My castle in the air course plan one
Teaching objectives
This paper expresses the author's ambition of pursuing transcendence, tranquility, freedom and independence.
Key points and difficulties:
1, scenery description, ambition expression
2. Beautiful and refined, with beautiful and moving language.
Class hours: 1
Teaching course
1, import:
? The mountain is not high, and the fairy is named; The water is not deep, and the dragon is the spirit; I am a humble room, but I am virtuous? This is a humble room soaked with Liu Yuxi's German letter; ? On the fifth night of March, in the middle of the month, the laurel trees are mottled and the wind is moving. This is a pavilion that blends in with Gui Youguang's joys and sorrows; Today, we study Li Lewei's My Castle in the Air, appreciate the beauty of her castle in the air, and analyze the author's interest in it.
2. Li Lewei, a native of Nanjing, Jiangsu, is an essayist in Taiwan Province. With her unique feelings and poetic language, she transformed an ordinary hut on the mountain into a poetic work of art. Now I will read the text first and ask the students to find out the relationship between the hut and the surrounding environment. The phrase "hut and" draws a subtitle for each picture of the hut described by the author.
Step 3 read the questions aloud
4. The writer is like a painter, waving a colorful brush, taking the hut as the center and depicting his beloved hut and its surrounding natural environment from different angles through radial strokes. First, let's analyze the first picture-the hut and the mountain.
A, from which angle does the author describe the hut and the mountain? (Seen from a distance, panoramic view)
B, what are the characteristics of huts and mountains? What kind of emotion does it contain? Small houses adorn the mountain, making it full of vitality and sentiment.
5. What is the perspective of the author's description of the hut and the tree? What are the characteristics of the scenery and what emotions does the author contain? (4-7, myopia, local; 8. look up and look far. Trees adorn the hut, giving it a green background, vitality and spirit, making it subtle and elegant; And make the hut looming, flying, light and free)
6. The hut is dotted with hills and trees, which forms a harmonious unity with the surrounding natural scenery. The author repeatedly describes mountains, trees and huts to express his feelings. (Love of freedom)
7. The author is full of infinite love for nature. Next, the author focuses on people's feelings about natural scenery. The author stood in the hut, enjoying her territory and airspace. What did she see? (Limited territory and unlimited airspace; The garden is small, the courtyard is very open, the visible wall is surrounded by some flowers, and the invisible wall shows nature and the openness of the hut.
8. The hut is open. The air in the cabin is fresh, the light is bright, full of softness and tranquility, and the breath is fragrant. Light is full of scientific timeliness and romantic literariness. The cabin is so beautiful, quiet and natural, so is the traffic between the cabin and the outside world convenient? Why does the author have a soft spot for this hut and find direct lyric sentences? Mountain roads and slopes facilitate my walking. This is my ladder of happiness and my air corridor.
9. The author expresses his feelings of happiness and happiness by directly expressing his feelings, but the author is still wanting more. She used poetic language and painter's crayons to show us the night view of the hut, and then described that the hut was clear during the day and hazy at night, lost in the fog and became the author's castle in the air. It has no interior decoration, but there are outdoor birds, huge paintings outside the door, a hut and the world around it. Through the study of the full text, you know? My castle in the air? What is the moral of? What's your comment on the author's interest? A natural hut on the mountain also refers to an imaginary castle in the air, an ideal independent, quiet and detached living environment and an independent personality. )?
10, Li Lewei's prose style is beautiful and refined, and the language is beautiful and moving. Now read paragraph 15 together. This passage is both like a beautiful serenade and a vivid oil painting, full of poetry. Please discuss it for 2 minutes and talk about how the author makes it beautiful in music, poetry and pictures. You can find more examples in the whole article. What kind of associations do these sentences or paragraphs make you have?
Conclusion: Everyone has their own dreams and interests. Li Lewei borrowed a small room on the mountain, and expressed her interest in transcending worldly customs, loving nature, pursuing freedom and pursuing independent personality. What about you? I hope you can keep your hearts and realize your dreams.
My castle in the air lesson plan II
Teaching objectives
1. Appreciate the poetic language of this article, clarify the structure of the article, and experience the author's unique feelings.
2. Learn the method of expressing one's will by supporting things, and comprehend the picturesque artistic conception.
3. Stimulate students' feelings and qualities of loving nature, life, independence and freedom.
Teaching focus
Appreciate the beauty of artistic conception through the appreciation of poetic language and the dredge of structure.
Teaching focus
Understanding of the skills of holding things to express your wishes.
Teaching time
2 class hours
first kind
teaching process
First, the introduction of new courses.
The highest realm pursued by prose is poetic and picturesque, that is, poetic language, picturesque artistic conception and profound philosophy of life; The book we are going to study today is My Castle in the Air written by Mr. Li Lewei, which is a masterpiece of poetry, painting and philosophy.
Second, perceive the text.
1. Create a beautiful situation and read aloud with music.
2. Analyze the observation angle of writing the cabin, clarify the context of the article and perceive the text.
Observation angle: look from a distance to the near, look up and look down from a distance.
Tidy up? Background:
Describe the cabin at the beginning? Stand at a gentle angle on the ridge? It is easy to make people feel volley; Second? Close shot changed to overlooking? The tree covered the hut, only seeing the lines, eaves and windows of the building, which was very volley; Again, it is infinite. Airspace? Work? Open-air courtyard What's the name of that mountain road? Air corridor? ; Finally, what is the hut in the night scene? In the smoke, under the starry sky, a castle in the air beside the shadow of the moon? .
