Teaching objectives
1, understand the relationship between theme and material, scenery writing and lyric.
2. Understand the characteristics of accurate, vivid and active sentence-making in the text.
3. Understand the nobility, simplicity, excellent quality and intelligence of farmers and their children, and understand the profound and sincere thoughts and feelings of the working people expressed in this article.
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Introduce the song "Childhood" first.
Second, the author and style are introduced.
Lu Xun, formerly known as Zhou Shuren, was a talented man. People from Shaoxing, Zhejiang. Great proletarian writer, thinker and revolutionary. The founder of modern literature in China. Representative works include Diary of a Madman, Prose Collection, Fiction Collection and Prose Collection, the first vernacular novel in the history of modern literature in China.
The short story Social Drama was written in 1922 10 month. At that time, the society was dark and the peasants were miserable, which made him naturally recall a pure land in his heart-Pingqiao Village. There is the love of grandma, the love of simple and kind farmers, and the love of enthusiastic and capable friends. There is also a free world where I can get rid of feudal education and feudal ethics. He loves the countryside, the working people, the rural children, and yearns for a beautiful and free life, and integrates these thoughts and feelings into his works.
When Lu Xun was a child, he lived in the countryside with his mother and occasionally got close to many farmers. Social drama is based on a person's childhood life and written in the first person in the form of memories. But it is not the author's autobiography, but an artistic summary based on life, so "I" can't be regarded as Lu Xun.
Novel: a literary genre that focuses on portraying characters and reflects social life through the unfolding of plots and the rendering of environment. Three elements of a novel: characters, plot and environment. Among them, "people" is the main element. The plot structure of the novel: beginning-development-climax-ending.
What is social drama? (Society refers to the activities of the land god and the worship of the land god; At the same time, it was also a regional unit in ancient times.
Social drama refers to the drama activities related to religion and customs carried out in social organizations. In Shaoxing, social day performances have a long history. In the Southern Song Dynasty, Lu You's poem "Society Day" already had the title of "Peace is everywhere, and children are ecstatic in society day". In Qing Dynasty, social drama became the main performance form of Sanju. )
Third, perceive the content of the text as a whole.
(A) new words
Returning to the province (xǐng), being remote (pì), digging (jué) and fishing (diào).
Melodious (y not u) diffuse (mi) turn (w m 4 n) enthusiasm (yǒng)
The animal ridge (Jǐ) contains algae (y ǐ n) and crown (péng) supports (chēng).
Wandering (mi o) flourishing (xiàng) holding (Cuō) trees (Ji)
(B) masochistic text, thinking:
1 What is the clue of this article? Divide the text structure according to the clues.
The clue of this article is to go to Zhaozhuang to see a play.
(1) Before the theater (1-3) (2) During the theater (4-30) (3) After the theater (3l-40)
Judging from the story, how much is written in the text? What are the details? What things are sketched?
Description: The twists and turns before watching the social drama. On the way to see the social drama in the evening. Zhaozhuang watches social drama. Go back to China to steal beans after watching social drama.
Sketch: Go back to the province with my mother and stay in Pingqiao Village. Country life of catching shrimp and herding cattle. On June 1st, my father-in-law sent beans.
3 why are some plots detailed and some plots slightly written?
Because the article mainly focuses on watching social drama, I will write in detail about the twists and turns before social drama, the way to watch social drama at night, and go home to steal beans after watching social drama. Other plots have little to do with watching social dramas, so I will simply write them down.
Fourth, read the text intensively.
Please read the first part aloud and think.
1. The first part, there is a sentence that not only describes the position of Pingqiao Village in my mind, but also describes my feelings for Pingqiao Village. Please find this word. (The Promised Land). )
2. What does this part have to do with writing and watching social dramas?
(1) explained the time, place and opportunity of watching social drama; (2) The people who went to see the social drama together-children living in the countryside; (3) I also elaborated on the fun in The Promised Land, which laid an important foundation for me to write My First Hope There-Watching Social Opera. At the same time, the life in Pingqiao Village is also deeply missed by "I".
Read the second part of the text silently and think:
1. The second part is the whole process of Zhao Zhuang's watching social drama. What is the main writing? And divide the level of this part accordingly.
The first floor (paragraphs 4-9): watching the twists and turns before the social drama;
The second floor (paragraph 10- 13): what you saw and felt on the way to see the social drama;
The third floor (section 14-2 1): Zhaozhuang sees social dramas;
Fourth floor (paragraphs 22-30): Go home late at night after watching social drama.
2. "The text looks like a mountain, not like peace." In the part of "watching the play", the author did not give a straightforward explanation, but wrote it ups and downs. For example, on the first floor, I wrote three twists and turns and three turns before the play. Please find out and think about the benefits of this writing in the book.
Three twists and turns: ① No boat; (2) No walking with others; (3) Grandma is worried.
Three turns: ① Uncle Ba's boat is back; (2) Come with me; (3) make sure that nothing is lost.
Benefits: ① The brushwork is tortuous and the style is swaying, which fully paves the way for watching social dramas; (2) the initial performance of the enthusiasm and ability of the small partners, especially the "double happiness".
