"Moonlight over the Lotus Pond" is a landscape prose and a lyrical prose. The author cleverly combines the description of the lotus pond with the description of the moonlight in simple, elegant and poetic language, highlighting the elegance and hazyness. , the beauty of the quiet environment expresses a touch of sadness and a touch of joy in the description of the scene. It is easy for students to enter the scene, but it is difficult to fall in love with them, and it is difficult to understand the subtleties of language and scenery levels. Therefore, when teaching, we first describe in detail the era when the article was written and the author's complex mood, so that students can generate history through association. imagination, and then closely follow the changes in the author's emotions to figure out the use of language and the beauty of artistic conception. The following is the lesson plan of "Moonlight over the Lotus Pond" from the first volume of the first volume of high school published by the People's Education Press for your reference. Welcome to browse!
1. Teaching objectives
1. Understand the author’s thoughts and feelings;
2. Learn the author’s language skills
2. Teaching focus
1. Try to figure out the meaning of words and sentences based on the context, and appreciate the concise and beautiful language characteristics and expression effect of the work;
2. Understand the integration of landscape language and love language Wonderful thing.
3. Teaching procedures
Before class: ① Students consult information about the background of the times;
② Students read the article carefully and think carefully about the reading training assigned by the teacher question.
Classroom: ①Discuss reading training questions in groups (one class hour)
②In the order of writing the article, combine reading training questions (two class hours)
After: ① Organize class notes
② Do the relevant questions in "Innovative Thinking Training" within a limited time
③ Imitation: imitate the metaphor of the fourth natural paragraph of the text and write a paragraph of text describing the scene< /p>
IV. Teaching Process
Reading training materials
I have been feeling quite uneasy these days. (What is the reason for the lack of tranquility? Analysis: After the failure of the Great Revolution in 1927, the author was wandering and depressed, hoping to seek relief in a quiet environment but unable to escape) Tonight, I was sitting in the yard enjoying the cool air, and suddenly I thought of the day. The lotus pond I walked through must have a different look in the light of the full moon. The moon gradually (if the word "gradually" is omitted, what is the difference in the expression effect? ??Analysis: "Gradually" writes the slowness of the flow of time and the transfer of space, which is consistent with the tranquility of the environment and the rather restless state of mind. If it is omitted, it cannot Depicting the fluidity of time and space changes, it cannot reflect the tranquility in slowness and the unquietness in tranquility) has increased. The laughter of the children on the road outside the wall has been heard no longer; , humming a lullaby drowsily. I quietly put on my big shirt, belt (What is the difference if the word "band" is changed to cover or guan? Analysis: cover the door/turn around/pull the cover, the movements are cumbersome and have a certain purpose; the process of guan action is similar to cover, The purpose is strong, the emotional color of the language is plain and pale, and lacks expressiveness; the door is gently closed from behind, the movements are gentle and casual, keeping the environment quiet, and consistent with the mood) and going out.
(1. In this paragraph, what spaces does the author’s environment consist of three-dimensionally? Analysis: yard, night sky, outside the wall, inside the house, outside the door)
(2. In this natural paragraph, what overlapping words does the author use? What is their function? Analysis: day by day, gradually, dazedly, quietly; the overlapping words used in this article not only vividly describe the scene in front of you , and also has a kind of rhythmic beauty. The repeated words are generally read in a soft tone. The soft tone matches the gentle scene, which can render an elegant but not vulgar language atmosphere. In the prolongation of the pronunciation, the meaning and emotion are revealed. It is also endless and evocative. )
Along (why not lead? Analysis: Along means surrounding, you can see the scenery on all sides of the lotus pond, and leading means you are still walking towards the lotus pond. On the road, you can't see the lotus pond.) The lotus pond is a small winding road. This is a secluded road; few people walk it during the day, and it is even more lonely at night. (What is the connection between the three scenarios of twists and turns, secludedness and loneliness? Analysis: twists and turns lead to secludedness, and secludedness leads to loneliness.) There are many lush trees growing around the lotus pond. On one side of the road are some willows and some trees whose names I don’t know. On a moonless night, the road is eerie and a bit scary. Tonight is very good, although the moonlight is still faint. (Which overlapping words did the author use when describing the scenery? Analysis: The color is gloomy, gloomy, and light; what is the tone of the scenery? Analysis: Light; what kind of mood does it reveal?
Analysis: Light Sadness.)