Grasping the context of the article will solve the basic content of the article.
3. This paper shows the uniqueness of skills.
(1) poetic language (students discover and appreciate the effect of its expression)
(1) has a symmetrical sentence pattern and a brisk rhythm.
In this paper, symmetrical sentence patterns are often used when writing landscapes, which have a strong sense of rhythm and are full of rhythmic beauty. Like what? Flowers are like human faces and trees are like human gestures. ? The movement of trees shows the tranquility of the hut; The height of the tree shows the narrowness of the hut. ? Wait a minute.
② Wonderful rhetoric
The metaphor is novel, energetic and energetic.
Such as: a.? The mountain is like a forehead, and the hut is like a mole on the forehead. . It is unique, natural and full of beautiful charm, which not only highlights the striking, fresh and exquisite of the hut, but also blends with nature, natural, imaginative and delicious.
b？ In the embrace of the mountain, the hut is as novel as in the blossom, vividly depicting the dynamic sense of static things, thus producing excellent artistic effects.
Combination of parallelism and metaphor
Like what? There is a hut on the mountain, just like a boat floating across the endless water, and like a flying goose flying across the vast sky. It is a little smart color on the solid background color, a little life and a little mood in the beautiful scenery of mountains and rivers. ? The scenery is moving and moving, which makes the scenery full of vitality and aura.
(2) the brushwork of painting
① meticulous brushwork
For example, the change of light in the hut from evening to morning is like a wonderful picture, which makes people feel real and nostalgic.
② freehand rendering
Seeing the hut from a distance is all about freehand brushwork and praying for God.
(3) combination of static and dynamic.
The combined art of static and dynamic scenes can often produce wonderful performance effects. It is the requirement of art to blend with each other and complement each other. This article is to blend vitality into static scenery. Like what? The first thing I saw was the tree in front of the hut. Those trees covered the hut. My hut looms among the trees, rises from the ground and has an elegant posture. Essentially a house; Formally, it is like a bird and a butterfly, perched on a branch, light and free! ? This passage, the combination of dynamic and static, produced an unexpected aesthetic feeling.
Third, summarize and expand.
Appreciating some prose with beautiful language focuses on appreciating language, which is a key to grasp the artistic conception. The language of this paper is beautiful. Through the concrete analysis of language, students can feel the author's good feelings. Find some beautiful essays to experience after class.
Fourth, homework
1. Read the beautiful paragraphs in the text.
2. Finish Exercise 2 after class.
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Second lesson
teaching process
First, text analysis
1. Guide students to find sentences that can reflect the author's life and understand their meanings.
For example, when writing your own little garden? Open-air courtyard 、? A tangible wall? Focus on performance? Invisible fence? The purpose is to say the cabin environment? Suitable for mind walking and eye swimming? From here we can see how comfortable and free the author's life is in this environment. When describing the beautiful scenery of dawn and dusk, we can see the unspeakable enjoyment of the author in the process of observation. The author also points out what is a hut? The starting point of happiness? And then what? The end of happiness? Between the lines, the author's love for the hut is permeated.
2. Guide students to discuss
(1) The article repeatedly writes about mountains, trees and houses. What is the reason?
Clear: Mountains, trees and houses are one and inseparable. The first two are natural landscapes, while the latter is human landscapes. Man and nature are inseparable, which shows the author's love for nature.
(2) article writing? Invisible fence? And the change of light at dawn and dusk, what's the point?
Clear: the beauty of nature is unparalleled, and people live freely and happily in a beautiful natural environment.
(3) the technique of expressing things.
What's the difference between the hut and the surrounding environment and the world?
Clear: quiet and beautiful, making people feel comfortable, free and happy.
(2) What's the purpose of writing about the cabin on the mountain?
Clarity: The cabin is in harmony with the world, which shows the author's love for freedom and life and his commitment to independent personality.
What is the relationship between the author and the external environment of the hut? Why does the author write the scenery so beautifully?
Clear: the author is integrated with the external environment of the hut. Writing about external scenery is actually about inner wishes, green trees, flowers and so on. All have the color of the author's interest and ambition. It is precisely because of the author's deep attachment to these beautiful scenery that he writes so touching and has a strong appeal.
(4) Related? Castle in the air? Meaning of
There are two meanings: ① refers to the hut in the sky on the mountain; ② refers to the author's spiritual pursuit of the ideal of a better life: freedom. Live a quiet and independent life.
(5) Discussion on doubtful points
Is the cabin real or not?
Here, we can communicate freely, speak freely and express our opinions, and there is no standard answer.
Second, summary and expansion
Expressing one's wishes through supports is a common technique in prose. One mountain, one water, one grass, one tree, one bright moon, one sunny day, one rosy cloud, one cedar and so on often bear the author's infinite feelings and ideals. When appreciating, we should not stick to the scenery itself, but understand the profound meaning given by the author through the characteristics of the scenery, from appearance to thought, from finite to infinite, from concrete to ethereal, from material state to human feelings, so as to truly appreciate the beauty of prose.
Third, homework
Learn the writing method of this article and write a short essay with a self-designed topic.