Close? Keys? Words: 400 words in the fourth grade of Shuangshou Primary School
Words: 400 words composition
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 400 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is "One Hands". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Mother has a pair of dexterous hands. As long as this hand moves gently, a beautiful sweater appears in her hand. Dad has a pair of thick hands. As long as these hands move gently, the heavy work at home is all covered, and all the hard work is done. Grandpa has rough hands. As long as this hand moves gently, the sapling in front of the door will immediately appear in front of everyone. The police uncle has a pair of strong hands. As long as this hand moves gently, the traffic will become orderly. My brother has magic hands. With the slightest movement of this hand, a bamboo dragonfly will fly to the sky. I have a pair of capable hands. As long as these hands move gently, the classroom will become clean. Everyone has a pair of hands, with big hands holding small hands. What a wonderful world!
Teacher's comment: This poem by the little author has a distinct rhythm, ingenious conception and novel conception. The author describes the hands of family members and police uncles. The description of each person's hands reflects the characteristics of age and gender, such as the dexterity of mother's hands and the roughness of father's hands. The different characteristics of hands, but also describes the corresponding things, the little author is really careful observation. The last sentence of the composition, "Everyone has a pair of hands, and the big hand holds the small hand. How Beautiful the World is, which expresses the good wishes of the young author, plays a leading role in the whole poem. In "the small trees in front of the door immediately appear in front of everyone", "one tree at a time" was changed to "one tree at a time". Change "De" to "De" in "Clean Classroom". (China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang) June 23, 2009 17: 14: 00.