The original text of Wen Yiduo's poem is as follows:
One sentence can bring disaster,
One sentence can light a fire,
< p>Although it has not been revealed for five thousand years,Can you guess the silence of the volcano?
Maybe he was possessed suddenly,
Suddenly there was a thunderbolt in the blue sky
It exploded:
"Our China!"
How should I say this today?
It’s okay if you don’t believe that iron trees bloom,
then listen to this sentence:
Wait until the volcano can’t help but keep silent;
Don't tremble, stick out your tongue, stamp your feet,
wait for a thunderbolt from the blue sky,
explode:
"Our China!"
< p>The poet used an angry tone to expose the dark social reality of China at that time. He expressed his pursuit and praise of the ideal China by calling out the phrase "our China" in many ways, showing the poet's full confidence in the power of the people and the poet's deep patriotism. doctrine thought.The poet uses a lot of metaphors in his poems to make the poems more implicit and visual. "If you say something, it will be disaster, and if you say it, it will light a fire." "One sentence" is a metaphor for fire, and "fire" is a metaphor for democratic revolution. "If you say it, it will be disaster" implies the fear and suppression of the democratic revolution by the reactionary rulers. "Can light a fire" implies widespread dissatisfaction and resistance among the people.
"Volcano" is a metaphor for the people who contain huge power, and "Thunderbolt" is a metaphor for the majesty and power of the popular revolution. "Our China" implies that the future motherland will be dominated by the people, expressing the poet's yearning and praise for an ideal China.
At the same time, repeated rhetorical techniques are used to emphasize the theme. The last three lines of the two stanzas are repeated, only replacing "suddenly" with "wait until". The rhetorical device of "repetition" is used here. The poem uses repetition and has the wonderful effect of singing three sighs. It not only emphasizes "thunderbolt" and "our China", highlighting the theme, but also has climaxes one after another, which strengthens the high and confident passion and style of the whole poem.
The form of the whole poem is neat, the language is natural, easy and full of rhythm.
The chapters of the whole poem are harmonious and the rhythm is strong. The poet advocates "new metrical poetry" and advocates the "architectural beauty of poetry" with "the symmetry of stanzas and the evenness of sentences". This poem implements the poet's artistic proposition. The language is easy and natural, basically extracted from spoken language, and is very expressive.