This rainy season is very warm.
Walking on the river bank that day
Look, the butterfly is close to the new bud.
I saw wicker poking at the water.
You use hot eyes
Put a tree in my heart, full of flowers
Push it away again and again
There is rain in this rainy season.
It was late that night.
You are wet.
My dream town
I hold you in my arms.
The sky that makes you snuggle up
The sun is rising.
this evening
Where did you park?
Is it raining heavily? Is it cold?
I really want to run over there
Standing at your window
In the name of unforgettable.
Write a song for you
Song of rainy season
This rainy season
I want to copy it well
Because you gave me a passage.
I miss love.
This rainy season is very short.
But this rainy season
I like ...
Comments:
This poem that runs through the rainy season has a unique flavor. The "rainy season" is not a season, but also outside the solar terms of twenty poems. But it is this special concept that makes people think and yearn. Everyone who has walked through the "rainy season" has a self-interpretation, because the "rainy season" in the course of life, whether it rains or not, always has lingering memories. If you stick to it, because
This poem, by jumping, turns out the artistic conception of the coexistence of reality and reality. When butterflies and wickers are endowed with feelings of closeness and teasing, the whole picture will be fantastic, because every reader can create it by experience. Closeness and teasing are very common features of rainy season. "Hot eyes" urge "flowers in my heart", which seems very empty, but because of the common sense of life as the basis, readers can still figure out the connotation of "flowers". The first section can be described as "from real to virtual". There is emptiness in reality, and there is reality in emptiness. Although the leap is a bit big, the integration level is still very high. There is no excessive melodrama, but there are similar associations.
This poem, with concise words, makes the "scene" created vivid. "Hit the wetland" is unexpected and reasonable. People who walk in the rainy season will naturally feel "wet", because they are eager to take shelter from the rain, and "bump into" has become the norm. It is my dream, not others' dreams, because in the first quarter, it is logical. The "sky" in "the sky you snuggle up to" is very wide and psychedelic, seemingly unreal, in line with the feeling in a dream and skillfully used. The word "copy" in this rainy season and I want to copy it well is also quite meaningful. Because it is so beautiful, I want to continue. I copied it because I wanted to continue. Because once I copy it, I can have countless "stickers".
This poem, in the form of dialogue with Kan Kan, is cordial and natural. "Where did it stop?" "Is it raining heavily?" "Is it cold?" These emotional problems leave no trace, but they are poetic. "Standing in front of your window, writing a rainy season song for you" and "This rainy season, I like it" are almost straightforward narratives, but there is a lot of artistic space to create and praise.
This poem, because it points to pluralism, is also pluralistic in understanding. As long as the reader is willing, the theme can be freely expanded. As long as it is poetic, the poem is "successful".