How to do this topic well? Students should learn how to do this problem. The following is mainly to provide the methods, ideas and precautions for the examination of questions, and then there are several examples for reference.
First, the original "The Beauty of the Four Seasons"
The most beautiful thing in spring is dawn. Gradually, the eastern sky was full of fish belly color, dyed a slight blush, and red and purple clouds were floating.
The most beautiful thing in summer is night. The bright moonlit night is beautiful, and there are countless fireflies flying in the dark night. Even on a drizzly night, there are two fireflies flying in the dim light. This scene is really fascinating.
The most beautiful autumn is dusk. When the setting sun shines obliquely on the western hills, the little crow flies to the nest in a hurry, which is touching. The flocks of geese in fly with me in the sky are even more touching. As the sun sets and night falls, the wind and insects are more and more refreshing.
The most beautiful thing in winter is morning. Of course, the snowy morning is beautiful, that is, in the morning covered with frost everywhere, or in the cold morning without snow and frost, when burning charcoal fire and holding a warm brazier through the corridor, how harmonious the leisurely mood is with this cold winter morning! Only at noon, the cold gradually subsided, and most of the coal in the brazier turned into a pile of white ash, which was a bit disappointing.
Second, how to imitate writing
Parody is to imitate the text and then write a paragraph or a paragraph. The requirement in text practice is "using several sentences", that is, writing a paragraph is enough, not writing an article.
So, how to write the imitation of this lesson? Please note the following points:
1. Clear time: First of all, write down the scenery of which season and determine which time period of this season. Imitate the writing of the text and determine the specific time in the first sentence. Don't be influenced by the time in the original text. For example, the article says that "the most beautiful spring is dawn", but in fact it can be said that "the most beautiful spring is dusk" and "the most beautiful spring is dusk". It is particularly important to note that the scenery written must conform to the characteristics of this season, but also to the characteristics of "evening" or "dusk" in this time period. For example, it says "the most beautiful thing in spring is at night", so it can say "all the birds in spring have gone back to their nests to sleep" instead of "birds chirping in the branches"
2. Clear scenery: The scenery written must be "beautiful" and echo the "beauty of the four seasons". The so-called beautiful scenery is a scenery that makes people feel relaxed and happy, not a scenery that makes people feel depressed; It is a scene of prosperity, not a scene of decline.
3. Dynamic and static combination: choose the scene that moves you most as the description object, and you can describe the changes of color, movement, sound and shape of the scene. At the same time, we should also pay attention to the dynamic beauty of the scenery, so as to combine the dynamic with the static, that is, when writing scenery, we should write "static scenery", such as flowers and trees, which are all static objects, but when writing, we can write "static scenery" as "dynamic scenery", such as the clouds in the sky moving, the water in the lake flowing in the breeze and the grass dancing in the wind. You can also write dynamic objects directly, such as fireflies, ravens and geese flying in the text. These dynamic scenes give people a sense of movement and beauty.
4. Express your feelings: you should be able to show your love and praise for the scenery you wrote. On the one hand, you should write those beautiful scenery, on the other hand, you should show your love, let you express your feelings in the scenery, express your feelings in the scenery and blend in the scene. For example, writing flowers with charming smiles in the spring morning shows one's love, because "smiling faces" are loved by everyone, and comparing flowers with smiling faces shows admiration. For another example, writing about a bird "singing on a branch" on a spring morning is also an expression of admiration, because everyone loves listening to songs, and comparing the bird's song to "singing" shows their emotional tendency.
5. Pay attention to the characteristics: the beautiful scenery of the four seasons is different all over the country, so students must write according to the local characteristics when imitating writing. For example, it is rare to see heavy snow in the south, so when writing about the beautiful scenery in winter, don't write about the scenery like "heavy snow pressing branches" in winter.
Third, imitate examples.
1. The most beautiful thing in spring is dusk. It's getting dark bit by bit, and all kinds of birds are flying towards the nest. The trees in the distant mountains are like mossy boulders. At the moment, the lake is calm, even the fish are hiding in the grass, as if they were asleep; On the water,
The last afterglow of the sunset slowly melted into the lake.
It is the most beautiful when it rains in summer. One raindrop after another fell into the pond, knocking out circles of different sizes and rippling away bit by bit. One raindrop after another jumped on the lotus leaf and immediately merged into one shiny crystal bead after another. Some fish in the pond hide under the lotus leaves and use them as umbrellas; Some swam around the lotus leaf as if playing hide-and-seek with it.
Four. Brief introduction of the author
The author of this article is Shao Qing Yan Na, a Japanese translator Bian Liqiang, who made some changes when he chose the text. Shao Qing Yan Na was a female writer in the middle period of heian period. The surname is Qing, and the first name cannot be tested. "Speak less" is her address in the palace office. Born in a bureaucratic family, he is familiar with Sinology and wrote Pillow Grass, which is the earliest collection of essays in Japan.