Drunk in the dream of watching the sword under the oil lamp, dreaming back to the old days of the military camp, a horn sounded. Eight hundred miles to divide the main fire, fifty strings to cross the Great Wall, and autumn soldiers on the battlefield.
Horses run like Ma Delu, bows and arrows fly like thunder. It is a good idea for the emperor to complete the great cause of recovering the lost land of the country and gain a good reputation from generation to generation. Poor hair has become a white-haired man!
Teaching objectives
1. Read and write the whole word silently; Grasp the meaning of words; Knowing the world, Xin Qiji; Learn the poetic skills of "contrast".
2. Imagine the situation of Dream Back and experience the author's strong and sad complex feelings.
Process and method: emotional reading, imagining scenes and images, understanding the author's emotional turning point and accumulating language expression.
Teaching emphasis: experience the grandeur and tragic of the poet.
Teaching difficulty: understanding the strange and ingenious structure of this word.
Teaching type: new teaching
Teaching hours: 1 hour.
teaching process
First, wine tasting culture, the introduction of new courses
A poem leaves a faint ink fragrance in the book, and this fragrance is always filled with intoxicating wine fragrance. It embraces the poet's feelings and impacts the reader's mind. Please take this as an example:
"We open your window, cross the gardens and fields, and talk about mulberry and hemp with the cups in our hands." This cup of wine has a love for rural natural scenery and simple rural life.
"I always remember the sunset in Xiting, and I don't know where to go." This cup of wine is a girl's innocence, liveliness, freedom and happiness.
"I advise you to drink more wine. People have no reason to go out of Xiyangguan." This glass of wine has warm wishes. I hope your friends cherish their future.
"When drinking songs, life geometry? For example, morning dew is more bitter to go to Japan. " This glass of wine has the sigh that life is short and time is fleeting.
"The wine is still open and the temples are slightly frosty. Why not?" This cup of wine is strong and full of pride.
"Pure wine is expensive in a golden cup, a pot of ten thousand copper, and a jade plate is expensive in shame." This glass of wine has the sadness of life and the loss of heroism.
"The moon tower is high and lonely, and the wine turns into acacia tears." This cup of wine and a little bit is an endless yearning for my hometown.
A glass of wine can make you happy or worry; Unrequited ambition, or success, caring about the world, or missing relatives and friends, wandering around, or heroic optimism, all kinds of emotions in the world, are melted in this glass of wine.
Let's soak a glass of wine today and taste Xin Qiji's "strength" and "sadness"!
Second, students pave the way
2. epigraph, Chen Tongfu knowledge.
Third, reading perception:
? 1. Read freely and pay attention to the rhythm and emotion of words and sounds.
Drunk in the dream of watching the sword under the oil lamp, dreaming back to the old days of the military camp, a horn sounded. Eight hundred miles to divide the main fire, fifty strings to cross the Great Wall, and autumn soldiers on the battlefield.
Horses run like Ma Delu, bows and arrows fly like thunder. It is a good idea for the emperor to complete the great cause of recovering the lost land of the country and gain a good reputation from generation to generation. Poor hair has become a white-haired man!
2. Read aloud to guide the analysis.
3. Read freely and feel the emotion of the content.
Third, read the body odor
1, "drunk watching the sword", three characteristic movements. What did you see about Xin Qiji? Please speak in four words.
My heart is depressed, I drown my sorrows in wine, my talent is not met, and my ambition is hard to pay; The ideological trend is surging, disturbing sleep; Eager to kill the enemy, gallop on the battlefield, and make achievements. ...
Conclusion: It is meaningful to express the inner activities and various situations of the characters with actions. It creates an image of a brave man who has not met his talents. He not only has the ambition to kill the enemy and serve the country, but also has the grief and indignation that he has no way to serve the country.
2, "dream back", what a hazy and beautiful word! What kind of dream did the poet return to through the time and space of memory? Please take this as an example:
In this dream, there is a company that plays the horn. Barracks break out one after another, and their powerful horns are inspiring.
In this dream, there is a military camp life. The soldiers rejoiced and enjoyed the roast beef presented by the general, and the army played inspiring fighting music. In this crisp autumn season, the soldiers lined up neatly to be reviewed by the general. Eating beef, playing battle songs, reviewing the barracks life of the troops, rendering the fighting life of the troops and showing the high morale of the officers and men. The confrontation of "commanding 800 Li, the Great Wall with 50 strings" has created a heroic and high-spirited atmosphere for the soldiers in the barracks. The word "autumn" in the sentence not only points out the season of combat, but also renders the cold atmosphere when reviewing the army, setting off the magnificent military capacity.
In this dream, there are scenes of fighting. Horses run like horses, sharp arrows shoot out, and bowstrings ring like thunder. Under the leadership of the iron horse, the general flew to the front, bowstring thundering, and ten thousand arrows were fired in unison. The enemy fell; Defeated soldiers, messy; The general took the lead, pursued victory, and ended the battle instantly; The victory song was played and the flag fluttered happily. This is an image of an anti-Japanese hero who took the lead in killing the enemy and serving the country. "The horse is flying fast and the bow is like a thunderbolt", which has duality and exaggeration. Select two typical things on the battlefield-fast horse and strong bow, and summarize and vividly reproduce the fierce battle scenes from two aspects of hearing and vision respectively.
