China * * * production party was founded in July 192 1 year, and it has gone through more than 90 years in a blink of an eye. During this period, the China Producers Party led the revolutionary team to fight the Japanese devils to the end and drove the Japanese invaders out of China. Fighting bravely with the Kuomintang, China, which was finally unified, established a new China; After the founding of People's Republic of China (PRC), the production party and people of China worked hard to turn the poor old China into today's prosperous new China.
Thanks to China * * * Production Party, it has created a peaceful era for us, so that we can go to school happily today, sit quietly in the classroom, go home safely and live happily with our parents. Thanks to China's * * * production party, we can live in a rich and powerful country, so that we can no longer be invaded by other countries, so that we can study quietly and live with peace of mind in our own country. Thanks to the production party of China, it has provided us with a stage for free development, so that we can have our own dreams and realize them through our own efforts. Thanks to China's * * * production party, we got rid of the label of "the sick man of East Asia", made China a world power, accepted the respect and admiration of other countries, and let us strut around the world. I must remember the glorious history of the party, so that I can have inexhaustible motivation to advance; I will certainly listen to the party and contribute to the prosperity of the motherland; I will definitely follow the Party and work together to realize a capitalist society. From now on, I will study hard, set lofty goals since I was a child, work hard for the development of the motherland with the China * * * Production Party, and win glory for the people of China and China when I grow up! Teacher's comment: Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending emphasizes the theme again, which is implicit and meaningful. Comments: The sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the words are beautiful, the narrative is vivid, the image is vivid and the language expression ability is strong. Appropriate details, clear focus and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme. The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which can be called a relatively successful work.