Just broke free from the spider web of myth;
I/am the germ of your snow quilt/ancient lotus;
I/am the whirlpool of your tears/laughter;
I am a new/snow-white starting line;
Yes/Red Dawn
Be/spray;
-the motherland!
I'm one billionth of you,
Is the sum of your 9.6 million square meters;
You/with scarred breasts
raise
Lost me, considerate me, boiling me;
Then/from my flesh and blood
get
Your richness, your glory, your freedom;
-Motherland
My dear/motherland!
PS:
Shu Ting's "Motherland, My Dear Motherland" is about the author's lament and sadness about the poverty and backwardness of the motherland in the past, as well as his belief and hope for the prosperity of the motherland now and in the future, expressing the author's infinite love for the motherland.
On the whole, dear motherland divides the whole poem into four paragraphs in the form of syntactic cycle, and uses "-motherland!" Repeatedly chanting, deepening layer by layer, expressing ardent patriotic feelings.
In the first section, a group of ugly images such as "worn-out old waterwheel", "blackened miner's lamp", "withered ear of rice", "disrepair roadbed" and "barge on muddy beach" are used to write out the poverty and backwardness of the motherland, and there is an exclamation at the end-"motherland!" Express the author's lament about the poverty and backwardness of the motherland in the past.
In the second section, it is written that the ancestors' expectations of the motherland's prosperity and strength in poverty and pain have never been realized. The exclamatory sentence at the end "-motherland!" It contains more helplessness and sadness.
In the third section, with a turn of the pen, through a group of hopeful and energetic images such as "the embryo of the ancient lotus under the snow", "the white starting line" and "the crimson dawn", it is written that the motherland is now facing new hopes and is gestating new ideals, and a big country is standing at the starting line of its rise. The last sentence of this section is "-motherland!" Expressed a kind of excitement beyond pain and full of hope and expectation.
On the basis of the third section, the last section expresses the author's belief and passionate enthusiasm for the rejuvenation of the motherland. Use "-motherland, my dear motherland!" Repeated emphasis on expression, so that the love for the motherland reached the highest.
It can be said that the exclamatory sentence "-motherland!" Used at the end of these four parts. . This way of reciting not only makes the whole poem have neat formal beauty in form, but also makes readers have a stronger sense of rhythm and lyricism when reciting. As analyzed above, "-the motherland!" Every ending contains different feelings. This is a process from lament and pain to hope and excitement. The love for the motherland lies in "-the motherland!" Repeated hymns went deeper and deeper and finally broke out.
From a small point of view, parallelism and symmetry are used in many places in Motherland, My Dear Motherland. For example, in the first section, five groups of worn-out and broken images are listed with the parallelism sentence of "I am …". There are also the first two sentences, "I am a worn-out old waterwheel by your river, spinning tired songs for hundreds of years;" And "I am a miner's lamp, and when you grope in the tunnel of history, I paint black on your forehead;" Basically symmetrical. The last three sentences "I am a withered ear of rice;" It is a roadbed that has been in disrepair for a long time; This is a barge on the muddy beach. "It is also symmetrical. This forms a certain sense of rhythm when reading and gives readers a sense of comfort. And when reciting these five parallel sentences, there is also a process from soothing to urgent, which makes the expression of feelings more intense and sad.
The second and third sections also use the sentence pattern of "I am ……". The fourth section uses parallelism and symmetry ("You boiled me with scarred * *," and "Then get your wealth, your glory and your freedom from my flesh and blood" are basically symmetrical. This makes the whole poem have a regular rhythm aesthetic feeling, and the emotion is also strengthened in the progression of parallelism.
It can be said that the basic expressions such as repeated chanting, parallelism, symmetry, etc., to a great extent, constitute the aesthetic feeling of my dear motherland in form and phonology. The author's love for the motherland is also perfectly expressed in the repeated cycle of this rhythm.