With vivid and accurate metaphor, the little poet thinks that her father's snoring is "like a small train on the mountain"; Dad's snoring stopped, and she felt that the train had arrived. The whole poem is full of childlike interest and full of affection between father and daughter.
Dad's snoring is a childlike poem for children. The little poet keenly grasped "Dad's snoring" as the subject of writing, because she found dad's snoring very interesting. With vivid and accurate metaphor, the little poet thinks that her father's snoring is "like a small train on the mountain"; Dad's snoring stopped, and she felt that the train had arrived. The whole poem is full of childlike interest and full of affection between father and daughter.
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Dad's snoring
Author: Yan Ni (contemporary)
Dad's snoring
Like a small train on the mountain.
It reminds me.
Beautiful forest
Dad's snoring
Always on and off.
Makes me worry that the train will derail.
good
Dad's snoring stopped.
Has the train arrived at the station?