Quietly, I grew up.
Growth is a cup of tea. We need to taste it slowly and drink it carefully before we can taste its sweetness and drink its bitterness?
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In the afternoon, sitting in a chair, holding a refreshing cup of black tea, tasting it carefully and astringent, but then a sweet feeling swept through. Isn't that how you grew up? Only through setbacks and tempering can we reap our own sweetness.
When I was a child, I always listened to my mother's words: "XXX, you see others study well." You never have to worry about your parents. Depends on how old you are. If you haven't changed at all, won't you understand? " But I want to tell you several times that I am growing up quietly!
After coming back from the labor base, I really saw "who knows that every meal is hard." The farmer's uncle worked hard to farm and grow vegetables, which brought us high-quality food. When I was a child, I was very picky about eating. I was definitely the first person to move chopsticks, but my parents never talked about me. It seems that I did the right thing. There, everyone scrambled to eat, never taking into account the gentlemanliness.
Washing clothes is a must. When I was a child, my mother never let me wash clothes. She always said, "Help me! Go to school, and be careful that your little hand becomes like a hot sea! " I still don't understand, so I have to go back to my room to study.
One day, I saw clothes piled on the balcony, just like: since they are not at home, I will wash them and surprise them when they come back!
I first picked up my mother's clothes, dipped them in some water, wiped them with soap and wiped them hard. Some soap bubbles danced around me, as if to say to me, "You are great!" " "My back hurts, because I have been washing, but my heart is very happy. I can't help laughing when I think of their surprised expressions when they come back. " Doug. Did you wash these clothes? Oh! You finally grew up! "Mom looked back at the dancing clothes and hugged me excitedly! At this point, I seem to hear the sound of "click click", oh! That's the jointing sound of growth!
If innocence is flawless beauty, it will be even more beautiful when you grow up. I learned to enjoy. Sometimes we burst into tears, sometimes we laugh, and sometimes we frown. The ups and downs still haunt me?
Chapter two: the writing of the inscription and the format of the inscription
Composition Inscription and Inscription Format
Writing an inscription is to write a paragraph related to the main idea of the article before the text. This connection can be the theme of the article, the topic of the article, or the fascinating opening remarks. Its function is to open the author's mind, highlight the center of the article and arouse reading interest.
Inscriptions are generally placed before the beginning of the text, and the position is particularly "eye-catching". A good inscription can catch the reader's heart at once and leave a deep impression on people. The requirements of the inscription are relatively simple: the sentence is short and the language is beautiful; Light emotion, shallow philosophy. So, what kind of inscription (reproduced in: www.Zw2.cN Ai Zuowen. Com) can make people unforgettable and become the finishing touch of the article? There is only one answer: let the inscription paint the soul of the composition vividly!
First, suspense attracts people to read.
Inscriptions appear in suspense and can immediately arouse people's appetite for reading; If suspense is set to "wonderful" again, it will be thrown into calm water like a stone, which will arouse people's desire to read and trigger a wonderful artistic conception of imagination.
Example 1: Write a composition on the topic of "Applause".
I used to feel inferior and sad, because I knew how ugly you were, but at that moment, I really cheered for you …
-For disabled mothers
Example 2: Write a composition on the topic of "Book".
A girl who likes reading, a girl who doesn't like reading. I am such a two-color girl. Would you like to listen to the blue loneliness of a two-color girl?
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Ex. 3: In a storm, how can we forget it? Close your eyes and you will remember; The wind and rain are buried in my heart, but I can only talk with paper and pen. .........................................................................................................................................................
Example 4: Write a composition on the topic of "Hope".
I am a poor student. Who am I afraid of? Nobody pays attention to me anyway.
You might as well express your true feelings in the article, and I hope you can listen to my heart.
-Write to yourself.
Second, the true feelings are exciting.
The composition is written by heart, and the inscription placed in the "eye-printing" can only impress people with heart and emotion and attract attention.
Example 5: Writing on the topic of "communication".
