Close? Keys? Words: 450 words in the fifth grade of beautiful primary school
Words: 450 words composition
This article is suitable for: the fifth grade of primary school.
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This composition is about 450 words in the fifth grade of primary school. The title is "Beautiful Huzhou". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Huzhou is a city with four distinct seasons. I like the spring with flowers and birds, the colorful autumn and the snowy winter here, but I prefer the summer with trees. Summer is a beautiful season. In the park, there are trees and flowers, and from time to time there are colorful and dancing butterflies. The scenery of Taihu Lake is more beautiful. White birds dance in the air, green reeds dance gently with the wind, fishing boats move slowly on the lake, and sometimes there are several big fish in the net. If a gust of wind blows, the waves look like beautiful ribbons from a distance. Close up, they are like a string of broken pearls floating in the lake, and they are like silvery white flowers, which makes people feel relaxed and happy. I like this beautiful summer, and I like Huzhou, which makes people forget their troubles. Teacher's comment: The article vividly depicts the beautiful scenery of Huzhou, with beautiful language and delicate description. The article should be an exam article, and it can write such beautiful scenery in a short time, which shows that the little author has a strong literary foundation!
"I like the spring with flowers and birds here, the colorful autumn here and the snowy winter here, but I prefer the tree-lined summer here." The article closely follows this sentence and vividly presents the four seasons scenery of Huzhou to us. Small authors use personification and metaphor more, which makes the article more literary. (China Special Teacher: xu teacher) 2008-1-1617:16: 00.