Imitation of the sixth grade children's poem "The Sun" and the children's poem "The Words of the Sun"

Do you know how to write the sixth grade children's poem "The Sun"? Imitating children's poems about the sun can be found. If primary school students want to write children's poems well, they might as well read some famous books, such as Wen Yiduo's Ode to the Sun. Although I can't write such a high-level children's poem at first, I will certainly make progress by practicing writing more.

Article 1:

music of the sun

Wen Yiduo

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The sun that stings my heart!

Drive away the wanderer's dream of returning home.

Give him another 12 hours and nine ileal bends!

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The burning sun!

Dry the dew on the grass tips.

Can you dry up and cry in the tramp's heart?

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Sun driven by six dragons!

Save me a day-to-day probation.

I ran for five years in one day. What are the disadvantages?

Sun-fast sun-sun!

Let me take you around the earth every day.

You can visit your hometown once a day!

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The rising sun in the corner of the building!

Didn't you just come from our east?

My hometown is still intact at the moment?

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The sun from my hometown!

Is the official willow in Beijing wrapped in autumn?

Alas! I am as haggard as late autumn!

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Running sun!

You look homeless, too

Ah! Your life is as unimaginable as mine!

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Self-improvement grandson!

The universe may be your hometown.

Can you show me the direction of my hometown?

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This is not like my mountains and rivers.

The sun!

The wind and clouds here have another common color.

The tone of birds singing here is particularly bleak.

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The fire of life, the sun!

But who doesn't know that you are hot at the bottom of the ball?

At the same time, the wisdom of the western hemisphere?

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It is also the sun in my hometown!

I can't go back to my hometown for a while.

Even though I recognize you as my hometown, I still get what I want.

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The sun shines with kindness!

When I see you in the future,

Just go home once.

My hometown is not underground, but in the sky!

Article 2:

Facing the sun

Author: Ai Qing

In the morning, I woke up from my sleep,

I am glad to see your brilliance;

Although I was sleepy last night,

Troubled by countless nightmares.

Your fresh, gentle, bright and clean luster,

Shining on my long-unopened window,

Paint enough paper with a pale yellow color like pollen,

Embedded in a light blue neat grid,

I was so grateful that I got out of bed.

Open and close the window for a winter,

Let you weave the bright tablecloth with all the gold wires,

Spread it out on my table by the window.

So, I was surprised to see you:

So real that there is no doubt that,

You stand on the top of the mountain opposite,

Smile so clearly.

I tried to open my eyes to see you,

Eager to capture your image,

How intense, how trance, how solemn!

Your light stung my pupils.

Sun, your immortal philosopher,

You bring happiness to the world,

Even if I have the misfortune to meet you,

I also feel your comfort in my heart.

You are the blacksmith of time,

A good life;

You cast the days into countless golden wheels,

Flying in the ancient wasteland ...

Without you, sun,

All life will crawl in the shadow,

Even with wings, it can only be like a bat.

Fly in the eternal night.

I love you as people love their mothers,

You provide light and heat for my thoughts and thoughts-

Let me live with passion and suffer for my ideals.

Until my life was taken away by death.

After a long and lonely winter,

Today, I want to go to the top of the mountain

Take off my clothes, * * *,

Bathe my soul with your light ...

Children's Poems in Sun's Hometown