Today is my birthday, but my blessing is silent; Today is your memorial day, and your tears are silent. Let me make paper with my heart, write with my tears, and then remember the bits and pieces of our acquaintance.
-To a close friend
Example 6: Write a composition on the topic of "maternal love" or "fatherly love".
The kite rises to heaven, and the silk thread can't help lingering; The geese fly south and still turn around frequently. Years are easy to get old, and things are easy to change. In the lost years, what remains unchanged is the affectionate care of my mother.
-A message to my mother
Example 7: Write a composition on the topic of "Believe in yourself".
Don't complain about your fate, we are all the darlings of God. Don't be afraid that there are mountains outside, and there are people outside. Believe in yourself: you are a mountain outside the mountain and a person outside the people.
I feel inferior to yesterday.
Example 8: Write a composition on the topic of "responsibility".
Tens of thousands of years ago, human beings ate and drank blood; Thousands of years ago, human beings slash and burn; Decades ago, man landed on the moon ... men told men that men need responsibility.
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Third, singing "anti-tune" is unexpected.
As the saying goes: water is impermanent, and there is no formula in the text. Nowadays, calling for innovative spirit and encouraging individuality have increasingly become the main theme of composition. Innovation in the true sense is to be good at thinking about the same problem from different angles, different horizons and different levels, so as to gain different feelings and experiences, enrich the connotation of the composition and write original opinions. Of course, the requirement of "anti-tune" in the inscription is also the organic unity of personality and norms.
Example 9: Write a composition on the topic of "Dear Me".
Hey hey! What's wrong with "two sides and three knives" I am an out-and-out "two-faced".
-My self-portrait
Example attending: Writing on the topic of "Nature".
I would like to be a frog at the bottom of the well, where it is cool and comfortable, and where it is hidden and safe. Come, come, come, please come with me and jump to the bottom of the well far away from human beings.
-A frog in a well warns the world.
Fourth, the replacement type
That is, with the help of the postscript, the purpose, background or content of the article are explained, so that readers can have a clearer understanding or macro grasp of the article.
I want to send this document to my dear mother and all the loving mothers in the world.
-Inscription "Motherly love is priceless"
The inscription pointed out the writing purpose, laid the emotional tone for the full text, and sincerely expressed the love and gratitude for the mother, which moved the readers.
Another example is the inscription of a famous book "Northerners and Southerners" entitled "Friendship":
The song of friendship between two ordinary people was sung to the extreme with a torch, and their personality was sublimated in this friendship.
This inscription summarizes the story of "friendship" between northerners and southerners written in the article, so that readers can have a preliminary grasp of the content written in the article.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) "Inscription" collection
My father's kneeling made me understand that what my father and I lack is not love, but communication, heart-to-heart communication.
-Correspondence inscription
The earth gave birth to life, and life is precious, unique and fair to everyone. It is precisely because life is so precious that we should cherish it.
-Inscription for "Caring for Life"
When the ideal colorful wings beat the real air, I entered a delicate, hazy and rainy season. After swimming through my childhood dreams, I stood in the rain. 17 years old, with ups and downs, happiness and troubles.
-Inscription for My Happiness and Trouble
Many nights, I sang softly to the sunset; There have been countless dawns, and I told my thoughts to the morning glow. Teenagers are picturesque years, and teenagers are the season to fly amber dreams.
-Inscription of life in the jar
Maternal love is a long telephone line. No matter how far I go, I will always care about it, and it will always accompany me. -Inscription for "Motherly Love"
Life is full of scenery. You are a mountain, you are a landscape, because you show the world the preciseness and grandeur; You are a weeping willow, and you are also a landscape, because you have shown the world your charm and charm.
-Inscription of "I am the scenery"
Jump, let me learn to be brave; Jumping makes me full of confidence; Jumping, always hitting my heart; Take me to the next leap.
-Inscription for "Smile, Jumping Music"
Composition form
-Subtitle
A, writing guidance:
A good article should be both literary and beautiful. In narrative writing, plan to set a subtitle, which can make your composition span a long time, and you can also change places, people, shots and so on frequently. Show the tortuous plot and put on a beautiful coat for your composition.
