Optimists always like to carve their happy footprints on trees; Carve your sad footprints on the ice every time. With the passage of time, the mark engraved on the ice has disappeared, but the mark engraved on the tree has been expanding. So he will usher in greater joy, intoxicated and immersed in the happiness of the past and the future. Such a person may be happy all his life.
Moreover, I don't like to carve happy footprints on trees, nor do I like to carve sad footprints on ice, nor do I like to carve happiness on the beach and sadness on stones. In my opinion, footprints are only the testimony of happiness, sadness, success, joy or any kind of emotion. They only represent the past, not the present, and even less the future. Therefore, I will add some joyful sand to my sad footprints to soothe my inner sadness; It will also sprinkle a handful of bitter salt in the footprints of happiness, so that the mind can learn to be calm in excitement.
More often, I don't like to always pay attention to my footprints. I think that a person who always pays attention to his footprints will always live in the past. This kind of person's eyes are more often just staring at the road he has traveled, and whether the road ahead is rugged or flat, bumpy or straight and smooth, he can't predict and can't face it. He just wants to recall the past, but he can't experience the present at all. Grasping the future is like walking backwards on the beach.
For me, I don't know what my life will be like in the future. No matter how bumpy and rugged the next road is, I will raise my head, face up to the front, move forward bravely and confidently, and leave my footprints.
A dozen spring, summer, autumn and winter condensed the essence of life. When I looked back and savored the footprints I had walked, my heart was filled with emotion.
Every solid footprint of mine is full of affection and care. Unforgettable childhood childishness in memory. Ride on my father's neck and count the stars on my mother's lap. While sleeping, I pestered them to tell stories about wolves. I was woken up in the middle of the night, got into my mother's bed, and let my mother hug me tightly for fear of being carried away by it. I will never forget that when I was sick, someone gave me a piece of medicine, a cup of boiled water and a greeting, which was the careful care of my classmates. I will never forget that when I got good grades, my teacher gave me gratified eyes, and when I failed in the exam, she gave me encouraging eyes, which increased my courage to overcome setbacks. Everyone who cares about me laughs with me.
Every solid footprint of mine is also full of difficult choices. Time is really precious, but it's a pity to waste a few years. When I was in primary school, my classmates had already understood the truth that "an inch of time is worth an inch of gold" and they were all studying hard. Only I am still fooling around in front of the computer. The result is fair to everyone. When students hold heavy fruits, they will regret and feel depressed. The teacher told me: "Diligence is good at diligence, but not good at play." Only by giving, can you gain. If you fail, get up and be a strong man in life. "I understand this truth. Once, my excellent performance made me regain my confidence. The right choice made me understand more. You can't fall in the same place for the second time, or you will fall even worse.
Sweet and sour, this is a solid footprint in my growth. It accompanied me to maturity and passed through the four seasons of youth.
Composition on package form factor (selected)
subject
What is life? Life is "footprint". The long life has left a string of long "footprints". The "footprints" of childhood are childish, shallow and lovely; Middle-aged "footprint" is mature, deep and steady. In the face of "footprints", I am moved and educated; Face the "footprints" and look back. Write an article on the topic of "Footprints".
Test outline
Down to earth, one step at a time. When reviewing questions, we should focus on "footprints", stimulate thinking and expand associations, and the past will surely emerge in front of us. Appropriate modifiers can be added before the "footprint" as the title, such as "father's footprint", "mother's footprint" and "an unforgettable footprint". I can write unforgettable people and things through "footprints", which is enlightening and educating me. Footprints are life. There are many "footprints" around us, and life provides you with rich writing materials.
Conceptual example
1. Think of a sentence by Lu Xun from Footprints: "Hope is nothing, nothing. It's like a road on the ground. In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. "
2. From the size and depth of footprints, we can distinguish the height and thinness of people, which is helpful for public security personnel to catch criminals.
As the saying goes, "one step at a time", so everything should be down-to-earth and opposed to grandiose style.
People will leave footprints when they pass by, so as to think about what kind of history each person should leave in his life.