In this dream, there is ambition. Complete the great cause of the restoration of the central plains by the king and win the good name after his death. "Putting aside the things of kings in the world and winning the fame before and after death" shows the author's ambition to make contributions to the country and the people.
Summary: In this dream, there is a heroic and lofty military camp life, a fierce battle scene and an ambition to make contributions. The whole class read aloud heroically: dream back …
3. "Poor White Hair Born", just reaching the ideal peak, suddenly plummeted and fell back to the cold reality. Where is the poet's pity? What are the benefits of ending a word with this sentence? ?
Unfortunately, the ambition of killing the enemy and serving the country all one's life will never be realized, and the ideal of recovering lost ground will become a bubble.
Unfortunately, the strategy of killing the enemy was not adopted by the rulers, and the motherland lost a lot of land.
It's a pity: I'm old, my sideburns are like frost, I'm aiming high and I can't use it.
It's a pity: I can only take wine as my companion, caress my sword without sleep, relive that year in a drunken dream, chase the battlefield and have fun for a while.
Fortunately, in a short sentence, I expressed my grief and indignation with a sigh.
Fortunately, the way of writing came to an abrupt end, such as the eagle protruding into the sky, just as it was soaring in the sky, it suddenly fell; In sharp contrast with the previous article, from hope to despair, from ideal to reality, from majestic to tragic, it has a strong artistic effect. In this contrast, we can imagine the corruption and incompetence of the court in the Southern Song Dynasty, and the people were in dire straits, and all patriots could not serve the country. How can it not be deeply regrettable?
(expand: use the last sentence to deny the previous article. The more vigorous the previous article is, the heavier the contrast at the end.
Li Bai's Visit to Yue Gu: Gou Jian, the king of Yue, broke Wu Gui, and the soldiers returned home. The ladies-in-waiting stayed in Man Chun Hall for a long time, but today only partridges can fly!
In Li Shangyin's "Jia Sheng: Visiting Courtiers in the Propaganda Room", Jia Sheng's tone is even more incoherent. Poor midnight is unprecedented, and Mo Wen people ask ghosts and gods.
Du Mu's "Three Poems of Crossing Huaqing Palace": Chang 'an looks back and embroiders in piles, and the top of the mountain opens a thousand times. As soon as I rode on the smile of smoke and smoke, no one knew that the fresh fruit litchi was sent from the south. )
Fourth, reading appreciation.
1, from the whole word point of view, what do you read the poet's feelings?
Theme: This word recalls the poet's fiery fighting life in the military camp, expresses the author's desire to kill the enemy and serve the country and recover lost ground, and also expresses his grief and indignation that his ambition is hard to be rewarded and his hero is dying.
2. From the whole word, what artistic features do you think this word has in its conception?
First, thinking is progressive.
The whole words are arranged in an orderly way according to "drunkenness-dream-reality". The dream also shows many aspects of "pre-war preparation, soldiers on the battlefield, charge and success", vividly depicting the whole process of a patriot galloping on the battlefield. Interlocking, step by step, and rigorous composition.
Second, the structure is strange and ingenious.
Generally speaking, disyllabic words describe scenery in the first movie and express emotions in the next movie. This word breaks the traditional format. The first sentence and the second sentence take care of each other and describe reality. The middle eight sentences are written in one go, describing dreams and combining reality with reality. Recalling the past in my dream, I am heroic and passionate, and I am lyrical by the scenery; In reality, ambition is hard to pay, grief is deep, and the mind is straightforward. The contrast between them deepens the theme and shows Xin Qiji's original artistic spirit.
Xin Qiji said that his writing "Breaking the Array" was "arguing irrationally". Try to explain it with his works.
Obviously, Fu Zhuang Ci is about the life scene in a military camp. Watching swords, listening to the horn singing beyond the Great Wall, roasting for 800 miles, arranging troops on the battlefield, riding fast horses and holding strong bows are all extremely brave and vigorous. In terms of thoughts and feelings, he expressed his ambition to make contributions to the country; From the perspective of language style, it is magnificent but not "slim", so it is called "Fuzhuang Ci".
Conclusion:
Yong Yu le Jing kou gu Bei ting nostalgia
Xin Qiji?
It is difficult to find a hero like Sun Quan after the history of the country. Dancing in the pavilion, singing on the platform, wind and rain always blow away romantic feelings. The setting sun shines on the grassland covered with grass and trees. People say that this was once the place where Emperor Wu of Song lived. Looking back, how powerful he was when he led the Northern Expedition and recovered lost ground!
However, Li Liu Yi Long, the son of Liu Wang Yilong, was a great success and made a swift northern expedition. Instead, he made the Northern Wei Emperor Wu Tuoba fly south and returned to the north bank of the Yangtze River, which was severely hit by his opponent. I have been back to the south for forty-three years, and I still remember the war scenes in Yangzhou. Looking back, there was a crow club drum under the beaver temple. Who will ask, how is Lian Po's appetite when he is old?