In terms of expression, the whole topic uses metaphor rhetoric, so finding out the ontology of this metaphor is the key to solve the problem. "Spring comes" can be understood as the condition, environment and reason of "grass green", which is the expression and result of "spring comes". "Self" means "natural, undisturbed", so the meaning of the whole topic is clear: we should not only focus on the relationship between "spring" and "grass", but also not ignore the meaning of "self" as "automatic, alive and demanding progress" and not unilaterally understand it as "doing nothing".
To sum up, the following views should be regarded as suitable for this theme:
First, from the perspective of doing things, success is natural. Can't be quick and quick, and expect unrealistic fame and fortune. Success is always silent. When you are immersed in the hard pursuit and do a good job of what you need to achieve, you suddenly turn around and deserve it.
This idea is to examine the outlook on life and values of high school students, and to see if our teachers have guided students' values in the field of education in combination with the current social atmosphere of pursuing fame and fortune. Do students think calmly about social hype, sea elections and book publishing craze? If our teacher keeps saying, "You are not easy to learn, how can you get ahead in the future?" If students are educated with the value concept of "reading is for fame and fortune, and reading is for superiority", then students can't think of this idea.
I have always emphasized "living up to its reputation" to students in the teaching process on weekdays, asking students to restrain their inner impulses and resist all kinds of fame and fortune remarks in impetuous society. There is nothing wrong with my path. I don't know if there is anyone in my class who opposes me and exposes my educators. In the last tutorial class the night before the college entrance examination, I led the students to review an idea: "The highest state of' struggle' is' no struggle', and the result of' struggle' is achieved by' no struggle'". If students can draw inferences from others, transform this thing and deal with it in some places, it can be used to write this article.
Repetitioners can also write touching articles if they compare the feelings of the two college entrance examinations.
This idea can be formed by several hot spots. Students can write about the hot spots of the Olympic Games. They can write that the reason for China's successful bid for the Olympic Games is that China has developed rapidly in the spring of reform and China has become stronger. The success of bidding for the Olympic Games is a matter of course! It is also good to write "boycott Carrefour" and talk about "less impulse and more contribution to the country" China is strong, so it will not be bullied. ". We can also talk about "taking Tomb-Sweeping Day, Dragon Boat Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival as traditional festivals. Traditional culture can't protect success, but it is fundamental to know more about the essence of tradition and cultivate love for tradition".
Second, from the manager's point of view, the growth of things has some conditions that must be met and we need to build them. What we need to do is not to interfere with the object locally. Of course, we should never forget that you must have the desire to develop in this part, and you can't be a "dead man".
This idea actually reflects the biggest hot spot in the field of education in Shandong Province-the "New Deal for Quality Education" in 2008. Quality education is a necessary condition for teachers and students to create and develop, that is, to liberate themselves from the sea of questions, cultivate their interests and clarify their development direction. It is harmful to the long-term development of teachers and students if they interfere too much in their spare time.
Of course, if teachers are influenced by the comments of individual school administrators and preach the "harm" of "quality education" to students, then students can't figure out this writing direction. I heard that there was a head teacher in No.6 Middle School who gave a speech in the class, saying that he would "be the standard-bearer of exam-oriented education". I said this standard-bearer training "exam machine". Some people said that I was cursing, which was ridiculous!
Third, from the perspective of social development, a harmonious society needs to form an atmosphere of love. If we just blindly establish an unattainable hero image, it will be difficult to succeed without the necessary exploration of the essence behind the hero and the necessary guidance to the public.
This idea can be regarded as a reflection of the hot spot of "harmonious society" and an interpretation of the heroic deeds of sacrificing teachers in the Wenchuan earthquake. The night before the college entrance examination, I explained the story of the hero teacher to the students. I mean what Master Nan Huai Jin said. I told the students, do these hero teachers have time to make their own choices? Impossible, there is not that much time. They turned "great love" into "instinct". The house will fall down and the students will be killed or injured. Instinctively, they pounce on it and have no time to think about their own lives. How do we view this matter? Master nan huaijin said that survivors should see that loving others means loving themselves, and remember the sage's "kiss, be kind to people and love things". After all, "man-made disasters" are much more than "natural disasters". In order to create a harmonious society, we need to create such an atmosphere. When everyone regards "love others" as "love themselves" and turns "great love" into "instinct", then society will be harmonious and more and more people will sacrifice themselves to save others. If you only see the greatness of the heroic teacher's sacrifice, you can use this to educate people like "Fan Paopao": "Look, everyone has sacrificed. Look at your practice, don't you blush? " It's useless!
The third idea can be written separately or abbreviated to the progressive structure of the second idea.
