Who can help me revise my poems and name them? (fast!)

The sun is a beautiful hope

Use its own warmth

illuminate all things in the world

Give them joy and happiness

The sun is a naughty elf

Always likes to hide in the clouds

Sometimes it disappears

Sometimes it appears

The sun is Holy angel

She spreads her white wings

Uses divine light

To convey love and happiness to the world

The sun is hot The blazing fire is another painter

Burn away all the sin and darkness in the world

Use the brush in your hand

to create the colorful picture in your and my heart.

Let’s just call it “The Sun” (poetry should be concise, lively, and the length should be basically the same. So I have removed some things that feel more cumbersome, and I hope it’s okay.

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