The third day begins and ends, and the composition materials are extracted. Principle 1: The structure of the beginning and the end is rigorous.
Example: 1, (at the beginning) At the end of the city, there are no bustling markets and flashing neon lights; At the end of the city, there are only weather-beaten dilapidated shanty towns; At the end of the city, there are a group of people like them.
(End) The sun rises from the horizon, illuminating the end of the city and their lives.
2. (At first) Standing on the banks of the Seine, you can feel the pulse of fashion and elegance in Paris; Being on Fifth Avenue, you can feel the gorgeous and gorgeous atmosphere of new york. Strolling through the streets of Ginza, you can appreciate the ancient and modern culture of Tokyo; Stay by the Huangpu River, and you can appreciate the unique and inclusive Shanghai spirit. ...
(End) I am facing the city in infinite thinking, touching its shell and eager to touch its soul. I hope that one day its inner substance will be as beautiful as its outer shell. I hope those falsehoods and frivolities will become real and solid. The hope is that "the clouds sell rain and the clouds fall, and the color area is bright." I hope we can touch the beauty of the flowers in this city again from the inside out.
Principle 2: Natural gathering
Example: (At first) Life is actually a process. Many things, many people, are not understood until they fail, and they are mature. When failure comes, don't be sad, but see it as an opportunity for growth and exercise. Rush over, you will have a better and brighter life waiting for you, and you will have a sense of accomplishment; If you back down, you will only have more failures and more regrets in your life.
(End) When we are near the end of life, when we look back on this life, especially those difficulties and failures, we will feel that perhaps it is because of these that we have enriched our lives, overcome them and made our lives more perfect.
Principle 3: Make the finishing touch.
Exodus: (at the beginning) Sorrow has existed since ancient times. However, since ancient times, who has seen such inspiring and earth-shattering unity? "Historical Records" has a cloud: the people are in harmony with the people, then the family is safe, and the monarch is in harmony with the people, then the country is prosperous. Today, this is the joint efforts of people and people, people and countries, and countries and the world. Why are you worried about family unrest and national prosperity?
(End) With Qingshan, we met again in the wind and rain. And the bond that connects people all over the world may be such an expectation: make a heart for the world, make a life for the people, continue to learn from saints, and create peace for all generations!
Principle 4: Use poetry.
Example: The streamer dumped people easily, turning cherries into red and plantains into green. Walking on your own life, it is sometimes difficult to see if you have taken a detour. You might as well jump out and adjust the focal length to show the best life.
Principle 5: Use rhetoric skillfully.
Example: Although we don't have Li Bai in our life, "Oh, let a spirited person go to his favorite place to take risks and spin for 1000 yuan, and they all come back!" " Ideal makes it bright, struggle makes it real, and harvest makes it have a golden poetic style.
Break the lock of fate with persistence, live poetically, plant ideals and make unremitting efforts. I believe that there will be a harvest of "geese lead my heart to worry, mountains hold a good moon"!
The classic composition begins with 1: parallel topics, take the lead.
Life is like wine, fragrant or strong, because honesty makes it mellow; Life is like a song, high or low, because it is trustworthy, so it becomes sweet; Life is picturesque, either bright or simple, because it is honest, it becomes beautiful.
Parallelism can increase the momentum of the article and make it catchy, rhythmic and rhyming. Used for objects, which can be colored; Used for narration, it can be hearty; Used for reasoning, it can be magnificent; Used for debate, can be overwhelming; Used for lyrical and wanton expression.
2. Be scattered and staggered, and get into the business skillfully.
If I can hold a handful of moonlight, I choose the softest one; If I can pick the red leaves of Xiangshan, I choose the most gorgeous one; If I could pick all the stars in the sky, I would choose the brightest one. Maybe you will say that my choice is not the best, but my choice, I believe.
The combination of the whole scattered sentences can make the sentence patterns flexible, add a sense of melody and phonology, and give people a sense of beauty. At the beginning, the arrangement is composed of moonlight-softness, red leaves-splendor, stars-brightness, with bright colors and the beauty of sound and rhyme.
3. The quotation is in the title, elegant and heavy.
There is a saying in Zhang Chao's Dream Shadow in Qing Dynasty: "Ju takes Yuan Ming as her bosom friend, Mei takes He Jingfu as her bosom friend, and Zhu thinks her bosom friend." When facing the sea; Face the blue; I can't help thinking: Who is the bosom friend of the sea?
Quote the previous sentences, follow the style of quotation, and skillfully lead to the topic.
4. Delicate description, image into the topic
I used to look at life with watery eyes, and life was as gloomy and distant as autumn water. The sun shines through the maple forest, and I look up along the beam, but I seem to see endless calluses, as white as fog and snow and as soft as grass. I saw my mother's eyes and the moment when she made a choice.
Descriptive language is often rigid and plain, but if candidates can skillfully grasp the characteristics, pay attention to reference and be flexible and innovative, they can break the rigid description and plain narrative and make the image description elegant and poetic.
5. The epilogue pops up to inspire the theme.
Life is accidental and death is inevitable. Life and death are nothing but cheers and shouts. So, between life and death-life?
The beginning of the epigram is striking. Life is accidental, death is inevitable, and life is between life and death. Concise, simple, profound and incisive.