I was alone on the road, walking with my hands behind my back. (If the word "walk" is changed to "walk", what will the expression effect be different? Analysis: pacing: walking unhurriedly, unhurriedly, slowly and orderly, but in my heart I am thinking, feeling, and leisurely. , a touch of sadness is looming in the detachment. If it is changed to the word "Zhao", it lacks the charm of scene integration) This world seems to be mine; I also seem to be beyond my ordinary self, (contact the context, understand that my ordinary self is What is it like? What is it like now? Analysis: depressed, hesitant, trying to escape but unable to transcend; a free person) in another world. I love being lively and calm; I love being in groups and being alone.
Like tonight, a person can think about anything and think about nothing alone under this vast moonlight, and he feels like a free person. Whatever you must do or say during the day can be ignored now. This is the beauty of being alone, and I enjoy it (the words "beauty" and "benefit" can indicate how the author's mood changes? Analysis: from a touch of sadness to a touch of joy) This boundless lotus fragrance and moonlight are better. (What role does the last sentence of this natural paragraph play in the context? Analysis: a transitional sentence connecting the previous and the next)
Above the twists and turns of the lotus pond, Miwang (what is the meaning of Miwang? Analysis: full of vision, The eyes are full of leaves, like the scenery of spring. The leaves are high out of the water, like Tingting (Tingting echoes with the previous word, does it modify the dancing girl or the skirt? Analysis: echoes with high, modifying the dancing girl's skirt). (This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric. What are the ontology and the metaphor? What are the similarities between them? Analysis: The ontology is a leaf; the metaphor is a dancing girl's skirt; the dancing girl's skirt is similar to the naturally stretched form of a leaf.) Among the layers of leaves, (field and layer are the specific explanations of which word before? Why? Analysis: twists and turns; Tiantian describes its continuity, layer by layer describes its high and orderly order), dotted here and there ( Which word embellishment echoes? Analysis: sporadic) There are some white flowers, some are blooming gracefully, some are blooming shyly; (Which rhetorical device is used in this sentence? Is it better to use other rhetorical devices? ? Why? Analysis: Personification; other rhetorical techniques cannot be used, because the use of personification can echo the dancing girl above, the lotus stems resemble the dancing girl, the leaves resemble the dancing girl’s skirt, and the flowers resemble the dancing girl’s face, which is also diverse and charming) Each pearl is like the stars in the blue sky, or like a beauty just out of the bath. (This sentence uses metaphorical figures of speech. What are the ontology and metaphorical objects respectively? What are the similarities between them? Analysis: The ontology is white flowers; the metaphorical objects are pearls, stars in the blue sky, and beauties just out of the bath. .
1. The lotus flowers under the moon are white and bright, and they are dotted sporadically, like pearls; 2. The white flowers are dotted among the layers of leaves, faintly among the green bushes. Twinkling, similar to the stars in the blue sky; 3. The lotus is graceful, shy and white and bright, and its expression and color are similar to the beauty just out of the bath) The breeze passes by, sending wisps of fragrance, as if it is vague on a tall building in the distance Like singing. (The method of describing synaesthesia is used here. Try to describe what synaesthesia is? What is its greatest characteristic? How are the wisps of fragrance similar to the faint singing on the tall buildings in the distance? What is the role of such a description? Analysis: Synaesthesia refers to A feeling transcends its own limitations and understands the impression belonging to another feeling, that is, the method of transforming one sensible image into another sensible image. Its biggest feature is the transfer of sensation. Intermittent, vague, and unpredictable. Function: Using singing to compare with the scent of lotus is more real and novel. The scent of lotus is originally a perceptible image of smell, but the author compares it to the vague singing on a tall building in the distance, turning it into a sense of hearing. The image interweaves vision, smell, and hearing, inspiring readers to imagine and associate more profoundly.) At this time, the leaves and flowers also trembled a little, (What is the cause of the trembling? Analysis: Breeze) Like lightning, it spreads instantly. Went to the other side of the lotus pond. The leaves were densely packed side by side, and there seemed to be a (why only one instead of several? Analysis: a trace of trembling, like lightning) ripples of solid green. (Why are the ripples solid green? Analysis: fields, layers, side by side, densely packed) Under the leaves are veins of running water (What are the characteristics of the written water? Analysis: silent, implicit). After living, some colors cannot be seen; but the leaves are more beautiful.