5. Some people like to follow in the footsteps of their predecessors, which is more stable and risk-free; Some people like to take the road that their predecessors have never taken, cut through thorns and dare to take risks, and create a new road for future generations. In today's era of reform, we should dare to go out of our own way and leave our own footprints of progress.
Ask the students to discuss whether the above ideas are correct and which one is the best.
Comments on the example of "Footprints"
Go back
(Chen Danyong, Class Three, Grade Two)
Go backwards, and time will go backwards with the pace. Don't look back, because everywhere you walk has left your breath. In order not to forget, I will guide you to walk the road (footprint) you walked when you came (see what you left behind) again.
I'm like a dirty dress. When I want to clean it, I have to take everything out of my pocket. They are money, desire, greed and selfishness. Mother washed it with water, which made me see my original appearance bit by bit. It is not time that makes me forget my roots, but things in my body block my original clear vision and make me feel less backward. The language here is not concise enough, but I haven't thought of how to change it yet. I don't want to escape from reality and become a modern Tao Yuanming, but I don't want to be Li Bai who dares to spoil the emperor and take off his shoes. I seem to be submerged and buried by this materialistic society. I'd rather go back to the way I came and wake up my muddy heart for a while with the footprints of history at that time.
On the other hand, I saw Shu Qingchun (Lao She) lying on the unnamed lake. (This is his last footprint) He suffered from the shackles of life-such a choice is a relief for him. I regret it, but I chickened out.
Walking backwards, I saw the bloody body of Cha Haisheng (Haizi) that had been cut off. What a lost soul this is, my heart is aching.
I walked backwards and saw Zhou Shuren, thin, wearing a robe and a cigarette between two yellow fingers. He is writing, "look at the condemned finger coldly, lower your head and be a willing cow." Hiding in the small building into unity, managing his autumn, summer and spring and autumn. I stared at him enviously for a long time.
Walking backwards, I saw Tan Sitong standing on the scaffold with chains in his hand and messy hair, but he shouted, "I want to row my knife into the sky, and I want to save my courage." I am speechless. Perhaps silence is the best mourning for them.
Walking backwards made me understand Lin Zexu, Martin Luther, Du Fu and Su Shi. Walking backwards made me understand how a capitalized person should write. When we are bored, bored, lost and confused, don't look back or retreat. The road we have traveled will temporarily precipitate your uneasy heart.
Walk backwards ―― a silent and colorful road.
Brief comments:
Taking "Footprints" as the topic and "Going Back" as the thinking, this paper shows that the author wants to write his own understanding of footprints by reviewing the deeds of historical figures. But the author did not point out the connection between walking and "footprints" through effective words. At the beginning, middle and end of the article, the author has no obvious words to enter, answer and ask questions, which easily leads to losing points in the exam.
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Father's footprints
The rustling spring rain gradually stopped. It is sprinkled on campus and in my heart. I opened the window of the classroom, and a fragrant smell came to my nose. The water droplets still hanging on the plane leaves are flashing. After the road leading to the school gate was soaked by the spring rain, pedestrians stepped on it, leaving clear footprints. Ah, footprints! The strings of my memory were plucked at once. In the dim light, I seem to see a line of footprints left by my father under the street lamp in Snowy Road. ...
It was two years ago when I was in junior high school. Because my mother died early and my father took care of a large group of our children, the hardships at home can be imagined. But my father is still "ambitious" and tries his best to support me to study in the middle school in the district. You need to bring your own food to school in a town ten miles away from home. Without mom, dad will be responsible for cooking. Father always makes bread and delivers it every Sunday night, because he has to work in the fields during the day.
One day, it snowed, and I looked at the white world, but my heart was uneasy. Today is Sunday. It's the day when Dad brings meals. Every Sunday, I look forward to my father's arrival. Even if he doesn't say anything, as long as we can sit quietly for a while and take a look at my aging father, I will feel warm in my heart. But today, when I think that Dad will trip in the snow, I hope he won't come today. After studying on the ground in fear and trembling, I was caught in the middle by my classmates and walked to the dormitory. Just about to step into the dormitory, I was shocked. A thin old man stood hunched by the door with a bulging bag on his back. "Dad!" I rushed over screaming.