3. The easily overlooked highlight: the emotional change of "I";
The first hope-I cried-I seemed to hear the sound of gongs and drums and knew that they were buying soybean milk to drink under the stage. (Rendering depression)-Don't fish shrimp, eat less and don't talk. -Happiness (comparing the attraction of social drama to children)
When all the problems are solved, the friends will naturally rush to Zhaozhuang to see the play. What does the author seize to describe in detail to highlight his friend's mood on the way to the theater? Listen to the students read aloud and think. ( 10— 13)
5. In paragraph 10, a series of accurate verbs are used to vividly describe the navigation actions of young friends. Please find these verbs and understand their functions. Show your friend's skillful and agile navigation skills, industrious and capable personality, and happy mood when watching the play. )
6. Read the paragraph 1 1 and think: What sensory angles did the author write from? What kind of mood does it reflect?
Smell: (fragrance) Touch: (blowing on the face) Sight: (hazy moonlight, rolling mountains, faint Zhaozhuang, a few lights and fires)
Hearing: (gurgling running water, friends' jokes and shouts, singing) Imagination (feeling): (stage, fishing fire)
Function: ① These scenery descriptions show us a unique fresh and beautiful picture of Jiangnan water town. Write down how fast the child can sail. (3) contrast "I" eager to see the happiness and urgency of social drama. ④ Expressed the author's love for the countryside.
7. From the description of the above feelings, what kind of psychology do I have to go to see a social drama by boat next month?
Generally speaking, there is a happy, urgent and calm psychology. Further analysis, highlighting "urgency"
Psychology is more obvious. The ups and downs of the mountains are like the passionate iron ridge of the beast, which reflects the urgency of "I" with a pen and a pen. When I heard this song, I thought it would come from the stage, and my heart was more anxious. The melodious flute calms me down and reflects my previous anxiety. )
Metaphor. Compare "The Rolling Mountains of Light Black" to "The Iron Beast Ridge of Enthusiasm" (by moving and writing quietly, to contrast the urgent mood of "I")
Grasping the characteristics of the scenery to describe, fully mobilizing all kinds of sensory organs, using rhetorical devices, blending feelings into the scenery, and depicting a very beautiful "moonlit picture of a water town" not only shows my happiness, but also shows my eagerness and vividness.
8. Read the paragraph 14~2 1. Discussion:
This part 1 was written by watching a play in Zhaozhuang. Is this play good or not? Where does it appear? (not good-looking. One is that the steel-toed old man doesn't do somersaults, and the other is that he doesn't have my favorite snake essence and tigger. Third, I am most afraid of watching Lao Dan, but Lao Dan finally stepped off the stage has been singing. )
2 Do children like watching it? Where does it appear? {I don't like watching it. Performance: strange, gradually inconspicuous, mumbling curses, constantly sighing, yawning, and caring about your conversation. (Profile Description)}
What are the two outstanding points in the description of the scenery when I return home on a moonlit night?
(1) "The most striking thing is a stage standing on the open space by the river outside the village, which is blurred in the distant moonlight and almost indistinguishable from space. I suspect that the fairyland I have seen in the painting has appeared here. The moon hasn't set yet, and it seems that it won't be long before I come to the theatre. When I left Zhaozhuang, the moonlight was particularly bright. Looking back, the stage is under the light, but it is as ethereal as before, like a castle in the fairy mountain, covered with Xia Hong. Blowing to the ear is a flute, very melodious; I suspect that Lao Dan went in, but I am embarrassed to say that I will go back and have a look. " (visual, auditory. Write about my attachment to Zhao Zhuang. )
(2) "This time, the excitement of the bow is even louder. The boat is like a big white fish, carrying a group of children in the waves. Several old fishermen who fished all night also stopped to wait and see and cheered. " (the side protrudes. The boat is fast. )
Discussion: What do these paragraphs say about stealing beans?
"Stealing" embodies the sincere hospitality of children; "Stealing" beats the child's pure and selfless heart; "Stealing" embodies a child's considerate and naive nature. The "stealing" in the article has become a kind of enthusiasm, selflessness and innocence, which makes people interested and happy. The plot of stealing beans shows the innocence, enthusiasm, simplicity and childishness of farmers and teenagers. It is precisely because of the childlike innocence and wild interest in stealing beans that ordinary arhat beans are extremely delicious and I can't forget them. )
5 "Return to the Ship and Steal Beans"
(1) What personality characteristics does Shuang Xi show in the full text * * *? Smart, naughty, considerate and responsible. )
② What personality characteristics does Afa show in stealing beans? Naive, naughty, simple and enthusiastic. )
③ Discussion: Can the incident of stealing Luohansong on the way be deleted, and why? (Luohansong is not the best, but it was cooked by Qi Xin, a good partner, and turned into a good bean that can't be eaten. Social drama is not attractive either, but it is accompanied by partners when watching the play, so it becomes a wonderful drama that will never be seen again. The happiness and sweetness of childhood have become eternal memories. So it can't be deleted. )
Read the second part of the text silently (the aftermath after the play) and think:
(1) How to understand "Really, until now, I really haven't eaten good beans like that night, and I don't watch the drama like that night anymore." A game?
