand and a broad vision." ("Sao Tan Secret Language"),
So today, I mainly talk about how to appreciate quatrains, generalize by partiality and win by metaphor.
Positive description is an inevitable description, which uses the most pen and ink. The right foil is often twice the result with half the effort. Another kind of quatrains is to avoid the short and use the long, that is, Liu Xizai said: "quatrains take a deep road and have endless meanings. The front side does not write the back side, and the back and sides do not write. You must know that poles are wonderful, just as you see shadows. " "There are birds singing in spring and insects singing in autumn. Creation is also a metaphor, and quatrains are like seeing the big picture in a small way." ("Art?" The Outline of Poems also says: "The Seven Wonders are deviant teachers, not necessarily starting an array, but just flags, people who fight mountains or underground." ("Poetry around the Furnace")
In the prosperous Tang Dynasty, quatrains writers paid special attention to the use of metonymy, and suggested that they should be slightly selected from the front and the side, so as to achieve the effect of being concise and seeing the big picture from the small.
Like what? Liu's five musts? Chun Xue "
The spring breeze is full of snow, floating around and everywhere.
You look like a flower, but you are in Los Angeles.
It seems to describe Chun Xue, like a work of chanting catkins with salt, but "You look like a flower, but you are in the middle of Los Angeles" implies that for the poor people outside Los Angeles, they finally survived the snowy winter in hunger and cold, looking forward to the arrival of spring, but what does this mean to them? Do they think snowflakes are flying like flowers? The poet didn't say it, but it's not hard to see the hardships and resentment brought by the lost threats and disasters.
The strength of this poem lies in the last sentence, and the strength of the last sentence lies in the word "partial", which constitutes the contrast between emptiness and reality, two realms, two lives and two feelings. The poet's love and hate, sympathy and hatred are also integrated into this contrast.
However, due to the side of contrast, the appearance of contrast, the different situations revealed by contrast, and the theme it breeds, all remain outside the poem, opening up a broad imagination space for readers. Because "the front does not talk about the side", it is implicit and thought-provoking.
Cen Can's "Four Wonders"? Spring in the mountain house:
There are blackbirds flying in Liangyuan at dusk, and there are three or two families in the order.
I don't know how many people will go, but old flowers are coming.
The use of flowers and trees shows people's sadness mercilessly, and it is also a slight picking on the side. The effect is much better than telling the truth about the past and the present. With so many examples of poetry cited, I think everyone understands the method of "generalizing by analogy and winning by metaphor".
Let's learn what harmony poetry is.
Second, what is harmony poetry?
Harmony poem: refers to singing with others as a poem. Also refers to this kind of chorus poem. And reading hè means singing and answering.
There are roughly the following ways to write poetry:
1 and the poem, only for poetry, has no rhyme with the original poem;
According to rhyme, also known as homophonic, harmonious poems and poems belong to the same rhyme department, so it is not necessary to use their original words;
3 rhymes, also called from the cloud. That is, the words in the original rhyme do not have to be in order;
4-step rhyme, that is, using the original rhyme and the original word, the order must be the same.
Harmony is echo. In traditional poetics, harmony poems consist of more than two poems, the first is the original song, and the second is the echo poem.
Look at the example. The original poem belongs to Sister Yu Zhou, the founder of our small fishing village, while the model poem belongs to the teachers of our small fishing village in different periods.
Teacher Yuan Yu:
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/fishing boat sings late
The green sticks in the forest are exposed, and the piano sounds beautiful.
Wandering warblers lie in the wild room, quiet and quiet.
The following is the first example, and poetry, which is only paid for poetry and has no rhyme with the original poem.
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/Yuzhu Mo Yun
The breeze curled up in the south of the Yangtze River, and green sticks hung with spring beads.
This is a stranger outside the world of mortals, and the innocent heart is contained in a fog.
This is the second example. Rhyme, also called homophonic, means that the poem and the poem belong to the same rhyme, so it is unnecessary to use their original words.
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/Er Yuxuan
Bamboo straw sandals invite wild cranes, and mountains blow springs into the piano.
High winds also send music between clouds, and fluctuations only produce overtones.
This is the third example, using rhyme, also called from the cloud. That is, the words in the original rhyme are used without following the order.
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/Cheng Rui
Quietly explore the arm into the void, attracting jade dew to wash the soul.
Thousands of bamboos are playing in the morning breeze, birds are singing softly and sisters are singing.
This is the fourth example, step rhyme, which is to use its original rhyme and original words, and the order must be the same.
"The four wonders? Qingqi "
Text/Zhong Yi Pavilion
In the lush spring, a few sang Xia songs.
Who let the morning light wear dew, making it fragrant, gentle and pure?
Talk about the format of pasting poems:
When we are in harmony with poetry, it is modest to write "rough harmony"; Writing "original jade" when attaching the original is a respect for the original author. You should write like this when posting!
Let's learn the last question.
Third, the third method of Yuyang quatrains
?
1 creative points
The third sentence pretends to assume or ask questions, and the fourth sentence answers.
The key is three or four sentences, the meaning must be coherent and never broken. Excuse me, where is the restaurant? The position of the third sentence must be answered clearly in the fourth sentence, that is to say, the meaning must be related.
Poetry paradigm
Du Mu's Seven Musts? Qingming Festival
A drizzling rain falls like tears on the Mourning Day; The mourner's heart is going to break on his way.
Excuse me, where is the restaurant? The shepherd boy pointed to Xinghua Village.
Let's look at the position of the third sentence, "Excuse me, where is the restaurant?" The fourth sentence "The shepherd boy points to Xinghua Village" is the answer to the third sentence.
People ask, you have to answer, right?
The third sentence asks an example.
