Comment on Bing Xin's Teaching Example of Mother Lotus Leaf

How happy it is for children to be bathed in the glory of maternal love by their mothers; The rain in my heart is coming. Under the unobstructed sky, only my mother is the shade of my child. Read this text, let students learn to communicate and talk with the author attentively, and share their sincere and beautiful affection.

Analysis of learning situation:

Junior high school students have independent literacy. Therefore, the new words in this lesson are independently completed by students at home. The content of the article is easy to understand, and the key sentences are understood from many angles, thus inspiring students to love life and their loved ones, cultivating students' noble moral sentiments and healthy aesthetic tastes, and forming correct values and positive attitudes towards life.

Teaching process:

First of all, inject passion into the song "Mother"

Reciting "Wandering Son", this poem can be said to be the swan song of ancient people's praise for their new mother. There have been too many works praising maternal love in the past ten years, because we all live in our mother's life? Love? Supported by scaffolding. Under a clear sky. Today we are going to learn Mother Lotus Leaf, which is another voice of a child. Listen to the writer Bing Xin's deep affection for his mother.

Second, read the text and perceive the content.

1. Read the text quickly and silently, and get a preliminary understanding of the text. Ask the students: (1) Mark the new words and refer to the sound and meaning explanation in the reference book. (2) Grasp the main points and summarize the author's emotional attitude towards the lotus. (3) Guide students to evaluate and supplement the deficiencies summarized by students.

4. Read the text again (cross reading between men and women, individual free reading, etc.). Ask students to evaluate reading aloud.

Third, read aloud and feel the author's feelings.

Teacher: Poetry expresses ambition, and poetry conveys feelings. What kind of feelings does this poem express? What is the reason?

Fourth, on the basis of basic chanting, feel the writing characteristics and stimulate emotional experience.

Clear:

Lotus leaf is the image of mother.

Red-violet is the image of children.

Wind and rain are the difficulties of life.

Teacher: This poem expresses your love for your mother with concrete images. Please write a paragraph or a poem in this way to express your love for your mother.

(Students try to write, teachers guide)

Health 1: Mom's umbrella, I am a child under the umbrella.

Health 2: Mom is Chunyu, and I am Xiaomiao.

Health 3: Mom is a tall and straight tree, and I am the fruit on it.

Health 4: My mother is a lighthouse, and I am a boat sailing at night.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) expansion and extension

Someone will help you with your new schoolbag.

Someone gave you an umbrella in the rain.

Someone (he) will wrap your favorite (that) three fresh stuffing.

Someone will wipe away your wronged tears.

Ah, this man is a mother

Ah, this person is mother.

This man gave me life.

Give me a home.

No matter how far you go.

Whatever you're doing.

You can't live without it at any time.

Our mother.

The students have all heard this song, expressing the child's attachment to the loving mother and singing a hymn of love for the loving mother. Beautiful and touching language.

Commenting on this poem once again reflects Bing Xin's praise for maternal love. It is fresh, moving and touching, which is easy for adults to understand, but it is not so easy for seventh-grade students to master it, because it is abstract, so in this class, a song is introduced to let children unconsciously enter and feel maternal love.

Another difficulty in learning this lesson is to use symbolism in the writing of this poem. How to teach students? First of all, let's start with poetry and get to know it. Lotus leaf? ,? Lotus? ,? Storm? What do they mean? Then, let the students imitate on the basis of understanding.

At the end of this class, some people say that the lyrics are redundant, but I think it not only takes good care of the beginning of this class, but also pushes the students' emotions to a climax at the end. Ended in the climax, which made the students unforgettable.