Zhu Xiang
My beloved rainy day scenery is also very rich;
Dream back in the spring night, the sound of rain in front of the window;
The sound of sharp raindrops hitting banana leaves;
Fog usually blows rain on the face;
Thunderstorms splashed by lightning—
But when it rains, I like it best. '
It's gray but transparent,
It contains a silent expectation.
From the clouds, I don't know where,
There was a clear birdsong.
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1. In the development of modern free verse, there is a trend: in order to fully express the will and emotions in words, trying to get rid of the restrictions and constraints of traditional poetry rules. So it is a tentative work, called Free Rhyme or Free Rhyme. This kind of works pay attention to the content of poetry, but not to the form of poetry. In fact, the so-called free rhyme or free rhyme is not new now. In fact, there are also ancient poems, which is called rhyme change. If there is any difference between the two, there are at least two rhymes in the rhyme changes in ancient poetry. Now the free rhyme in poetry has broken through the limitation of two words, and only one rhyme is used, resulting in no rhyme. Formally, it doesn't seem to rhyme, almost like poetic prose. This is just a personal opinion, not an academic study, and it doesn't mean anything. If there are mistakes or fallacies. Welcome to comment!
Two: I have said my own opinion above. Let's go back to this poem and talk about the questioner's question.
In the question, the questioner said, "This poem is free-form and has no rhyme." I think this sentence is debatable. First, this is a new poem (free verse), so the rhyme is not tied to Pingshui rhyme or any other ancient rhyme. To put it bluntly, it is spoken rhyme or modern Chinese rhyme. The title of personal banter is "saliva rhyme". Secondly, there are the same or similar rhymes in this poem. The words "Li", "Si", "Le", "Dai", "Li" and "Ti" all have similar vowels "I". So it doesn't rhyme.
The above is only a personal opinion, not necessarily correct, please correct me!