(Can the order of the scenery written in this paragraph be changed? Analysis: No. Because the leaves are very high in water, and they are in the fields, the leaves must be the first thing you see; because white flowers are dotted among them. , and white and shiny, so it is natural to continue writing about flowers; because the flowers are scattered, there is a fragrance wherever the breeze passes; because there is a breeze, there are ripples; because there are ripples, you can see the flowers underneath. Running water; because of the flowing water, the leaves are more beautiful. The author's eyes return to the leaves and flowers, and then the following sequence of descriptions of the moonlight quietly falling on the leaves and flowers is logically introduced. It has a strong connection between the front and back, is very layered, and must not be mobilized)
The moonlight is like flowing water, quietly flowing down (if the word "tang" is used instead, what is the difference in the expression effect? ??Analysis: "dropping" It means that the moon is at the top of the sky, and the moonlight flows from top to bottom, giving it a stronger sense of movement and three-dimensionality; although flowing also means flowing downward, it generally means that water, tears or sweat, etc. flow down along or attached to something, and moonlight It is illuminated from the air and is not attached to anything) on ??this leaf and flower. Thin green mist floats (if the word "floating" is used instead, what difference does it have in terms of expression? Analysis: float depicts the layering and movement of the green mist and the leaves and flowers that are close to each other and set off each other but also at a distance. It can also describe the green mist as if it is moving. And stillness, a soft and implicit state that seems to be still and moving; although floating echoes with thinness, it is scattered and easy to float. Although it has a soft state, it is not implicit. The beauty of quiet and posthumous, and the reason why the fog is green is because of the fog. It is made of dense leaves close to the fields. When it floats high and far away, it loses the feeling of green. It rises in the lotus pond. The leaves and flowers seem to have been washed in milk; they are also like a dream wrapped in a veil.
(What is the essence of milk and gauze? What is the essence of dreams? Analysis: Thin green mist; leaves and flowers) Although it is a full moon, there is a layer of light clouds in the sky, so it cannot shine brightly; but I thought this Just when you are right, a sound sleep is indispensable, and taking a nap has its own flavor. The moonlight shines through the trees, and the dense bushes high up cast jagged and mottled black shadows, as steep as ghosts; the sparse shadows of the curved willows seem to be painted on lotus leaves. (What characteristics of which two types of tree shadows are described in this sentence? What role does painting and calligraphy play in expressing these characteristics? Analysis: The uneven and mottled black shadows of shrubs; the sparse and beautiful shadows of willows; the painting illustrates the patchwork and harmonious shades of tree shadows. Just right, it seems to be from the hands of a famous painter, and it also makes it easier for readers to associate and imagine the poetic and picturesque moonlight in the lotus pond) The moonlight in the pond is not uniform; but the light and shadow have a harmonious melody, like the famous music played on the Buddhist bell. (This sentence uses the figures of speech of metaphor and synaesthesia. What are the ontology and metaphor respectively? What are the similarities between them? From what two senses are they transferred from each other? Analysis: ontology moonlight; metaphor famous songs; similarity Point: Harmony; it is the interchange of vision and hearing)
(Comment: This paragraph describes the moonlight on the lotus pond, with positive descriptions, such as running water, diarrhea; it also uses scenery as a contrast, such as describing the blue sky. Fog, leaves and flowers, dark shadows, beautiful shadows, etc.; it describes that although light and shadow are uneven, they are harmonious like a famous song. Light and shadow merge into one, the lotus pond merges into the moonlight, the mood and the scenery merge into one, and the whole world becomes one. , dream-like, poetic and picturesque, which makes the author and readers intoxicated. The author's heart still reveals a touch of joy)
The four sides of the lotus pond are far and near, high and low. They are all trees, (far and near, high and low describe what characteristics of trees? Analysis: continuous, high and low, with clear layers), and willows are the most numerous. These trees surrounded a lotus pond; only a few gaps were left on the side of the path, as if they were specially left for the moonlight. The color of the trees is gloomy, and at first glance they look like a cloud of smoke; but the beauty of the willows can also be distinguished in the smoke. (In the overall description of trees, the graceful appearance of willows is emphasized. What kind of writing method is this? Analysis: combination of points and faces) faintly visible on the treetops is a distant mountain range, which is just a general outline. There are one or two street lights leaking through the cracks in the trees, looking listless like sleepy eyes. The liveliest sounds at this time were the cicadas chirruping on the trees and the frogs croaking in the water; but the excitement was theirs and I enjoyed nothing. (How did the author write from scenery to people? What changes have occurred in the author's mental scenery? Analysis: The street lights are associated with human eyes, and the human eyes will naturally be associated with human hearts. When thinking of individuals, the lively The sound of cicadas and frogs naturally disturbed the transcendental state of the lotus pond and the author's heart. The author finally sighed that the excitement was theirs, and I had nothing to do with it. The author's mood changed from a touch of joy to a touch of sadness.)
Suddenly I remembered the matter of picking lotus. (Why did the author suddenly think of lotus picking?
