Matter realizes that mischief makes gold.
Xu Jingde of Sichuan Pengshan Qinglong Junior High School
Silver
Dear students, have you ever been naughty? Do you have any naughty classmates? Yes, right?
So, have you ever thought about writing these in your composition?
Perhaps, you will worry in your heart, and such a thing can also be written into your composition?
Why can't such a thing be written into a composition?
After reading the composition of the following students, it is quite interesting!
Example 1
on vacation
Yuan Rui
"Holiday!" Everyone shouted and ran outside, and the National Day holiday lasted for 7 days. No wonder everyone is so excited. I casually stuffed the things on the table into my schoolbag, threw them into the drawer, got up and ran outside. Don't care about anything, just have fun!
When I got home, I immediately called several "friends of pigs and dogs" and made an appointment to go out to play tonight. I told my father my plan. I thought he might not agree, but my dad gave me fifty dollars readily, just telling me to be safe and careful. Ah! Let me decide the time, place, people and everything.
"Yuan Rui." While I was still eating, "friends of pigs and dogs" came to me. I speeded up my meal. After the last sip of soup, I cleared the table and went shopping with "Friends of Pigs and Dogs".
This street is so noisy that almost the whole street is crowded with people. Anyway, according to our plan, we went to the OK hall to sing loudly and vent our boredom for a few days. I didn't leave until my voice became hoarse.
Out of the OK hall, we went into the barbecue shop, and filling our stomachs was the most important thing. The five of us raised more than 200 yuan and asked for a case of beer. Barbecue food "only cares about the future". We ate and drank for three hours, and we were so anxious that we almost fainted. Maybe full or tired, barbecue food is on the table, and no one eats it. At this time, everyone stood up and said, "Let's go!" "Let's go." After settling accounts, 58 yuan is left to raise funds.
What about the rest of the money? "Just surf the Internet and don't go home tonight." I said. "yes! Get online! " My suggestion was answered. "Let's go, just go up." "Whoever sleeps will be spanked, and whoever wakes up!" Everyone said sentence by sentence and walked into an internet cafe.
The business of Internet cafes is getting better and better. Fortunately, there are still five computers available. One by one, we began to "work". At first, we all knocked on the keyboard with relish, and by three or four o'clock, the more we knocked, the worse we knocked. I don't know when I fell asleep on the keyboard. Ouch, my feet hurt! It turned out that "friends of pigs and dogs" were burning my toes with cigarette butts. I swept them away with my feet and braced myself to continue fighting. After a while, two "friends of pigs and dogs" fell asleep, and I cleaned them up in the same way. Finally, at 8 o'clock in the morning, "Go home!" I stood up and shouted. Pay, 40 yuan. It was sold on National Day. So we each shared two dollars and rode a tricycle home.
When I got home, I felt so tired that I fell out of bed and slept until after three o'clock in the afternoon. After mental recovery, I am really as happy as the first recovery from a serious illness. It's funny to think back to last night. I want to know what happened to "friends of pigs and dogs" calling quickly. However, just after dialing two numbers, I heard my father's angry voice: "What did you do last night? Is this how you treat your parents' trust? Have you forgotten that you are a middle school student? Don't even want your own body? In the next few days, you will never leave your house again! "
I drew my hand back from the phone and silently returned to my bedroom. ...
(selected from Pengshan Literature and Art)
Comment 1
How's it going? Is this classmate naughty enough? Singing in the dark, eating in the dark, drinking in the dark, surfing the Internet in the dark, entering the business OK hall, drinking, smoking and surfing the Internet all night ... are really not ordinary "amoy". After reading the composition, a strong breath of life came to us, and the images of a group of thieves and children appeared vividly in front of us. The most ingenious thing is that at the end of the composition, the little author borrows his father's words to express his thoughts on this kind of behavior, telling himself and telling children with similar behaviors: it is not allowed to betray their parents' trust, forget that they are middle school students, and are not allowed to ignore their own crazy play and punishment.
Example 2
I am very angry.
yellow peach
When I was in the first grade, I was a famous mischievous craftsman and troublemaker.
It was a young female teacher who was in English class at that time. If I don't lean, I will make trouble in English class. The student on duty called "stand up", and I quietly moved the stool of the girl at the same table. As soon as she sat down, she fell on all fours. The whole class laughed. The teacher asked me what was going on, and I pretended to be serious and said, "She accidentally knocked the stool open." The girl at the same table refused, saying that I moved. The teacher asked me to admit it, and I said, "I didn't move it." Why should I admit it? " Did you see me move it? "I was very angry. The teacher asked me to stand outside. Just stand. I don't care at all. I can watch the sky, trees and birds outside, which is much better than sitting in the classroom listening to annoying English. Standing outside, I later said, "Hi, two butterflies!" " "shout after a while:"
Look, a flock of geese! "The students' attention was focused on me, and I totally screwed up an English class.
