How to write a composition with the theme of "maternal love"

Let those nights in memory remain beautiful —— On how to write a composition (teaching paper) with the theme of "maternal love". The theme of "maternal love" is even more common in our primary and secondary school students' compositions. Originally, students understand the greatness of maternal love, and it is very gratifying to understand and repay their mothers. There is nothing to say. However, the image of our middle school students' mother described in their own compositions can only be "narcissism", which is difficult to impress readers, and more directly, it is difficult to satisfy the composition marking teacher. We can first look at the common problems of middle school students writing such compositions: First, after reading many famous books about maternal love, Chinese marking teachers will inevitably see that students' works are not up to grade. It is certainly not easy for students to get high marks in writing compositions such as mothers. Secondly, the proportion of middle school students who like to write about maternal love is too large. For example, last semester, the title of the Chinese final exam for the seventh grade in Hezhou was "I love my-",and I wrote an article with true feelings. Obviously, this is a semi-propositional composition with many choices. However, after the exam, I found that 85% of the students in our school were writing about their mothers. You see, so many compositions are similar or even consistent, how to mark them is a problem. To put it bluntly, once the marking teacher is tired of aesthetics, it is difficult to get satisfactory scores. Third, the images of mothers written in middle school students' compositions are very thin, and some of them are even false. When writing about maternal love, many students' experiences are surprisingly similar. They are nothing more than their own diseases, and their mothers feel distressed. Either it's cold/rainy at school, and my mother sends clothes/umbrellas. In fact, our Chinese teacher wrote this way when he was a child, and it is estimated/afraid that the teacher's teacher wrote this way when he was a student. If young people in the 2 1 century still write like this, it is nothing new. Finally, "true feelings" is a big problem. Even if the exam questions do not explicitly require "true feelings", we must do this. However, we middle school students seldom reflect it in our own compositions, which really makes people, to be exact, disappointed the marking teacher. Therefore, there is little hope of writing a composition with the theme of mother and getting satisfactory test results. In view of the above problems, we might as well appreciate an excellent work about maternal love, which is as beautiful as ever. The full text is as follows: the moonlight is bright, like a shining white silk, quiet and serene. I took my mother's hand and stood on the street corner, waiting for my brother to come home from school late. It was not cold, but the street was quiet and empty, and I waited impatiently. My mother waited patiently and looked at the wide and white road. My mother said, "I'm used to waiting like this all the time." My heart is trembling, and my eyes are blurred in my mother's thin figure. I once made my mother wait like this, not when she was young, but when her daughter grew up, she was even more worried about her. On those starry nights last month, my classmates and I went home happily singing. When I turned into a quiet street corner alone and saw my mother's clothes fluttering in the shadows, my heart suddenly jumped fast. I ran over and just shouted "Mom!" My mother didn't say anything, just smiled happily, patted my hand and walked home together. Now I have gone to a different place and come back only during the holidays, but my mother's figure is still standing under the street tree on time, waiting for my brother who is about to leave home to study. I suddenly envy my mother. I can tolerate such deep love in the quiet waiting. The ringing bell rang, and my brother stood in front of my mother and me with a smile: "Mom! Sister! " "How did you come back and keep your mother waiting for so long?" I'm half happy and half bitter. "Go home!" Mother still smiled with relief and patted her brother's hand. My brother made a face at me. Seeing my brother's tall figure beside my mother, I suddenly felt that I had lost something. Sailing ships can only miss the warm harbor, but they can't stay forever. Before going back to school, my mother quietly packed my luggage. When she saw me walking around with her, she didn't speak. My mother said, "That's how your grandmother used to send me away." Ah, I looked at my mother silently, as if I saw my grandmother's busy hands. It suddenly dawned on me that my grandmother must have stood on the street corner before, waiting for my mother to go home, just like my mother is waiting for us to go home today. I will let my deep love dissolve in the waiting one day. My mother stood quietly in the moonlight before my eyes, only knowing that no matter what happened, those nights in my memory would always be so beautiful. (End of full text)-Beautiful as ever! ! Yes, in each of our memories, a mother's selfless love for her children will always be beautiful! ! Here, everyone will certainly wonder why the article "As Beautiful as ever" is so beautiful. Let's try to appreciate it carefully: first of all, this article has a profound theme. The compositions written by our classmates often only talk about how mothers care about themselves, and some students even exaggerate in order to praise their greatness. For example, many middle school students write at the beginning of their compositions: "Everyone has his own mother, and I also have a mother. I think my mother is the greatest. " This language is definitely not what we want to see. It's totally different from Beauty as Always. In this beautiful article, the mother's love for her children is consistent, and her love for "me" and her brother will not be less. More importantly, the maternal love described in this article is not just maternal love. In the past, my mother's grandmother also gave her deep love. As a young "I", I will definitely carry this great and selfless maternal love to the next generation in the future! ! This is how the traditional broad maternal love of our Chinese nation is passed down from generation to generation. Secondly, the author of As Always has delicate and sincere feelings. This is mainly reflected in the article's specific description of in-laws' actions, language and portraits. Especially the comparative description of the different psychology of "I" and my mother. Everyone saw it: "The street was quiet and empty, and I was impatient to wait, but my mother waited patiently." My mother said, "I've been waiting like this and I'm used to it." "I saw my mother's clothes fluttering with the shadows, and my mother didn't say anything. She smiled happily, patted my hand and walked home together. " And so on. On the other hand, there are too many simple narratives and empty sentences in our classmates' compositions, which makes people feel that the image of mother in the composition is thin and even false. This problem is very common among our middle school students, especially serious. So "Beauty as Always" is worth studying hard by all of us! Once again, the writing of "seeing the big from the small" makes people sigh. Waiting is a very common thing. Anyone can wait or be waited by others at any time. On such a trivial matter, the author can express such a profound theme in the article-maternal love, selfless love passed down from generation to generation! ! ! I think every reader of Beauty as Always will be amazed. We middle school students should understand that it is not earth-shattering that is a good article. In particular, some middle school students deliberately fabricate false stories in order to make their compositions more exciting. For example, I wrote that I was seriously ill, how my mother felt distressed and how she cared; Either the mother is sick and still working hard for her children, and so on. This is completely unnecessary. Finally, the scenery description is appropriate and the language is natural and fluent. The opening sentence: "The moonlight is bright, like shining white silk, quiet and serene." Immediately bring our readers into a quiet, peaceful and beautiful atmosphere. At the same time, it also makes our readers realize that the stories/characters to be told next must be beautiful and moving. In the article: "I suddenly envy my mother, and I can tolerate such deep love in the quiet waiting", "Seeing my brother's tall figure beside my mother, I suddenly feel that I have lost something, and the sailing ship can only miss the warm harbor, but can't berth forever" and other sentences are very natural and beautiful. At the end of the article: "My mother stood quietly in the moonlight before my eyes, only knowing that no matter what happened, those nights in my memory will always be so beautiful" echoed the last article and deepened the theme. Of course, this is a classic of famous artists, and the average middle school student can't have such a profound writing skill. However, I think this should be the direction of our middle school students. There is no doubt about the greatness of mother, and the nobility of maternal love is eternal! ! How to make middle school students write a good composition with the theme of "maternal love" is worth thinking about. I hope that the great and selfless love of mothers for their children will always be as beautiful as ever in each of our memories! ! ! Author: Li Ke