Writing here, I looked online by the way and found an authoritative interpretation. After reading it, I have no heart. He analyzed it like this:
"Spring grass grows green" comes from Buddhist language, including a group of "sit still, spring grass grows green" and the sum of "yellow leaves fall in Qiu Lai, spring grass grows green". In Buddhist language, this sentence means advocating nature, understanding nature, and then being suddenly enlightened. As can be seen from the title, the laws of nature are irresistible and independent of human consciousness. We just need to understand nature and use its laws. This is consistent with the discussion about Marxist philosophy in high school politics. With the above understanding, this topic composition becomes clear, and candidates can talk about the irresistible force of natural forces in combination with current events, such as the sudden occurrence of Wenchuan earthquake.
Although this analysis can't be said to be off topic, it is superficial, and it doesn't see the essence of figurative topics, which limits students' thinking to death and can only be regarded as second-class ideas. If something goes wrong elsewhere, they can barely pass.
Shandong independent proposition in 2005, 2005 is the "win-win wisdom" of material composition, and the material has little to do with the topic, so bad reviews continue; In 2006, it was still a material composition "Starry Sky", which was a very innovative modern poem and received rave reviews. In 2007, time won't let memory rot, Shandong took a gratifying step and moved closer to lyric articles, which is still very appreciated by everyone; In 2008, "Spring comes and grass grows green" is still a topic composition, but from the writing point of view, lyricism, discussion and narration are all easy to write; From the content point of view, it is close to social hotspots, and obstacles are set up with Buddhist poems to effectively prevent plagiarism and interplanting. What is more commendable is that the composition of Shandong Volume is more conducive to examining the values of Shandong students, secretly sounding the alarm for all kinds of schools under exam-oriented education, and strongly echoing the new policy of quality education. I have to be amazed at the thought of this!
It should be said that national writing is a good thing, but you should know that writing in the examination room is different from your own composition. I have met many writers whose writing style is unclear. First, they quoted a long story, and then a long story. The two stories have little connection, and the article has two centers. It's feasible to discuss it mixed with it. There is no overall concept, and it is not clear whether it is argumentative or narrative. Some authors may be big names, writing without thinking, and writing "They are taller again in the spring breeze" to praise the vitality of nature.
Just entertain yourself, no one will be serious, but this is the college entrance examination composition! It is a 60-point big question to test students' three-year high school Chinese learning! The leaderboard is at the top, and the comments below shout "Good article". What should our students do if they see it?
Of course, there are some gains. One author wrote the idea of "let nature take its course", which I think is very suitable for the topic. Inspired me to rethink, the thinking of Shandong Volume is clearer and summarized as follows:
1, we should pay attention to the solution of figurative topic composition, we must not stay in the vehicle itself, we must grasp the ontology through the vehicle.
"Spring is coming" is the most important thing. How did this spring come about? Different interpretations lead to different ideas:
(1) Spring comes naturally, and the grass is naturally green-let it be. Of course, when writing, don't confine yourself to the surface of nature.
(2) "Spring" is a condition, which should be realized by our efforts-keep working hard and try again.
(3) "Spring" is the reason. If you want to succeed, you must see clearly what the source of success is-strive for spiritual success and material success, and you will succeed naturally.
(4) "Spring" is an atmosphere that our managers should create for their subordinates. A unit that is conducive to giving full play to the enthusiasm of employees from the system will certainly succeed.
