Guo Dunqing replied:
There is no difference between the structure of the draft composition and the structure of the final composition. They are all article structures.
the article structure is related to the type of article. Ordinary articles are usually divided into four categories: narrative (sometimes including prose and reportage), argumentative (generally including essays), expository and practical; In addition, poetry is a major category of articles.
expression is the expression of the language of the article. Including narration, description, discussion, lyricism and explanation.
article structure: an article generally consists of three parts: the beginning, the expansion and the end. In narrative, writing is carried out in different order of occurrence time, which is divided into sequence, reverse order and insertion order.
The composition of a letter to a primary school teacher belongs to the nature of prose, and the content focuses on lyricism, which should be realized by narration, description and discussion. The specific content is best written by unfolding a story that happened between you and the primary school teacher. It's better to get to the point at the beginning. 2. Ask for a composition with a horizontal structure of 6 words
Leishan Charm This is a small mountain with an altitude of less than 1, meters, and Fiona Fang is only a hundred miles away. People in my hometown call her "Leishan".
Leishan is my childhood paradise. Whether it is a colorful spring, a shady midsummer, a fruity autumn, or a snowy winter, my friends and I have left childish laughter and beautiful dreams.
? The loveliest thing is Leishan in the bright spring. The lingering spring mist wrapped her plump and strong body, snuggled up to her from dusk to early morning, and accompanied her until the dawn, and the faint, milky mist disappeared shyly, slowly and reluctantly.
? Accompanied by the melodious songs of birds, you can walk along a gurgling stream until you reach the end of Leishan Mountain. Creek twists and turns, winding in the mountain bend, can accompany you to travel around this beautiful mountain valley.
Spring is trickling, and soft waves are rippling gently, as if flowing from your heart. At the foot, the carpet is paved along the stream to the winding path, and some pale yellow dandelions are dotted in the tall green grass on both sides, nodding to you from time to time.
On the slope are honeysuckle flowers blooming along the green vine, which exudes a refreshing fragrance, as white as snow, like white velvet scattered in the green sea, and the breeze Xu Lai, like a sail shadow in the blue sea. There are also clusters of red azaleas on the edge of the rock, some with red lips, some with fresh mouths, and occasionally whispering to each other.
Look at the oily green grass and the burning red flowers. You must feel that "the blue flowers of the mountain are burning". Look, this piece of green carpet is woven with various patterns, including light blue bamboo leaves, white thorn roses, pale pinkish purple's "foam" flowers ... and wild flowers that I can't name, I can't say the color. It's really a colorful symphony.
? At this time, you look up, but there are strange rocks on your head. Some are crawling like snails, some are galloping like horses, some are towering like giants, some are roaring like lions, and some are slim girls. 3. Make a framework for the general structure of the composition
1. Improve the ability to know and express things. Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator in China, pointed out: "Writing anything depends on knowledge and experience. What kind of knowledge and experience can make you write something. On the other hand, if you don't have the ability to express your understanding, you can't write a good composition. "
Second, take the cognitive structure as the core of the composition, including learning knowledge, observing and accumulating, memorizing, training thinking, enriching imagination, cultivating emotion and exercising will; From talking about writing, scrutinizing and revising, reading more and writing more frequently.
Third, set up a great concept of composition, organically combine listening, speaking, reading and writing
First, pay attention to the examination of questions; Second, we should be clear about the purpose of writing and have new ideas; Third, the selection of materials should be based on evidence; Fourth, we should pay attention to the skills of writing and arrange the structure of the text; Fifth, we should pay attention to the segmentation of the article, list subheadings and outline of the composition in advance; Sixth, we should pay attention to the writing method and usage of the article; Seventh, we should use language skillfully and use our thoughts to dispatch language. Learn five methods of conceiving: praising people with things, expressing one's mind directly, reasoning with things, touching the scene and expressing one's will with things. 4. The main structure of a writer's composition How do primary school students write a writer's composition < P > The first type, the total score < P > This is the most common and simple writer's structure. It is characterized by a clear beginning (a), which is concise and eye-catching, and serves as the general part of the article. The main cadres (B, C, D) can also be said to be the sub-narrative part of the article. Its paragraphs are independent of each other, expressing the center from different angles, and the order of arrangement needs to be considered to some extent. The ending E is the summary of the article, which is not only a natural transition of D, but also a summary of B, C and D, and a reference to A..
