The title of this poem is "ancient meaning", which shows that this poem is an ancient poem. The first six sentences describe a frontier soldier vividly and actively in front of readers. The word "person" in the first sentence first gives the reader the impression that he is a gentleman. The second sentence, "A wanderer, since he was a teenager, wandered around Youyan", shows that the man engaged in the Long March is from Youyan area and has been a generous and sad person since ancient times, so as to describe his bravery below. These two sentences always lead to the following four sentences. He and his friends bet on winning or losing under the horseshoe, never taking the seven-foot body so seriously, so he fought bravely to kill the enemy as soon as he went to the battlefield, which made him afraid to move forward. "Under the horseshoe, he will meet his enemies, risk his seven-foot body desperately and kill anyone who dares to face it." These three sentences fully show the masculinity of men. Everyone wants to see such a man! However, poetry can't be written as a painting, only the characteristics can be grasped. So I grabbed my beard to describe it. But Sanwu beard is not only incompatible with age, but also too elegant, so the poet created the image of short beard. The word "those moustaches that stand up like porcupines" is short, numerous and hard, which shows his brave and strong spirit and arrogance when killing the enemy, and highlights the image of the man who joined the army in a concise, vivid and powerful way. Here, in order to coordinate with poetry, the poet adopts short five-sentence sentences and short and solid intonation, which strengthens the artistic effect of poetry.
3. Next, the poet uses the phrase "Huang Yun Tommy Tam Bai Yunfei" to set the background for the hero in the poem. Close your eyes and think about it. A campus man, with his head held high on his leg and a discerning single knife in his hand, is behind a vast vilen with a yellow sky. How magnificent the weather is. But the beauty of this sentence goes beyond this. There are many sandstorms in traffic jams, and the sand is caught in the clouds, so the clouds are yellow, while the clouds on the mainland are pure white. In this sentence, Huang Yun Baiyun seems to be writing a scene on the surface, but in fact it is contrasting with each other and written in detail. Writing the first six sentences of this man is pure boldness and hard work, but doesn't this man on an expedition to the frontier have a little homesickness? Let's take a look at this man. After looking forward to Huang Yun, he couldn't help looking back at his hometown. Where is your hometown? But when I saw a white cloud, I couldn't help but feel homesick. This layer of meaning, the poet used the most refined and subtle means to express it in the gap of the text, and saw kung fu where there was no text. But if you continue to write about homesickness and long to return, it doesn't look like such a man. Therefore, when you want to vomit and turn around, you can use the words "repay your kindness and don't look back" to explain that this man occasionally misses home, but because he has not repaid his country, he is determined not to go back. These two words "virtue" come from a man's heart. Used together in one sentence, it shows his firm determination. At the same time, it is intentionally or unintentionally combined with the word "cloud" in the previous sentence. The rhythm of the first six sentences is short, but when writing these two sentences, the scenery contains emotion, so the poet changed it to a seven-character quatrain here, and changed it to a five-micro rhyme with a low tone and a floating ending in the flat rhyme. However, because the meaning in the eighth sentence is still firm, the word "de" with two tones is inserted to make it melodious and powerful.
4, the general idea, and then write it down, it is based on "no gratitude, no return" and play out. However, unexpectedly, a "Little Liaodong Woman" who was only fifteen years old suddenly appeared. There is no need to write about her appearance and figure. People can imagine from her early age that "she is used to playing the pipa and can sing and dance well". With the appearance of Little Women in Liaodong, it brought people a touching Voice of the Qiangdi. In the first ten sentences, there are figures, scenery and colors, but there is no sound: "She seems to be playing the flute, even now, a" reed song of home ",and the young woman plays the flute, so the whole poem is vivid. Qiangdi is a frontier instrument, and Chusai is a frontier tune, which runs through the above-mentioned "Youyan" and "Liaodong". This flute sound is so sad and sad that it evokes infinite homesickness. After listening to this song, I can't help feeling that "every soldier's eyes are filled with tears of homesickness". Here, the poet actually wants to write about this young man's tears, but how can such a tough guy get excited after listening to a young woman's nemesis? Therefore, the poet did not write the tears of the man in front, but wrote that the tears of the soldiers of the three armed forces not only fell, but also fell like rain. In this case, everyone is moved, and this man is no exception, so there is no need to make it clear. This technique is exquisite and refined, and its skill is extremely deep, which is not easy for ordinary people to do. In addition, these four sentences adopt the seven rhymes of the upper voice, and the words "five", "dance" and "rain" are swallowed, which has received the artistic effect of emotional charm.
5, the whole poem is twelve sentences, rushing and fluttering. The first six sentences, in one breath, for those moustaches that stand up like porcupines, "a pause" and "Huang Yun Tommy Tam Bai Yunfei" suddenly float down, and "no gratitude, no return" is another setback. Throwing the pen into the air, a young woman from Liaodong suddenly appeared, and even saying a few words seemed to have no interference with it. She seems to be playing the flute. Even now, a reed song at home wakes up with the words "today", and "Qiangdi" and "Chusai" echo the words "Youyan" and "Liaodong" at a distance. Finally, with the summary of "Let every soldier's eyes be filled with tears of homesickness", the young man in the first sentence is included, and the whole blood line is immediately connected. In just a few chapters, there can be such a thousand miles, which is not found in Li Qi's previous seven-character ancient poems.