The girl at my deskmate is a dedicated student. Since the "bench incident", she has been closely monitoring my actions, so that the teacher knows all about my practical jokes and I am often criticized. I am determined to get back at her.
One day, I found three thumbtacks. I stood up and put them on her stool. As soon as she sat down, the performance began. The thumbtack stung her. She stood up, stretched out her hand and touched it, and then cried with a thumbtack to sue me. After a while, the head teacher called me. I said, "Who knows who put the thumbtack on her stool!" " The teacher pointed to my forehead and said, "You don't have to be smart on the right path. Don't be too clever to be misunderstood! "But I went in one ear and out the other.
I often don't do my homework, and I also ask the other three "brothers" not to do their homework. The teacher punished us to stay and do it. We were hungry and bitter, so we stopped doing it! At this time, we always run as soon as the bell rings.
Once, the teacher came early and blocked all four of us. The teacher took us to the office. He walked in front and I played tricks behind. As soon as the teacher entered the room, the four of us ran back.
Go to school the next day. We know that the teacher will not leave us alone and will ask who took the lead. The three of us discussed it and put everything on a clumsy "brother" and let "brother" take the blame.
In this way, a year passed by me. In the school year exam, almost all subjects turned red, and I tasted the bitter wine I brewed. Afraid of tasting bitter wine again, I transferred to another middle school. I have changed a lot, but I often find it difficult to learn, especially English. I have to recite the words one by one.
I regret the thought of naughty days.
(Excerpted from Fun)
Comment 2
This is another classmate's naughty story. Reading the composition, we will feel novel, for the vivid life of the composition, for the real and vivid plot of the composition ... We will feel heartache, for the pride of the little author at the beginning, and for the regret of the little author later. ...
The little author is my student, as naughty as what he wrote in his composition. He is a clever boy, otherwise, where did he get the move of "shifting the bench", "trying to nail down", "skipping homework" and "framing his clumsy brother"? Unfortunately, he was "smart and mistaken" and "smart and mistaken". As far as I know, after he transferred to another school, although he was not so naughty, he could not keep up with his studies. Naughty brought him no ordinary "regret". Through the composition, we can see the tears of regret of the little author. We will secretly tell ourselves the steps to adjust reading.
A small composition can have such an effect, which is naturally successful.
Example 3
After the crash
thank
This afternoon, just after school, I rushed into the carport, took the car and went straight to the video game room, eager to play games.
I lost track of time while playing. I looked at my watch. Yo, it's half past six! Go out, get in the car and go home quickly. I must get home before seven o'clock. Dad will come to see me after work. No one will meet me. There's bound to be a stormy trial. It will be strange if I don't give up playing video games.
While riding, I thought, I must get home before seven o'clock and take out my book as soon as I get home, so as to confuse the "enemy". Thinking of this, the car rides faster.
A walking tractor crawled in front of me like an old cow. I decided to overtake. It was very troublesome to overtake from the right, just from the left. Just as I was about to overtake, the tractor suddenly turned to the left for some reason, and with a bang, I fell to the ground with my car and people. By the time I got up, the tractor had run far.
I rubbed my arm injured by a tractor and patted the dirt on my body. It's okay. It's no big deal. Picking up my bike and preparing to leave, I suddenly heard someone shout, "Wow, the wheel is flat!" " "I looked down and sure enough! A cart, I can't push it. Oh, what bad luck! I have to move the car to repair it. Repairing the car, the master took me 10 yuan. I really want to argue with him. Oh, forget it. I'm busy going home!
On the way, I thought, this 10 yuan is my "capital" for playing games. I can't just throw it away. I must call my mother to get it when I get home. But on second thought, no, you can't ask mom to take it. You can't ask mom to get it. If I am hit by a tractor on my way home, my mother will definitely ask me where I was hit and why I took this road like a barrage. Did I go to play video games again and forget what your father said last time when I played video games again?
I can't answer these questions. What shall we do? What shall I do? It seems that we have to stop talking. However, not talking means that you can't play video games for a long time. I'm so annoyed! After careful consideration, in the end, the view that "beating is better than not playing games" prevailed. You know, my dad has many ways to take care of me. Why don't you quit video games before dad knows? Otherwise, I will suffer.
Ah, unconsciously, they all came to the door!