second, step-by-step entry
this structure is suitable for writing people with one thing. Its characteristics are: the first level a, writing the cause of things; The second level b, writing about the development of things; The third level c, writing things * * *; The fourth level d, write the ending of things. The second and third levels of the article are the soul and strength of the full text. These two levels are well written, which can often enrich the content of the article.
according to the needs of expression, describe the appearance of a character
The description of a character's appearance, figure, clothes and expression is called appearance description. When some of our classmates write a composition that focuses on remembering people, they often describe it like this: tall, with big eyes and bright eyes ... as if everyone in the world is the same. In fact, there are thousands of people in Qian Qian, and they don't have exactly the same appearance. The key problem is that the appearance of the characters is not described according to the needs of expression.
how to describe the appearance of a character according to the needs of expression?
first, describe the external characteristics of the characters according to the needs of expression.
Every character has his or her own unique appearance, and always shows an inner state in a certain procedure. Due to the influence of people's birth, experience, accomplishment, social environment, and their own distinctive personality, these can be revealed in his (her) expression, posture, clothing and so on.
second, according to the needs of expression, focus on describing the appearance.
Some students, regardless of priority, do not describe everything according to the needs of the central idea. Grab your eyebrows and beard. But what about the effect? Rory is wordy, and people will not know where the features are for a long time.
Third, arrange the order of appearance description according to the needs of expression.
For a person's appearance, the author often works from many aspects. These aspects, which should be written first and which should be written later, should follow a certain order. However, sometimes the order of appearance description will change for the need of expression or the change of observation angle.
In short, the description of appearance should be conducive to the expression of the central idea of the article and the display of the inner world of the characters. Only in this way can we say that the description of appearance of the article is successful. 5. What are the structural ways of writing
The structural ways of writing are: total score structure, parallel structure, sub-argument structure, contrast structure and progressive structure.
first, the relationship between the levels of the total score structure article is the general statement and the sub-statement. There are three basic forms: 1. Sum up first and then divide; 2. Divide first and then sum up; 3. Sum up first and then divide and then sum up.
second, the parallel structure parallel logic is the most basic distribution structure, which shows that several arguments belong to parallel and parallel distribution, and there is no inevitable subordinate or progressive relationship. For example, the general argument puts forward to "carry forward traditional virtues."
The sub-arguments can be arranged as follows: 1. Carry forward the traditional virtues and the spirit of helping others and selfless dedication; 2. To carry forward the traditional virtues, we should carry forward the spirit of repay kindness with kindness, and return favors with peaches; 3. To carry forward traditional virtues, we should carry forward the spirit of tolerance, generosity, harmony and enterprising. Third, the logic of transformational structure is mainly to strengthen the discussion of the general argument from both positive and negative aspects.
for example, the general argument is "protecting the environment is our bounden responsibility and obligation", which can be discussed from the following positive and negative aspects: "(positive) strengthening environmental protection is conducive to controlling pollution, promoting the harmonious development between man and nature, improving our quality of life, protecting human health and benefiting future generations. (On the other hand) If we blindly destroy development without paying attention to protection, we will inevitably be punished by nature. Dry rivers and extinct species will eventually lead to the demise of mankind itself. "
4. Contrastive structure is one positive and one negative, one yin and one yang, one reality and one deficiency. In content, it is true and false, good and bad, beautiful and ugly, good and evil, or a structural form in which other opposing parties are compared to make comments, express feelings and remember people's narratives. Fifth, the progressive logic of progressive structure is a progressive relationship between sub-arguments, which has a more significant strengthening effect on the general argument.
For example, the general argument puts forward to "strive to realize the Chinese dream and build a" great harmony "society", and the sub-arguments adopt a progressive relationship, which can be expressed as follows: 1. The Chinese dream belongs to individuals, and it is the guiding light for realizing personal ideals; 2. The Chinese dream belongs to China, and it is the key to national rejuvenation; 3. The Chinese dream belongs to the world, and it is the only way to build a harmonious world. It can be seen that the connotation of the Chinese dream is highlighted from the individual to the country and then to the world. Baidu encyclopedia-structure. 6. a well-structured composition
when night falls, the place where pedestrians in a hurry want to rush back on the road is home.
I have a happy family. In life, we often have some interesting things, and now that I think about it, I can still remember them vividly.
On Sunday afternoon, my father gave me a mysterious smile and said, "Let's hold a family quiz!" "What?" I shouted. "Are we going to hold a quiz?" The mother in the kitchen heard the sound. "Then let me be your opponent." She said to me. When I saw that my opponent was not my father, I couldn't help feeling smug and replied with confidence: "Good!"