? Analysis: The rather restless mood was not relieved by the dreamy lotus pond bank, but the yearning for the grand occasion of lotus picking in ancient times and the To relieve the nostalgia for my hometown.) Picking lotus is an old custom in Jiangnan. It seems to have been in existence for a long time, and it was popular in the Six Dynasties; we can roughly know it from poetry. Those who picked lotus were young women. They went in boats and sang erotic songs. Needless to say, there are many people picking lotus, and there are also people watching lotus picking. It was a lively season and also a romantic season. Emperor Yuan of the Liang Dynasty said it well in "Poem of Picking the Lotus":
So the fairy boy and Yuan girl made a promise to go boating; the hawk's head slowly returned, and the feather cup was passed on; the boat was about to move and the algae was hanging, and the boat was about to move. And Pingkai. Her waist is slender and her clothes are tied tightly, and her steps are delayed. At the beginning of summer and after spring, when the leaves are tender and the flowers are blooming, she smiles for fear that her clothes will be stained, and she pulls back her clothes for fear of capsizing the boat.
You can see the scene of fun at that time. This is really interesting stuff, but it’s a pity that we are no longer lucky enough to enjoy it. (The author was moved by the scene, and the scene in front of him reminded him of the scene of picking lotus in the south of the Yangtze River. The author said that this was a lively and romantic season, and quoted Emperor Liang Yuan's "Ode to Picking Lotus" to describe the scene of the play at that time. Has the author been attracted by this scene? What sentence in the article can express it? Analysis: No. Unfortunately, we are no longer able to enjoy it. The excitement is still theirs, and I have nothing.)
Then I remembered "Xizhou". Sentences from the song:
In the autumn of picking lotus in Nantang, the lotus flowers exceed people’s heads; I lower my head to get the lotus seeds, which are as clear as water.
("Xizhou Song" was originally used to describe the pain of a young woman missing her lover, but what emotion did the author use it to express? Which sentence in the article can express it? Analysis: What makes me feel homesick? (I am thinking about Jiangnan)
If there are lotus pickers tonight, the lotus flowers here will be considered to be more than the number of people. It is not enough to just see some shadows of running water.
This makes me miss Jiangnan after all. (Why is the author thinking about Jiangnan at this moment? Analysis: Feeling moved by the scene, being alone in a foreign land as a stranger, facing the dark reality, depressed and hesitant, at a loss what to do, wanting to be detached and struggling, using homesickness to relieve sorrow) Thinking like this, suddenly When he raised his head, he realized that he was already in front of his own door. He gently pushed the door open and went in. There was no sound. His wife had been asleep for a long time. (How did the author feel when he returned home from the lotus pond? Analysis: The author returned to reality from his reverie. The reality is still the same, the sorrow is still the same, and the heart is still not peaceful. What he just saw, heard, and thought seemed like a dream.
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July 1927, Tsinghua Garden, Beijing
"Moonlight over the Lotus Pond" blackboard design
Reason: The mood is quite uneasy (the emotional tone will be revealed below) and care)
1. Going out on a moonlit night
Purpose: to see the lotus pond under the moon
Path: winding, secluded, lonely
General Write about the moonlight in the lotus pond
Trees: lush and lush
Moonlight: light (color of the scene)
Mood: light sadness
2 , Walking on the path
Impression 1: Feeling like myself beyond the ordinary
Outlining the outline of the lotus pond
Expressing my feelings
Impression 2: I feel like I am free People (response 1)
Impression 3: Enjoy the boundless lotus fragrance and moonlight
Mood: a touch of joy
Lotus leaves
Lots and lots of business: Tiantian
Tallness and beauty: pavilion, dancer’s skirt
Color: dotted with white flowers
Lotus pond
< p> LotusAttitude: Opening gracefully (in full bloom)
Opening the flowers shyly (in bud)
Brightness: Pearls, stars
Lotus fragrance: vague song
Lotus wave: like lightning, instant, solid blue
3. Fine writing
Lotus water: pulse
Moonlight over the lotus pond
(Leaves: more elegant)
From the perspective of the moonlight, write on the front: like flowing water, diarrhea
Green mist: thin, like milk
Like gauze
From the perspective of scenery, contrast:
Leaves and flowers: like dreams
Moonlight
Tree shadows: dark shadows, beautiful shadows
Light and shadow: uneven, harmonious
Like a famous song
Writing about moonlight Bottom
Close view
From the front: The trees are overcast,
The surrounding lotus pond
looks like smoke
< p> StaticWritten from the point: Willows in full bloom
Vision: faint distant mountains
(Looking up)
Looking straight up : Streetlight: listless
Dynamics: cicadas chirping, frogs croaking
Mentality: I have nothing (response 2)
A touch of sadness
< p> 4. Looking back at the grand scene of lotus picking in the south of the Yangtze River, I feel homesick and still uneasy (response 3)