Using eye-catching subtitles in the article, the article is naturally divided into several sections, which is not only novel in form, but also clear in organization. It is helpful to show the main content of the article well and make it clear to readers at a glance. For example, an exercise called "The Sky in the Second Day of Junior High School" adopted this form. The author added subtitles to five ancient poems, namely, Dark Clouds Condense in Wan Li, Dark Clouds Overwhelming the City, Rains in Huangmei Season, Tao is sunny but not sunny, and See the Rainbow after the storm, so as to integrate the artistic conception of ancient poems into concrete artistic description. Make the whole article have a smart rhythmic beauty.
Subtitles and composition topics echo each other, and composition topics must be able to guide subtitles in writing. There are also some relationships between subheadings, such as juxtaposition and progression. Students who are new to this writing method must know it very well.
"Parallel" is more common and easier to write. For example, when a student wrote Variations on Fat Man, he planned to set up four clever conjunctions of joy, anger, sadness and joy to add a lot of color to the text. In the article "Well, these girls" written by a student, there are four subheadings: the bad luck of a crazy girl, the yearning of a little girl, the helplessness of Yaner, the pursuit of Xiaohua, and the four girls' studies are linked to their fate. Each essay has an independent meaning and is unified by the word "reading". In Cherish a Quarter of Life, a student divides life into a quarter of green, a quarter of purple, a quarter of gray and a quarter of blank. They spell out a bright and refreshing world.
"Step by step", that is, the subtitle can develop in chronological order, and it can also have a certain logical relationship such as causality or progressive relationship. For example, a classmate's class romance set up four subheadings, namely, the first time he chose the top scholar, the second time he was angry, the third time he fought with pen and ink, the fourth time he was United with men and women, and the interesting stories between boys and girls were written in chronological order. A senior high school entrance examination topic composition "Point, Line and Surface", a candidate has three topics: Point, Line and Surface. At the end of the article, the sentence "points move into lines, lines move into planes, planes give people happiness, and happiness gives people a good mood" ends, and the relationship between "points, lines and planes" is revealed. There are also some compositions with time as the subtitle directly, just like writing with a few small diaries, which are also possible and easy to master.
In the process of drafting the subtitle, we should pay attention to two words: one is "accurate" and the other is "clever", that is, the subtitle must be extended from the topic of the composition, so as to make a breakthrough in many aspects. Therefore, subtitles must be carefully conceived, scrutinized repeatedly, and strive to express incisiveness and flavor. The so-called "cleverness" means trying to make the set subtitles look exquisite and compact, appropriate and natural, without revealing traces of artificial carving. A student was born in the article Sky of Grade Three, and four subheadings were set up: Dark clouds are crushing the city, gloomy clouds are bleak and Wan Li condenses, it rains at home in Huangmei season, and the road is sunny without sun. They quoted the weather-related poems in ancient poems, vividly comparing the life, taste and "sky" of grade three, which was novel and unique and thought-provoking. Besides quotation, other rhetorical devices such as metaphor and exaggeration can also be used in subheadings and idioms. In short, if you want to write beautiful subtitles and make your composition more attractive, you must accumulate more and practice more!
Here are some examples of composition subheadings:
Different styles of teachers, wind, rain, thunder and electricity.
The nicknames of our class are amphibian, cat and primate.
I long for that door to open. When I was six years old, I was afraid. Twelve years old, don't want to see the light. At the age of fifteen, I saw the gentle door.
Colorful campus life, nuclear boats in the classroom, laboratory episodes and wonders on the basketball court.
"The first plan is to cross the sea without telling the teacher", "The second plan is mysterious" and "The third plan is to run around"
Second, the example notes:
(1)[ Title of composition]
Sound is everywhere: the sound of wind and rain in nature, cicadas singing and birds singing; Singing, reading, laughing and crying in life, comfort, encouragement and criticism from relatives and friends; A call from the heart? Among them, there must be some kind of voice that you will never forget. It may remind you of a past event, may make you have rich imagination, and may make you realize valuable philosophy?