The competition officially started. The host's father cleared his throat and gave us the first question: "Which city is the symbol of Wuyang Group Carving?" "Di-"I jumped up and answered, "Guangzhou!" "Yes, add 1 points!" At this time, I was very happy, and I was a little complacent. Then dad asked the question again: "Is there happiness if you have property?" "Of course, it is!" I said, "Not necessarily!" Mother retorted, "Abundance of wealth is not true happiness, but spiritual satisfaction is happiness!" " "Correct answer, add 1 points." I had to drum my cheeks and continue to listen to the question: "What is the greatest power in the world?" "Hercules!" I blurted it out. I saw my mother smiled and shook her head: "It's knowledge." "Correct answer, add 1 points!" Then my father asked several more questions, all of which my mother answered. Because of the mistakes one after another, I was already sitting on a needle carpet at this moment, and I was in a daze. But then I thought: no, I should try to answer the last question. So I listened patiently, "How much oil does Daqing account for in the country every year?" I replied without scruple: "Daqing's annual oil production accounts for-accounts for-accounts for 1/2 of the country!" " "By the way, although" accounted for "several times, but finally" accounted for "and by the way. Add 1 points! "
the game is over. Mother said, "I beat you this time, and we will compete again when you are in middle school." "At that time, we should ask you!" Dad said to me with a smile, "Ha ha ha." Our laughter filled the whole room and spread to every household. 413 words
childhood dreams, colorful dreams; Childhood songs, happy songs; A string of childhood footprints; Childhood stories are piled up. "Does this song remind you of your wonderful childhood? In those colorful years, many things happened, not as bright as the stars. My childhood was beautiful, and there were many things worth remembering ...
As long as I can remember, my aunt's class kept two chickens. I went to see the chickens as soon as I had time. I don't know how long it took, but after a long time, the hens laid eggs, and the chickens were going to hatch in the eggs. Twenty-one days later, I heard the sound of chickens, and when I saw this situation, I heard the sound. I feel sorry for the chicken. Help the chicken when neither the hen nor the rooster is at home. The opportunity came at last ...
That day, the hen went to find food for the chick, and the naughty rooster was not at home and ran out to play. When my aunt was not paying attention, she picked up an egg, held it in her hand and stroked it gently. She said solemnly, "Don't be afraid of chickens, you will come to the world soon." After that, I didn't hesitate any more. I peeled an egg, and a chicken with residual heat and no eyes was born. It looked at me and cried twice as if to say, "Thank you, let me come to this world as soon as possible." I was so happy that I peeled off the second one. When I peeled off the fourth one, the hen came back. When she saw that I was "bullying" the baby snake, she gave me a bite, and suddenly blood flowed out. I went to my aunt in tears. My aunt didn't say anything about me, but said in distress situation: "silly goose, the chicken won't be born until a certain time! You will die if you deliver them like this. " After listening to it, I hurried to see the chickens. Sure enough, all the chickens I "delivered" were dying, but all the ones I didn't "deliver" survived. I regret it very much, but it's all too late ...
Although it's been a long time, and I'm still young and ignorant there, it has been urging me to go forward and never retreat. 389 words 7. Write a composition in a parallel structure: 1. Beautiful
Beautiful campus
Our school is extremely beautiful. Whenever I walk into this lovely school, it makes me feel refreshed and relaxed.
In spring, our campus is full of flowers, bees are busy picking honey, butterflies are also coming to join in the fun, not to mention the birds are chirping and singing, so happy! Grass crept out of the soil, looking at this strange world, the earth seemed to be soft, and students were playing and frolicking on it. It's still raining catkins on the campus in spring. The naughty little seed fell on the classmates' little faces, which made them laugh.
In summer, it is hot when the wind blows, and the students' faces are hot and hot, as hot as a stove. The playground seemed to crack, and cicadas cried on the tree, as if to say, "It's hot, it's hot." The grass is too hot to lift its head, and the flowers are wilting. They all hope for a heavy rain. Suddenly, dark clouds were gathering and it began to rain cats and dogs. Wash everything on the playground clean, the trees are greener, the flowers are redder and the grass is more energetic.
In autumn, there are yellow leaves everywhere in the school. The once lush trees have only a few branches now, and they are not happy. The tender skin of the grass has turned yellow. The campus seems to be raining with leaves, and it seems as if a boat is sailing and butterflies are flying. How beautiful!
In winter, the school becomes a white world wrapped in silver. The snow on the branches dressed the branches as a silver bar, and the whole tree looked like a fairy dancing. Caochangjiao