How do you feel about reading this poem?

crescent

sandpiper

The crescent moon bends,

Like a boat.

I went home by boat,

It's opposite Qian Shan.

The flowers are overflowing and the night is warm.

It's spring in my hometown.

Is someone on fire?

I landed in your dream.

1. "Flowers are fragrant and the night is warm. My hometown is spring. " Is this scene true? Why?

A: Not really. Here, the poet turns the imaginary into reality, and praises his hometown with images such as "Spring", "Flower" and "Ye Xiang", giving people a multi-sensory experience and beautiful enjoyment.

2. What does "you" mean in "Are you asleep"?

You mean hometown.

3. What does the poet use to express his feelings?

A: The poet expressed his homesickness with the imagination of boat, spring and shore.

Take a crescent moon and pick a wisp of local accent.

Sha Ou, formerly known as Wang Shida, was born in Chongqing. 1940, he began to publish his works under the pseudonym Sha Ou. 1946 After graduating from university, he went to Shanghai to co-edit New Poetry and Spring Grass Poetry. After 1949, he was transferred to Beijing Xinmin Daily to edit popular poems with Wang Yaping. 195 1 year transferred to the literature studio of the Chinese Writers Association. From 65438 to 0957, he served as the editorial board of Poetry Magazine. 1962 transferred to Heilongjiang Federation of Literary and Art Circles to engage in professional creation, and then presided over the editing of Northern Literature. He has published 365,438+0 kinds of poems, including Song of Hometown, Hometown, First Snow, Mei, Love Poems, Lovers, Missing People, etc., with 4 sets of poems and 2 sets of essays.

This poem expresses the poet's thoughts and feelings of missing his hometown.

"The crescent moon bends like a boat." The poet compared the new moon to a boat, simple but sincere. Reminds us of the children's song "The curved moon is like a boat", which makes people feel very cordial. This sentence is also the introduction of the whole poem, and I will imagine it later. "I went home by boat and crossed Qian Shan." Poets in a foreign land can only use this leaf boat to set foot on the road to hometown (homesickness). Ye Xiang. My hometown is spring. " Here, the poet turns the imaginary into the real, and praises his hometown with images such as "spring", "flowers" and "Ye Xiang", giving people a multi-sensory experience and beautiful enjoyment. "Are you asleep? I landed in your dream. " It seems that the relatives in my hometown are also dreaming the same dream to welcome the return of the wanderer, which shows the poet's attachment and yearning for his relatives in my hometown.

In this short poem, the poet expressed his nostalgia and yearning for his hometown, and the rich imagination is undoubtedly the wing that makes the poet's thoughts soar. Two "You" refer to hometown, and their function in poetry is to make the expression true. The poet created a very beautiful artistic conception for us. After reading this poem, we will think of the murmur of "Looking up, I found it was moonlight, and then sinking, and I suddenly thought of home" and the bitterness of "Being in a foreign land, I miss my family twice every holiday".

Come, embrace a crescent moon, pick a wisp of local accent, and feel poetry and life.

Text exploration

1. The image of "looking from a distance".

In this poem, the poet launched a vision and meditation on his life. There is a high artistic generalization between the two "distant views" in the poem. The poet's artistic generalization lies in his extraction of two different "visions" from the years: the "vision" in the previous section describes the loveliness of his childhood, and the "vision" in the latter section brings endless weight and emotion to the whole poem. Surpassing and sighing over the long and hard life are all produced at this moment of "looking back". It was at this moment that "looking back" was changed and the long life became clear. When I was young, the self full of longing for the future appeared in my field of vision, far away and out of reach, because there was a historical Wang Yang between the two selves.

Two different "distant views" not only connect this shore and the other shore, but also write a broad sense of vicissitudes, and at the same time let different stages of life be presented. Therefore, two different "distant views" have become mutual distant views in poetry, and it is not difficult to have a self-identity and dialogue between the past and the present.

2. The meaning of "a port far away in a foreign country" and "a vanished hometown".

The poet used the word "foreign country" in front of the first metaphor "port", because when he was young, he looked at the future with a feeling that "teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow" and was full of curiosity about the future, as if the "60-year-old" of life was a distant "port in a foreign country". In the second metaphor, because of the long and tortuous life and the incredible changes that have taken place in life, when looking back at the past, it is inevitable that there will be an ambiguous confusion and sadness, so the word "smoke" will appear in the poet's sight. It can also be said that life is like a dream.

3. Simple and highly skilled language.

"After stormy weather/Now I have arrived/Sometimes I turn around ..." The language is unpretentious, but thrilling, full of twists and turns, because it condenses the extremely difficult connotation of life. In addition, the two metaphors in the poem are also very appropriate. They not only spatialize and visualize time (that is, turn time into a specific place and image that can be seen from a distance through metaphor), but also appropriately convey the inner feelings of "then" and "now".

Understanding and analysis

Ceng Zhuo (1922 ~ 2002) was born in Huangpi, Hubei and Wuhan. He is one of the most influential poets of July Poetry School around 1940s. The "July Poetry School" at that time was a realistic lyric school based on July (founded in 1937) initiated by Hu Feng, a literary theorist. It was formed in the era of national crisis, emphasizing "fighting" and "embracing" reality. Most poets in this school of poetry are famous for their profound sense of hardship and realistic melancholy tone ... I didn't expect the early literary activities to be special.

However, in this incredible disaster, the poet has always maintained his belief in life. 1970, in the most difficult days of his life, he wrote the poem "Trees on the Cliff". It wrote a lonely, lonely and stubborn tree blown to the edge of a cliff: "Its bent body/left the shape of the wind/it seems to be about to fall into a deep valley/but it seems to spread its wings and fly …" This poem became Ceng Zhuo's representative work. The capacity and weight of this little poem with only twelve lines is enormous. He created a far-reaching artistic conception and sincere image with concise techniques. That tree is like the shape of a generation's soul. From the aging and deformed bodies of the author and many friends of the same age, we really see the moving charm of the tree on the edge of the cliff and write the heavy sense of the times that many people have had that makes the soul tremble. The rhythm and image are eye-catching, infectious, bitter and sweet, which can easily resonate with readers. His poems are moist and silent: moist as tears and bloody, and have touched the hearts of countless people.

All this is the premise for us to understand the poem "I look forward ...". References:

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