("The meaning of drunkenness is not in wine, but also between mountains and rivers, and the joy of mountains and rivers lies in wine."
What I can't forget is the simple, kind and sincere feelings of the old people and children in Pingqiao village, as well as their labor skills and ability to do things. Coupled with the unique rural scenery, free air, harmonious and intimate relationship between people. All this is unprecedented in my childhood town. Rarely seen in later life. My memory of this past event expresses my yearning for a better life. )
The play is not good, and the beans are very ordinary. Why does the article end like this: "I really haven't eaten good beans like that night-I'll never see a play like that night again?"
(good beans likes that night, and the drama likes that night → It is a symbol of childhood innocence, brilliant freedom and interesting life → It shows that sweet childhood memories have always been treasured in the author's heart. → Expressed yearning for a better life. )
V. Image analysis
(1) Analyze the words and deeds of Shuangxi, and talk about whether Shuangxi is a good boy or a bad boy. He is a clever, clever, considerate, thoughtful and decisive boy. )
1) When I saw the twists and turns of the social drama, I made a proposal of double happiness and enlightenment (showing double happiness and cleverness)
2) When grandma was in a hurry, Shuangxi made a big package of tickets loudly; There are three reasons: the ship is big; Fast boys never run around; We are all very watery (showing double happiness, sensitivity, consideration, understanding and determination)
3) When watching the drama, Shuangxi analyzed the reason why the steel-toed old man didn't do somersaults (showing Shuangxi's cleverness and carefulness).
4) Ask Afa, the owner of beans, when you go home to steal beans (showing double happiness and consideration)
Double happiness thinks stealing more, and Afa's mother will scold when she knows it (showing double happiness and thoughtfulness)
5) After Shuangxi finished eating the beans, he was concerned about using the salt and firewood on the hachi boat and considering the countermeasures (showing Shuangxi's thoughtful consideration).
6) Double Happiness sent me home. "I'm back. What can be wrong?". I said I write a package ticket! " (It means that he did it from beginning to end)
7) Double Happiness answered the father-in-law's question on June 1 day (showing that he responded quickly)
(2) grandfather on June 1st.
(1) "Double happiness, you kids stole my beans yesterday? I refuse to choose well, and it's broken a lot. " To prove whether Shuangxi stole beans, it is important to accuse them of trampling on crops. (Kind and generous, cherish the fruits of labor)
My father-in-law saw me and stopped to smile. "treat?" -It should be. "He asked again," Brother Xun, was the play good yesterday? ""Can beans be eaten in China? " (Simple and hospitable. )
(3) My father-in-law praised his beans on June 1st. "My beans are all carefully selected." . (so strong. )
On June 1 day, my father-in-law sent beans to my mother and me. Simple, hospitable and enthusiastic. )
Father June 1st is a generous, kind, simple, hospitable and enthusiastic old man.
Sixth, language analysis.
Read the relevant paragraphs of Sailing on a Summer Night and Stealing Beans at Home, and pick out the beautiful sentences that express what you see, hear and feel.
1, the mountains are undulating like animal ridges:-figuratively, the speed of sailing is vividly described by moving and writing static.
2. I heard the song and expected it to come from the stage:-indirectly expressed my eagerness.
3. Writing the flute melodiously makes me calm:-It means that "I" was intoxicated by the beautiful night view of the water town, so I forgot myself.
4. chan chan wrote about the beauty of underwater sound, and Wan Zhuan and Melodious wrote about the beauty of flute sound.
5. "Relaxation" and "stretching" express the feeling of "I". The Slow Boat shows the urgency of "me". Silence shows the feeling of "I" from anxiety to calmness. "Lost and scattered" shows the intoxication of "I". Looking Back shows the feeling of "I".
6. "ups and downs, enthusiasm" wrote.
The dynamic beauty of lianshan mountain. "Jump" and "Cheer" describe the light beauty of the ship from the front and side respectively.
7. Taste good words: taste good words from the aspects of color, smell, sound and emotional dynamics. For example:
1 "hazy" and "bright" are well used, but fortunately the color beauty of moonlight is written.
"Green", "light black" and "Xia Hong" respectively describe the color beauty of beans and wheat, mountains and rivers and lights.
3 "Empty Spirit" and "Fairy Mountain Pavilion" wrote the magical beauty of the stage.
4 "Xiang" describes the smell of beans, wheat and aquatic plants.
Seven, the full text summary:
Through watching social drama with my partners in the countryside when I was a child, this paper expressed my nostalgia for my beautiful childhood, thus expressing my yearning for warm, friendly, equal and harmonious interpersonal relationships. Here is the beauty of scenery, life, family and people. Beautiful natural scenery; A free life; The cleverness, enthusiasm and simplicity of rural children; Friendly and harmonious relationship between people. It shows the author's twists and turns (4-9) when he went back to the province with his mother and lived in Pingqiao Village (1-3), especially the whole process of going to Zhaozhuang to see social drama (4-30). What he saw and felt on the road (10- 13) was about watching social drama in farmer Zhaozhuang (65438).