(From Little Star)
Comment 3 The most valuable thing about this composition is the vivid psychological description, which shows the psychological activity of "I" changing rapidly with the change of the situation, and vividly shows an "I" who is addicted to playing video games to readers.
This composition does not write naughty positively, but grasps a naughty point and tries its best to spread it out so that readers can "look at rather critical".
Who said that writing naughty must have a complete naughty story?
Example 4
A troublemaker
Yang Hongxia
There is a troublemaker in my class. Said he was ridiculous and irritating.
When the bell rang, we all ran directly to the classroom, but he didn't. He had to go for a ride somewhere else. He was running around in the classroom, so naturally he was late. When the teacher asked him why he was late, he deliberately said, "Baba (our local dialect means defecation." Make the class laugh. The teacher is angry. He doesn't care whether he will be punished if he stands outside the door. As soon as the teacher turned around, he was there in a strange way, which made all the students laugh. Seeing his classmates laughing their heads off, he looked serious, put a finger on his lips and pretended to say, "Shh-don't laugh!" " "This time, the students laughed more happily.
The teacher knew that he was pretending to be a stranger outside and had to let him into the classroom. He gave a cry, jumped up and sat down in his place. Seeing that the teacher didn't pay attention, I took off my shoes, put on my ears and made a phone call: "Hey, tell everyone a good news, I succeeded!" "
The teacher finally couldn't help it and severely criticized him. Our study time has been delayed. He seems to be listening to firecrackers and laughing happily!
It is common for him not to finish his homework on time. Once, the teacher came to check his math homework. He said, "Don't panic, don't panic, I'm looking for it." Look at me, I have a bad memory and I don't know where my homework is! "The teacher said," OK, I won't panic. I'll wait for you to find it slowly. "Dally along while, he finally handed a book to the teacher. When the teacher looked at it, it was a history exercise book, and I didn't know what was scribbled on it. The teacher said patiently, "classmate, what I want is a math exercise book." He spread out his hands and said, "Oh, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I left it at home. "The teacher smiled and said," Stop acting. Do you know who you're kidding? "? It is you who are really cheated! "
After class, he was even more naughty: he took off his classmates' clothes, put them on himself, ran around the playground with his stomach bare and his back open ... once, he even wore women's clothes to school. He saw his classmates and asked, "Hey, am I beautiful today?" It makes you laugh or angry.
One day when I came home from school, several of our classmates said that I was walking with a smile. At this moment, I let out a loud whistle. As soon as I turned around, he started the bike. Seeing that we were all looking at him, he threw away the faucet and reached into his trouser pocket. Then, he put his feet on the faucet, controlled the bicycle with his feet, and rushed at us through inertia, scaring several female students to shout. And he, turning left and right, rushed in front of us in two strokes.
Several of us are talking about him behind his back, saying that he is a "troublemaker" is wrong. We should call him a funny ghost. Let him learn acting sketches, maybe he will do a lot!
I really want to see him at the Spring Festival Evening in a few years.
(Selected from Selected Compositions of Middle School Students, with changes)
Comment 4
The composition tells other people's naughty stories. Being late, checking homework and going home after class let us know a naughty, naughty, lively, humorous and clever child. After reading the composition, we seem to have laughed and been angry with the author several times.
At the end of the composition, we said, "In the past, we talked behind his back and called him a troublemaker, but it was wrong to call him a funny ghost. Let him learn to perform sketches, maybe he will make a big difference! " I admire the insight of the little author. I also hope that I can see him at the Spring Festival Gala in a few years.
Reveal inside information
How's it going? Isn't it interesting? It is certainly interesting to write naughty things into your composition, because naughty things are the most unique things, and nine out of ten naughty things are different. Can reading these novel and unique things not be "quite interesting"?
But not many people write pranks into their compositions. There are reasons for shyness, fear of shame, fear of being laughed at, fear of being satirized, and fear of exposing other people's scars. But in the final analysis, the most fundamental thing is the lack of a deep understanding of the composition materials. What is the composition material? The material of the composition is our life. Isn't this naughty in our life?
When I was a child, I was naughty, ignorant, playful, willful, naughty, and a little naughty, not shameful. What's more, telling the story of pranks is bound to be accompanied by thinking about pranks, which is the beginning of understanding mistakes, moving towards progress, getting rid of ignorance and moving towards maturity. It is of great benefit to writing and being a man. They are good materials for composition and gold!
How to write naughty things? The above composition is the best example. Write one thing. Write some things. Only one side of writing? ..... There is no fixed quantity, just like looking for gold. Whether to make rings, earrings or collars depends on demand and interest.
You are welcome to tell naughty stories according to your own needs and interests. If someone collects them into a book, it may not sell well!