The snow is still falling. Under the eaves, my father's coat was covered with snow. I tried to hold back my tears and helped my father into the dormitory.
"Self-study?" Father's voice is hoarse and weak, but full of infinite love.
"hmm." I should have replied.
I feel this love, so happy that I really want to cry. I took my father's bread and let him rest in my bed for a while. He stood still, took some pocket money out of his pocket and gave it to me, then left in a hurry.
My father is only forty years old, but the wrinkles on his forehead like a staff have recorded all his hardships; His hair has turned gray, and every gray hair records his hard work and ups and downs. It seems that my father arrived when I first attended the self-study class, and he stayed until I attended the self-study class for fear of affecting my study. He didn't wear much clothes. On a snowy night, he was shivering with cold and said to me, "It's not cold." My father just came back after a few steps. He told me that the dish he fried that night was in the top cake, which was my favorite scrambled eggs with green onions. Please eat quickly, it may still be hot. Then, I left without looking back.
Under the dim street lamp, snowflakes are still dancing. I stared at the footprints that gradually extended into the distance in the snow. This footprint is branded on my heart, not printed on the snow. This line of footprints is getting farther and farther. At the end of the footprints, my father's back is getting smaller and smaller. ...
Up to now, my father's footprints are deeply imprinted in my mind.
short review
This paper takes "Footprints" as the topic, facing the campus road, "leaving clear footprints" and "the strings of memory are suddenly plucked." Through Footprints, I wrote my father's "fatherly love" for me, which made me feel this love and I wanted to cry with happiness. This paper describes the inner beauty of the characters-"father's love" through the appearance, movements, demeanor and language of "father" in a delicate style.
The footprints on the road of life are deep.
Huanggang examinee
Life is long, life is long. Looking back on the road of life, every indelible and profound footprint records your ups and downs, every indelible footprint engraves your deep memory, and every indelible step engraves your feelings. ...
Your happiness and happiness are brisk footprints, and your sadness and pain are messy footprints; Your hatred and indignation are heavy footprints. It is precisely because of such a series of different footprints that your life track is worth remembering with your heart and your life track can be remembered forever.
Footprint is a period of history-Genghis Khan conquered Europe and Asia, crossed the hemisphere, and left a "generation of arrogance" footprint; Qin Shihuang left the footprint of "the first king of China" because he unified the Central Plains and connected the Great Wall. The reason why Emperor Taizong left the footprint of "the rule of Zhenguan" was because he was modest in coachable and diligent in government affairs. ...
Footprints are the truth-Madame Curie left footprints of radium because she devoted herself to science. Newton dared to imagine because of "thinking hard", leaving the footprint of "apple falling to the ground"; Edison left the footprint of "electric light" because he was not afraid of setbacks and failures. ...
Footprints are fragments of true love-Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai left "become a butterfly" footprints for love; Jiao Zhong chatted, and Liu Lanzhi left the footprint of "Peacock flying southeast" for love; Romeo and Juliet left a footprint of double suicide for happiness. ...
Because of the footprint of life, we can realize the greatness of our predecessors and the hardship of today; Because of the footprint of life, we can feel the ups and downs of the past and the joys and sorrows of the present; Because of the footprint of life, we can think of the glorious past and the happy life today.
For us, the road to growth is also full of footprints. We don't ask every footprint to write down sweetness and joy, but we ask every footprint to have no regrets; We don't want every footprint to leave happiness and smile, but we hope to be worthy of every footprint; We don't want every footprint to be beautiful and happy, but we also don't want every footprint to be regrettable. ...
Friends, take the first step in life, don't let the road of life be full of regrets, guilt and regret; Take every step of life well, and we will be able to open the floodgate of memory in a watery night in the future, savor the footprints of the past, feel the ups and downs of the past, have deep memories of the past and all kinds of emotions, and you will be satisfied!
Some people say that "footprints are life", while others say that "life is footprints". After reading this article, we will realize that "footprints are history", "footprints are truth" and "footprints are true love" are the results of the author standing on the highland of life, looking up at the track of history and exploring the philosophy of life. After explaining the story, the author issued the call of "taking the first step in life" and "taking every step in life", which was really targeted and enlightening.
