(2) Use synaesthesia and exaggeration to turn the intangible into tangible.
(3) To express the world of music through the magnificent mythical world with the romantic creative method.
The first paragraph: It's high in autumn in Zhang Tong, Shu, and the empty mountains are not flowing.
Jiang Yue wept for it, and Li played for China.
Closer to home, Wu Si Shutong has a rigorous writing structure, so as to set off the performer's superb skills, that is, writing things, that is, writing people, killing two birds with one stone. The word "high autumn" not only means that the time is late autumn in September, but also means "crisp autumn" (which means "late autumn")
Write music in two or three sentences. The poet deliberately avoids the invisible, colorless and elusive subject (hissing), and writes from things (such as "empty mountains and condensed clouds"), which is both true and illusory and extremely expressive.
As soon as the beautiful and melodious string songs came out, the clouds in the empty Shan Ye slumped and stagnated, as if they were listening; Xiang Eqing and Motome, who are good at drumming, were also moved to tears by music.
The word "decadent" is in contrast with the word "Zhang", the former is full and the latter is weak. The word "decadent" vividly depicts the modality of the moment when the cloud is hit by music.
The phrase "empty mountain" empathizes with things, and writes that the cloud has human auditory function and thoughts and feelings, which seems to be a step further than "if there is love in the sky, the sky will be old" ("Golden Copper Immortal Ci Han Ge"). It complements the following sentence "Jiang 'e", trying to set off the magic and beauty of the sound, which is "earth-shattering, make the gods cry"
In the fourth sentence, "Li plays the China", use the "symbol" pen to point out the player's surname and first name, and explain the performance place. In the first four sentences, the poet deliberately broke through the general writing method of telling people, time and place in sequence, and made careful arrangements. First, he wrote the piano, wrote the sound, and then wrote the people, time and place in tandem, interspersed among them. In this way,
The second paragraph: Kunshan jade broken phoenix calls, lotus cries, and Lan Xiang laughs.
Cold light melts in front of the twelve gates, and the twenty-three silk moves the purple emperor.
"Kunshan Jade Broken, Phoenix Crying, Lotus Crying, Vanilla Laughing" is written with music on the front, each with its own characteristics. The sentence "Lotus" is written in the form of sound.
"Kunshan Jade Broken Phoenix Call" is used to contain music, which shows that the music is extremely passionate, explosive and overwhelming. "Phoenix" is a legendary precious bird that lives in Kunlun Mountain. After "Kunshan Jade Broken", the voice of the phoenix living on it is naturally shrill and tactful, and the sad mood stretches in it-focusing on the ups and downs of music.
The idea of "lotus dew makes vanilla laugh" is very strange. Dewy hibiscus flowers (that is, lotus flowers) are not uncommon, and blooming orchids do give people a feeling of wanting to laugh. They are all incarnations of beauty. Poets use "lotus dew" to describe the sadness of the piano, use the sound of crying to describe the sadness of the music, and use the visual feeling of dew rolling down on the residual lotus to compare the sadness of the music. I think so. "Laughter" has the property of appealing to hearing, and it can also give people a visual feeling of "laughing like a flower", which can not only be heard, but also witnessed. This expression is really wonderful-deliberately rendering the music beautiful and beautiful.
Thinking: Kunshan Jade Broken Phoenix Calls, Lotus Crys, and Xianglan Laughs is the only poem that directly describes music. What are the successful artistic techniques? What kind of artistic effect does this writing have?
The artistic technique of synaesthesia has been successfully applied in "Kunshan Jade Broken Phoenix Crys, Lotus Crys and Xianglan Laughs". Both poems are mainly based on phonology, but they can also arouse the sense of image. "Sound" is not synaesthesia, but these two poems can arouse the image sense of music and form synaesthesia from sound.
"Kunshan Jade Broken" can evoke the image of landslides at first and describe the spectacular music;
The Call of the Phoenix can arouse the image sense of loneliness and wailing and describe the bitterness of music.
"Lotus Dew" can arouse the image sense of dew and residual lotus, and describe the desolation of music;
The laughter of vanilla can evoke the image that orchids bloom like smiles, which is similar to the joy of music.
"The cold light melts in front of the twelve gates, and the twenty-three silk moves the purple emperor." -writing music from cheerful to cold, returning to the main mood of music.
The next sentence is about the sense of time and space created by the Twelve Doors. Naturally, the artistic conception of poetry has been extended from the world to the fairy house, and the cool music has been skillfully written from the world to heaven. At this point, the whole universe seems to have only beautiful melody left.
The images of "Gao Qiu" in the first sentence and "Twelve Gates" and "Purple Emperor" here create an infinite space-time in the universe, as if everything is empty, and graceful music embraces the whole world.
The third paragraph: Nu Wa tempered the stone to make up the sky, which made the autumn rain rock.
Dream into the holy mountain to teach the gods, and the old fish dance in the waves.
Wu sleeps in osmanthus trees, flying barefoot and slanting wet rabbits.
The poet put on the wings of imagination and flew to heaven and mountains, bringing readers into a broader, deeper, more magical and magnificent realm.
These two poems, "Nu Wa tempered the stone to make up the sky, and the stone shook the autumn rain", spread to the sky. In the place where Nu Wa tried to mend the sky, even the five-color stones were shattered by music, which led to an autumn rain. It is hard to describe the shocking power of music.
"Autumn rain" can make people have rich associations: "Autumn rain" is a sad image, and the magnificent autumn rain after "breaking ground" symbolizes overwhelming sadness; The sound of autumn rain falling on the ground is like the compact and complicated music. The music ended in this earth-shattering cold mood. This kind of imagination is so bold, unexpected and touching. The word "tease" closely links the powerful charm of music with the above-mentioned strange and magnificent scenes. Moreover, the scenes of breaking ground and autumn rain can also be regarded as musical images.
On the holy mountain, the gods were taught the missile piano. The aging and emaciated ichthyosaurs in the fairyland danced in the waves with the wind when they heard the music. WU GANG in the Moon Palace forgot to cut down the tree when he heard the music, and leaned on the laurel tree to listen attentively and fell asleep. The jade rabbit under the laurel tree also entered the country without noticing that the cold dew got wet all over her body. The poet recalled the whole performance process, and the wonderful music made people feel like they were in a fairyland, thus imagining the obsession of the gods in the celestial world and rendering the beauty of music from the perspective of musical effect.
This poem describes the feeling of listening to music with gorgeous rhetoric and imaginative imagination, and depicts an earth-shattering sad song. Poetry itself, like music, has a sad and gorgeous temperament.