First, the third sentence begins with "I ask", "I want to ask", "I ask" and "I want to ask", followed by words such as "he" and "who" to clarify what I am asking, and the fourth sentence is also an answer.
Such as: "Seven Wonders? Success is on the boat. "
Wang Ben
The south of my hometown is endless, and the clouds on the water are deep and oblique.
If you want to know what floating life is like, try to see Huayang in the wind.
Secondly, the third sentence also uses the words "question" and "question", and three or four sentences are used as cross-examination language, so the fourth sentence is written as "nothing", "a few", "he" and "who", not the third sentence.
Such as: "Seven Wonders? Hejuan "
Su Shi
Peony, pine and cypress were planted for a while, and the spring breeze was free and open.
How many people don't come to see flowers?
"The four wonders? On the way to Qiupu
Du Mu
The autumn rain is continuous and the mountain road is poor, and the stream wind blows one shore.
Ask Hongyan, who just came to Hansa's house, when did she pass by my hometown Ling Du?
Let's enjoy this poem: the first two sentences of the poem are painted on the periphery, showing a bleak picture. How to develop, deepen and set off the emotional vortex in the next step? The poet turned his attention to yan zhen in the cold pavilion, and three or four sentences were false and true, so he asked questions and immediately turned up waves, which was a wonderful pen.
Conceptually, it means:
First, along Hong Fei's route, people's thoughts extend from the immediate realistic scene to the distant horizon, expanding the picture of poetry;
Secondly, when I asked about birds, I made a metaphor, which clearly showed the loneliness and silence of the journey;
Third, to send affection to geese reflects the poet's suffering from displacement when he has a home. These meanings are not directly spoken, but embedded in the scenery, which makes people feel in secret chanting. There are no words, and it's fun. The third sentence is well turned, and the fourth sentence is like berthing naturally with an underwater ship, and the wind is infinite.
The third is to use the third sentence as the language of interrogation.
Start with the words "He", "Who", "Several", "An" and "Na", or answer with the fourth sentence.
For example:? "The four wonders? Weiwangdi
Bai Juyi
Flowers are lazy, birds are careless, and horses are idle.
Before spring comes, where is the mind? Wicker is powerless to Wei.
Or the fourth sentence also inherits the previous sentence and asks questions in one breath.
For example:? "The four wonders? Title calligraphy and painting
Lu Rong
The forest house is heavily resting on the wild pond, and the water is thousands of hectares.
When the new year is over, I'm going to take advantage of the mountain people to cool off for a few days.
Fourth, the third sentence is also used as an interrogative language, but the words "he" and "who" are not at the beginning of the sentence, but in the sentence.
For example:?
"The four wonders? Send Du XIV to Jiangnan. "
meng haoran
Jason Wu is the hometown connected with water, and you are going to Chunjiang.
Where is the sail at sunset, where is the intestines at the end of the world?
"The four wonders? Smell the flute on a clear night.
Zhongshun
People in the small building were drunk at the beginning of the month, thinking all the way across the ocean.
The piccolo is full of fragrant snow and plum blossoms.
2 creative steps
Up? The first sentence uses the present scene, roll call time.
Point out the place, people's implementation behavior and spatial environment.
Opening sentence and bearing sentence? The meaning must be connected, not broken (beginners must pay attention to this)
Turn to hypothesis or question conversion, raise the height in the space-time environment of 1 and 2 sentences, and point out the theme.
Hold on to the question (that is, the third sentence) and answer it.
Examples of three poems
The cliffs are stormy, and the Forbidden City is sparse year after year.
Who hates Danqingli, leaving Holly crying for cuckoo?
-Title Hu Yukun Song Mei The picture shows Cheng Yicang
Xuanzong Imperial Temple Mountain is hollow, and the boat in Xiao Drum Tower is a thing of the past.
What is like dividing water in Maoling, tears in the autumn wind and south rocks?
-Four of the six miscellaneous poems on Cooked Lake.
Taihua is far from Wan Li in the south and everywhere in the west.
Asking for money in the boudoir, autumn rain and autumn wind cross Baqiao.
-Eight Bridges send the second of two songs.
Jiayang post road Wangjiang, cold rain to send late autumn.
Who knows the scene of a stroke? Dai Songniu from Yangzhou.
-Jiajiang Road, the second of two songs
Qian Jing has brushed off the deer's head, and the wind and rain are unwilling to be idle.
The place that pedestrians are most worried about is the murmur of water in pavilions.
-Luojiang Yi Night Rain
Mian's romantic life lasts forever, and the banks in Zhou Yuliang face Jiangcun.
What if you are extremely smart and take medicine to get rid of lumens?
—— Phoenix slope hangs Pang Shiyuan
Let's call it a day. This is homework:
The fifth lecture is the first stage of the study of unique fishing villages;
Today, we learned the third method of "Harmony Poetry" and "Fishing the Ocean", so we will do our homework according to these two methods.
Let's talk about a poem:
Seven-stop Tour and Quiet Cloud
Song sushi
Peony, pine and cypress were planted for a while, and the spring breeze was free and open.
How many people don't come to see flowers?
Requirements:
1 Adopting the third method of ocean fishing is correct.
2 semantic connection, can not be broken.
The third sentence must be transformed by asking questions, keep a certain distance from the sentences of 1 and 2, and point out the theme.
The fourth sentence firmly grasps the answer to the question.
4. Use the first three methods of harmony poetry (harmony poetry, rhyme, rhyme) to carry out harmony poetry.
Seven wonders. Watch peony, pine and cypress.
? -rough and "rhymes with Liu Jingwen"
Text/spring breeze is not as good as you.
Peony is noble and brilliant for a while, and pine and cypress have no flowers for four seasons.
Excuse me, where do the workers in the world want to go in this life?