Analysis of Chinese Sentences in NMET: On May 4th, a large-scale poetry recitation of "Red Proverbs" was held in Beijing National Grand Theatre, which was read by many famous poets.

On May 4th, a large-scale poetry recital of Red Proverbs was held in Beijing National Grand Theatre. Through the superb recitation art of many famous performing artists, the college students present were excited and deeply shocked.

If it is not properly matched, you can change "through the exquisite recitation art of many famous performing artists" to "hear the exquisite recitation of many famous performing artists" or add the word "performance" directly after "recitation art".