The language of the article is smart and beautiful, and it is catchy to read. In particular, the whole sentence such as parallelism is interspersed in the sentence, which embodies the beauty of rhythm and change of language. (Wang Ping, Wang Gengfu)
Leave deep footprints on the road of life.
Huanggang examinee
The bridge used to be strong, but now it has collapsed; Although the road is vicissitudes, it is dilapidated; The street used to be prosperous, but it has been demolished; Although the lane is far away, it is old. The only constant is the deep footprints left in life.
The passage of time has not erased the footprint of the alley, and the wheel of history has not crushed the footprint of life. On the earth, in the sky, in the deep sea ... there are human breath and footprints of life everywhere. The world is changing, and the only witnesses in history are footprints and the essence of life buried in footprints.
Open the floodgate of memory and look back at history, there are countless footprints: on the European continent, Napoleon's footprints swept Europe and shattered feudal forces; In the Atlantic Ocean, Columbus crossed the ocean and discovered the new continent. In the sky, the footprints of the Wright brothers began the journey of human dreams. ...
They're great. History buried their bodies, but their spirit and the footprints of their lives spread. Inspired by their spirit, we are even more impressed by their glorious footprints-it is like a lighthouse on the shore, shining everywhere, guiding us to the other side of victory; It is like countless stars, flashing and never weakening; It is more like a dazzling sun, shining and never weakening.
A person's life is only once. A life with deep footprints is perfect, but it is a pity that there are no footprints. Although history will not change, footprints are a review of life.
On the road of love, why not leave a footprint of dedication like Lei Feng? On the road of struggle, why not leave a trail of struggle like Gorky? On the road of patriotism, why not leave a solid footprint like Qian Xuesen? ..... do this, we will feel at ease, on the road at night, lonely we will not be laughed at by lonely shadows.
Although life is only a short moment, it is also long and rugged. Leaving the footprints of life, we will open the floodgates of memories, spread the wings of imagination and recall us in those days. One day, we will meet in the forest and pick up our brilliant footprints, so that life will not regret; The market is bustling and crowded. Only by picking up our footprints can life be perfect. Blue sea and blue sky, creatures fly, pick up the footprints of our lives, the value of life can be truly realized, and the wishes of life can be truly satisfied.
In that case, why not seize the moment and leave a deep footprint in the process of life?
Focusing on the topic of "deep footprints", the author stands in today's position, scans today's world, looks back at historical figures and looks forward to us in the future, thus warning young people and leaving deep footprints in the course of life. The article is quite profound and skillful in thinking and excavating the meaning of life. In the selection of materials, I boldly used them at all times and all over the world, as long as they conform to the meaning of the text, which showed the surge of the author's literary thinking and the flexibility of his thinking.
Many parallelism sentences are used in the article, which adds momentum to the language and makes the article present magnificent artistic beauty. (Wang Ping, Wang Gengfu)
footprint
The earth is manuscript paper, and footprints are poems. Everyone is writing his own epic with his own footprints.
All roads will have an end, and no end is the footsteps of pioneers.
Wise men walk their own way calmly, leaving footprints for people to comment on; Fools often turn around and listen to others' comments on their footprints, and finally don't know how to step on them.
The road carries footprints, and the footprints extend the road.
Some people's lives are brilliant because they dare to leave footprints where others have never been; Some people's lives are gloomy because they always follow others.
The beauty of footprints lies not in whether they can be put together into exquisite patterns, but in what kind of shore they cross life.
Footprints can be altered, embellished, beautified and even completely worn away, but the life experience connected by footprints remains unchanged.
Being content with walking along the old road may be safe and leisurely, but it is absolutely impossible to be the starting point of a new road.
All roads are derived from footprints, and once footprints are solidified into roads, it is very likely to mislead the footsteps of latecomers.
Most admirable steps are taken from thorns.
Shoes are expensive, footprints are not necessarily expensive.
Going the wrong way is not terrible. It's terrible not to admit that you've gone the wrong way and interpret your footprints as a classic of life.
The muddy the road, the clearer the footprints left; The heavier the load, the deeper the footprint.
The blind follower's mind is full of other people's footprints.