(5) "Spring" is love. The premise of a harmonious society is that everyone has love, love themselves, love others, and realize that human beings are insignificant to nature and need unity to survive. It is impossible to improve people's quality just by calling on everyone to learn with the deeds of sacrifice. Shandong 08 college entrance examination composition writing with the same topic "Spring comes and grass grows green" Author: Inscription: Life sometimes has to have a life. Every season, after the spring, I feel a throb in my heart. I always feel that something is going to happen, but I just wait. The whole spring passed as if nothing had happened. I will be particularly frustrated at this time. The opening words of the movie "beginning of spring", spoken with Jiang's Henan accent, are humorous and playful, and more of a kind of helplessness after expectation and disappointment. Everyone is waiting for their own spring. After the spring breeze blows, catkins fly all over the sky, birds from the south are looking for the eaves of the nest, ice and snow turn into gurgling water to find a way out, and grass that has been dead for a winter has also sprouted. What kind of new green is it, let people see it in their eyes and remember it in their hearts. The grass in spring is green, the astringent taste of the grass, and the fragrance of the soil are full of heart and lungs. How can people not expect anything to happen in such a season? But the whole spring has passed, red flowers and green leaves, disturbing cicadas and stirring the sky, making people unable to calm down and recollect. I just found out that my spring passed too fast. In a flash, I couldn't find the shadow of Miss Chun. Only the green grass told me that I had been here in spring. Oh, spring is over. What have I been waiting for? Is it the splendor of summer? Is this the splendor I expected? Melancholy, a different taste recorded my spring. Spring that is gone forever. Life is like four seasons, spring is the most beautiful and gives people endless aftertaste. Everyone has everyone's spring, different time, different place and different feelings. The only thing that is the same is that you must have had that season. Maybe you have passed the spring, or you are whispering in the arms of spring. Spring will never forget you and bless you with her gentleness and beauty. And some spring, some long let you bored, endless spring grass, gorgeous spring flowers, thin spring breeze, let you bathe in it, indulge in it, linger. Those who come in early spring will always lament the shortness of spring, just like me. I grabbed its tail, only to find that it had pulled me far away. I tried to catch up, but I couldn't catch up. I couldn't reach it. I bent down, put my hands on my knees, panting and thought, why don't you wait for me? Who will Kechun wait for? Every year at this time, I feel that she is back and the grass is green. But I just found out that it was not my spring. Grass grows green in spring, and new green is the same every year. People who see the new green are different every year. Today, I came here again. I don't know where the girl went. Only the peach blossoms are still there, smiling in full bloom in the spring breeze. The grass is boundless, laughing at my frivolous, but not young. Finding an open-minded "spring grows grass" is a Zen saying of Buddhism. Spring will come naturally, the grass will turn green naturally, and everything is so natural and open-minded. There is an old saying: "Women miss spring, while scholars mourn autumn". If Du Fu's mind is a wanderer, he will worry about the country and the people, but in reality, many people are carefree, but they worry about others and themselves. Their troubles are fame, wealth, cars and charming children. The mood is chaotic and complicated, and it is rare to have a moment of peace. They don't understand that "spring grass grows green" and pursue fame and gain in the rolling world of mortals. "I'm lucky, but I can't die." The key is to keep an open mind. It is not easy to have this kind of open-mindedness, which requires a kind of mind. As the ancients said, tolerance is great. Maybe put the whole world on your chest and your heart in the sky, and all your desires are like ants to you; While staying in the corner and admiring yourself, all desires are great for you. Just Su Like Dongpo, who is "high-spirited and ambitious"; He was proud of the imperial examination and was appreciated by the emperor. His career at that time was almost brilliant. But after the hardships of officialdom, why not fall to the ground and disappear? It is because of his broad mind that he faced all kinds of disappointments and personal sorrows in real life, and rose from personal feelings to rational broadmindedness. In Su Shi's thoughts, there are Confucianism, Taoism and Zen. Zen is not so much a religion as a life wisdom, not so much a belief as a unique way of thinking. "If you want to be an official, you will be an official, not an official; If you want to hide, you will hide, and if you don't hide, you won't hide. " This is what Su Shi said when evaluating Tao Gong. When he was an official, Tao Gong did not regard himself as a rare pearl. When he retired, the smell of natural soil came to the nose. I like Tao Gong's calmness, calmness, Tao Ran and cheerfulness. He is like the soil at the foot of Nanshan, creating a peace for himself. He thinks he is soil, but this soil is full of chrysanthemums, emitting a fragrance that lasts for thousands of years ... How many literati can be like Weng Tao in feudal times? They may be as unhappy as Meng Haoran and regret for life; Or, like Ruan Ji and Ji Kang, they are "addicted to alcohol" all day long and pretend to be crazy. Different from Tao Yuanming's seclusion, he kept a peaceful mind, stuck to his rural life and deliberately refused to be used by the court again. Another example is Mr. Zhou, who was "imprisoned" in a remote and desolate small county town during the Cultural Revolution, which means that his talents are in danger of being buried. But he abandoned the cynicism of "activists" around him, thought about life with that enlarged heart and studied hard to write, and finally became famous as a philosopher. "Don't be surprised, look at the flowers in front of the court; I have no intention of staying long. I hope the sky is full of clouds. " People should learn to transcend the setbacks and disappointments in life, because perhaps human life is essentially a grain of soil and a grain of sand. Since the fate of a grain of soil can't fall into the hands of craftsmen and become hard pottery, get into the clam shell quietly and wait for it to shine. American Dale Carnegie once commented on life like this: "As long as you don't take yourself too seriously, a person will be very happy." One has a way of life. You can live like a pearl, but you can't see yourself as a pearl. Treat yourself like dirt and let everyone step on you. Why the soil is not fragrant, and the road is permanent.