1. Change "fenfen" to "flying". One refers to the large number, and the other means to watch other butterflies fly away and follow them. And flying back and forth can also show the scene of flowers falling into red after the rain, and even the butterflies leave without hesitation. 2. "Ying doubt" indicates a turning point, while "Ying doubt" indicates speculation, and can also express the poet's regret for the passing of spring.
Using "one after another" is a common sense mistake: it is because the rain "hides" the flowers, and it is "nothing". How can the bees and butterflies "one after another" cross the wall so unanimously? Changing it to "flying" means that there was a process of coming to my house but not finding it, and then "flying away". "Queyi" is much less expressive than "yingyi": "yingyi" is translated as "should be" "Doubt" and "Ke may be doubting" express the spirituality of "Bee and Butterfly". And what does "but doubt" mean? If I don’t have flowers at home, does my neighbor’s house have flowers? This is a question about "bees and butterflies", and the heart is less elegant
1. Change "have" to "fly". The bees and butterflies, which had been trapped by the bitter rain for a long time, finally looked forward to the beautiful spring weather. With the same excitement as the poet, they flew to the small garden, thinking that they could feast on the spring beauty among the flowers, but unexpectedly they flew in vain. There are no flowers and leaves in the small garden; they are also as disappointed as the poet, and they fly away over the courtyard wall in frustration. The flowers have fallen, and the bees and butterflies have left one after another. Wouldn’t the small garden look even more desolate, and wouldn’t the poet’s heart feel even more melancholy? Therefore, changing "have" to "flying" cannot reflect the loss of Bee and Die in terms of expression; changing "queue" to "should be suspicious" cannot express the loss of Xiaoyuan and the author's feelings in terms of expression. Feeling of loss. 2. Change "quey" to "yingyi". The word "queyi" has a turning meaning, while "yingyi" has a passing meaning. The first two sentences of the poem are based on what is seen in "before the rain" and "after the rain". "The comparison of the scenes shows how long it has been raining, and the beautiful spring scenery has been killed by this bitter rain. The last two lines of the poem are written from flowers to bees and butterflies. They are also as disappointed as the poet, and they are dejected. Looking at the bees and butterflies "flying over the wall", the poet, full of joy for spring, suddenly had a wonderful association: "I doubt that spring is in my neighbor's house." The words are very measured, which adds to the sense of reality. These two poems not only vividly describe the bees and butterflies chasing the spring scenery, but also vividly describe the "spring scenery". It seems that "Yangchun" really has "beautiful feet". She doesn't live in her own small garden, but she goes to the neighboring house. How naughty and playful she is!
"But I doubt that spring is in the neighboring house" is a "magic touch". It is the essence of the whole article. Through its enlightenment, the small garden, bees and butterflies, and the spring scenery all glow with a strange look and are full of fun.