Please take "voice" as the topic, draw up your own topic, choose your own style, and write an article of more than 500 words. There is definitely nothing true in the article.
School name and name, otherwise points will be deducted.
[Brief analysis of the topic]
This is a developing topic composition. It is also the first time that Guangdong has conducted a topic composition exam in recent years. In fact, the title of the title composition is just an introduction. You don't need to quote and analyze the topic itself, just start writing from the topic.
This prompt requires material selection and intention: semicolons are used in the prompt to imply three different voices of reality and falsehood. The entry point of the composition can be the audible voice of life or the inner call you feel. The content can be extensive, but it is best to combine the two voices of reality and falsehood and stick to the theme. Candidates must choose what they are best at and familiar with in order to be handy. There are three "possibilities" in the hint, which are actually hints to the theme of the article. A good article needs a novel and healthy theme. Careful candidates can find that both tangible sound and intangible sound only provide candidates with a writing space or a writing medium, and the three "maybe" can urge you to explore the unique connotation of sound.
La voce naturale
In the examination room, besides the examinee's pen rustling on the examination paper, there are cicadas chirping happily outside the window, encouraging the students who have been cold for nine years. Yes, the voice of nature; Often the most authentic, beautiful, moving and inspiring?
Chunyu said
Such as ox hair, such as silver needle, spring rain, gently sprinkled on the dry land, the land is wet and red; Sprinkle it on thirsty crops and the crops will suck it. The spring rain awakened the grass, awakened the buds, gave them sincere care and meticulous care, and moistened everything on the earth silently.
Chunyu said: "I am the mother of the earth, and I have an obligation to take care of my children!" " "Spring rain, isn't it endless maternal love?
Xia yang said.
Golden glory, xia yang is high in the sky. The sun shines on the earth. Shining on the skin of flowers, flowers and plants hang their heads shyly; Water molecules shine on the water and rise to the sky happily. Xia yang, lively and splendid, exudes a moving brilliance.
Xia yang said: "I am the representative of youth!" Yes, we teenagers shouldn't have xia yang's lively personality and enthusiastic attitude towards life, shouldn't we also radiate the most touching brilliance?
Ye Qiu said.
"rustling" and "rustling" Listen, this is the sound of autumn leaves falling. What we hear from it is not the short life of autumn leaves, nor the plaintive groans of autumn leaves, but the dedication that "falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud will protect flowers more"
Autumn leaves said, "May I be the nourishment for the next generation!" " "Yes, the spirit of selfless dedication of autumn leaves is vividly displayed on you.
Winter branching theory
Last winter, the leaves fell out and the branches of a tree groaned in the cold wind. Its branches stretch out into the distance. What does it seem to be waiting for Yes, it is waiting for the arrival of the spring breeze, and it is preparing to breed the next generation of leaves, flowers and fruits.
Dongzhi said, "I hope I can get many leaves with my love." Dongzhi, I respect and let me understand my father's expectant eyes.
In spring, summer, autumn and winter, nature circulates in it. Nature is unable to speak. But I heard the sound of nature with my feelings. The voice of nature inspired me deeply.
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This article is a subtitle composition. Personalized subtitle can achieve phonetic effect. It is told by the story of xia yang's autumn leaves and winter branches in Spring Rain, which is ingenious in conception and profound in meaning. From the unique focus, wisdom can be condensed into a punch line, and the little author puts each story in a subtitle appropriately and expresses it clearly. Four subheadings, each with an independent meaning, link these meanings to form an organic whole.
(2)[ Title of Composition]
In the process of growing up, we often have many ideas in our hearts, which sometimes contradict our words and deeds; Always persistent, sometimes want to retreat; Always careless, sometimes want to be serious? Sometimes I want to cry when I am strong; Sometimes I want justice to come before right and wrong? Although it is not put into action, it is all true feelings.
