1, you are very good at observing life and can keenly capture perfect moments; You are a student with great potential.
It is a kind of wisdom for young people who are not deeply involved in the world to approach the huge society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is casual, which seems to lead the reader to Yuan Ye. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. Understand that incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
3. personified language makes the article more vivid.
4. Use wonderful imagination and subtle metaphors.
5. The ending is a bit sudden and exaggerated.
6. Briefly describe the wonderful place; Point-surface combination.
7. This article is full of passion. Reading between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has clear levels and fluent sentences.
8. The article is meticulous, orderly and vivid, which is a masterpiece.
9. You are a student with strong opinions and no lack of real knowledge. I quite agree with you, but it would be icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
10. Although writing is not very attractive to you, you are like a snail at every step, and you never stop writing. Your energy is really admirable, and with your personality, you will definitely break out of your own world.
1 1, the author's "mind wandering" has great control potential, and the whole article is written in one go, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling!
12, you can associate snow with the pursuit of life. From the details of life, your innovative energy is commendable. This article shows your simple writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
13, the metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
14, the case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in the same strain as the previous metaphor ... Finally, the author shows his feelings for ... in a few words, which is touching.
15, judging from the scene, the ending is natural.
16, … told us in a simple and pleasant tone, which is unforgettable.
17, the situation description caused suspense.
18, concrete, appropriate, wonderful ending can be described as the finishing touch.