Please write an article on the topic "Sometimes, I want to". Requirements: ① Complete the topic according to the written content; (2) The style is not limited (except poetry); (3) There must be no real place names, school names and names in the text; (4) No less than 600 words.
(Composition for the Senior High School Entrance Examination in Jiangxi Province in 2008)
Sometimes, I want to be willful once.
The classmates in front are too tall, and their shadows cover the small me and drown my shadow. I have no sunshine, it's gray. Even if I stand in the front row, I will always be forgotten. I've always been like this.
One day, the sun was shining. Holding my newly bought toy racing car, I joined my classmates working in the playground. My new car left theirs behind! Suddenly, a tall shadow reached out to my racing car: "This car is good, it's mine!" " "I immediately rushed up:" it's mine, give it back to me! "He pushed me to the ground and I could only watch him fiddle with my car. He is so high that he blocks the sun; Me, the short me, is even shorter. Heart, has been more gloomy.
The release of sunlight
I have been expecting myself to grow tall, have the right to be illuminated by the sun and have my own shadow. I waited. After junior high school, I fell in love with basketball. Once I watched the NBA, I found that Giant Forest had a short guard who was very flexible and had a good jump shot. I was surprised,
The defender of 1.8m is so dexterous in the giant jungle over 2m, and he is not afraid of people who are two heads taller than him. Suddenly realized that I can use my own advantages to make up for the lack of height.
From then on, after studying, I began to practice basketball hard. Now, I have also become an excellent point guard in our class. In the sun, I freely shuttled among the people above my head. This feeling is really good.
Sunshine has illuminated the shadows in my heart for many years. Now, I have grown taller, but I don't care so much, because my heart window is full of this bright sunshine.
Say goodbye to the shadow in your heart, the value of living is high, and the sun will naturally shine on you.
Now, I can say loudly-
The night gave me black glasses, but I used them to look for light; God gave me a gray heart, but I used it to pursue sunshine!
The third article: composition about spring: beautiful spring
Composition about Spring: Beautiful Spring
Composition about Spring: Beautiful Spring
Brother Dong left quietly, and Miss Chun came quietly with light steps. The earth woke up from hibernation.
Spring girl came to the garden quietly, and colorful flowers opened: Meihua girl was dressed in red and danced on the notes. Large tracts of rape flowers dance with the wind, and from a distance, they look like golden carpets. Magnolia is tall and straight on the branches, pink and white, emitting a faint fragrance.
Miss Spring came to the park again. Sister Liu's braid is soft, and green leaves grow on it, like green ribbons. Willow is swinging gracefully and dancing in the wind. Poplar moustache also fell from the tree, and its poplar flowers flew between heaven and earth like elves. The grass was pulled out of the ground, revealing a small head, which reminded me that "wildfire never completely devoured them, and they will be tall again in the spring breeze." How strong this grass is! The ground is full of colorful wildflowers, red, yellow and white? My mother told me that the yellow flowers are bitter vegetables, and the white flowers are dandelion flowers and shepherd's purse flowers. Don't look down on these flowers, they are very good medicinal materials!
Miss Chun also came to the orchard. The peach trees were covered with pink peach blossoms, just like the shy face of the little girl. Many petals fell to the ground, one after another, like petal rain. Apricot flowers are pink and white. Mom says flowers are a kind of small fruit. We can't pick these beautiful flowers. There are clusters of small white flowers on the pear tree, like snow. The smell of flowers attracted many bees and butterflies. They are busy collecting honey and brewing a sweet life.
Teacher Chun also came to the square, and the children were flying kites happily. Colorful kites fly in the blue sky, making it more beautiful. Kites fly happily in the sky, and people laugh in the square. How happy Miss Chun is! Some wind blows to make the kite fly higher!
Wherever Miss Chun goes, she brings beauty, and wherever Miss Chun goes, she brings joy!
I love this beautiful spring, I love this vibrant spring, and I love this colorful spring even more!